ARSHI SS- INSEPARABLES!! (Chandrika di's B'day Thread...)

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Awesome chapter...thanks for the PM

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

lovely... awesome start ..looking forward to it. ..
plz do pm me ur updates. .eagerly waiting for the future updates. .continue soon

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

awesome and mind blowing story

ASR as DSP wow and khushi is her Gf

but this shayam is there too😡

and now in absence of arnav he try to misbehave with khushi

what his plan and will khushi be safe?

waiting eagely

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aafan

@aafan

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Wonderful story line. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

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leena

@aleena.1884

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

woah... amazing amazing amazing start... loving the concept... its full filmy but i lurrvvv bollywood man.. :D

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

I love the bond all these siblings/friends share. It's like taking care of one another comes naturally to them. Payal-Akash together was a pleasant surprise and this fact only adds to the sweetness of the entire thing.

Their lives have become tangible what with Arnav looking for prooves against Shyam's father and Shyam lusting after ASR's lady love. Shyam seriously needs to learn a lesson for trying to trespass the forbidden territory and after the last scene I cannot wait to see him getting one.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

Edited by sk2405 - 11 years ago

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Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Aarrghh! Let two horn grow on Shyam, let him die out of shame, let him see the world's worst problems and grow a situation for he himself to murder his own, I meant suicide. 😡 😡 😡

He's just so cheap, so disgusting, slime, douche bag and and and a creep, a snake. All sorts of bad names would match him. 😡 😡 😡

It's all the pent up anger I have taken out now for the two updates. Even though I read the first one long back, couldn't comment on that.😭 Now at the end of this second update I'm all riled up. Shyam's a disgusting fellow of the world. 😡

I really really loved Arnav and Khushi's bonding. I mean they are so well connected. I mean not so well, so damn well connected.😳 I really liked that. And then Payal's character, that's a shocker you know? 😲 She was a ego-headed girl? Akash changed her? Wah Wah! You made it so well CC! 👏

And also Khushi and Akash's friendship was cool They were so close that his parents thought they would be a couple?😆 Well now Arnav and Khushi are right? Akash calling Khushi, 'Sweetheart' oh so cuteee. 😆

Now what's going to happen yaar? *biting my nails* Shyam ne Khushi ko akeli mein pakadli.😭 This is so bad, so wrong, so not well. When's Arnav going to come? 😒 I want it to be like Arnav saying 'Yeh tera hero Idhar hain' soon and beat the pulp out of Shyam 😛

I'm waiting for him now.😳

Continue soon CC, after you're free from all your college work obviously. 😉

Loads of love,

yours CC 🤗