Love me till the end. Story of Ragna Update PART 4 on Pg 6

delhigirl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#1
I have never written a story. But Raghav and Kalpi have inspired me to write something. This si my first attempt based on today's episode.
INDEX
PART 1 on page 1
PART 2 on Page 2
PART 3 on Page 3
PART 4 on page 6

Part 1

Throughout the car ride, Raghav kept looking at Kalpana from the rearview mirror. He could sense her hesitancy at his stare, as she turned her eyes away. Dammit, she was his wife and would look at her whenever he wanted. Pakhi felt as if she was not even needed in the car.

As they approached the chawl, Raghav started feeling a sense of loss in his heart, a restlessness for when he will be able to see his Kalpi again. He could not accept her condition of not seeing each other for 1 year. Kalpana stepped out of the car and Raghav followed her. "I cannot live without seeing you again," he muttered.

Kaplana kept walking ahead and did not answer. It irked him that she would not reply. "Stop Kalpi. I am not ready to accept your condition." He admitted forcefully.

"Raghav, you have to understand-

Before she could continue any further, Vitthal's voice boomed at Raghav. "How dare you try to meet my daughter and lead her astray?" He grabbed his collar with both his hands, fire spitting from his eyes. Kalpi was shocked to see her father man-handing Raghav. She did not know what to do. Pakhi was frozen at her spot in the car. Both men looked at each other, one with anger and the other with regret.

Just then Kalpi saw her father about to raise his hands on Raghav and she rushed to stop him. Instead of the hand hitting Raghav, it landed on kalpi's soft cheeks and she yelped in pain.

Immediate shock replaced a burning anger in Raghav's eyes. He took Vitthal's both hands in a tight grip and pushed him back, albeit gently.

"Don't hit her ever again, not even by accident", he hissed through his lips. Vitthal and Kalpi were both stunned at his ferocity. On the side, he saw Neetu smirking and it dawned on Raghav that she had something to do with Vitthals anger.

Without saying another word, he turned and walked away. Pakhi watched him as he got in the car. Sensing that silence would be golden, she kept quiet. Kalpi watched him drive away and Raghav did not look back at her.

Vitthal looked at Kalpi with shame. "How could you sit in the same car with that man! Did you not think of your parents self respect?" Kalpi was reduced to tears. She could not tell her father how much she loved Raghav. Will her parents ever understand her, she thought.

Edited by delhigirl - 11 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

61

Views

13.1k

Users

27

Likes

174

Frequent Posters

AmyChoco thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#2
u shud write more!! yes..silence is golden..hope khi does not talk..just keeps quiet and dont go near Raghav too😉
delhigirl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: amy.r

u shud write more!! yes..silence is golden..hope khi does not talk..just keeps quiet and dont go near Raghav too😉


Thanks.
I will try to add to this. I just do not know how to this on the archive
delhigirl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#4

Thanks. I just can't take anyone randomly punching Raghav any more. These people harbor criminals/murderers in their house and then throw moral judgement at Raghav and his mother
sonia_1 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Nice 👍🏼
Maybe will turn out like this 😊

HappySmiles thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#6
You've never written a story before? Wow..it's really good!! If at the beginning you're so good then I can't wait to read other parts written by you. Awesome, continue soon.😊
Edited by Pookhi - 11 years ago
ifrini thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Send it to PD so they can use this for tomorrow . May be too late.. TheY might have already shot it.. How about when Dumbla gets back scene ..
delhigirl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Pookhi

You've never written a story before? Wow..it's really good!! If at the beginning you're so good then I can't wait to read other parts written by you. Awesome, continue soon.😊



Yes never. I will try to write other parts soon
delhigirl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: ifrini

Send it to PD so they can use this for tomorrow . May be too late.. TheY might have already shot it.. How about when Dumbla gets back scene ..



I have an idea for dumbla and dumbli scenes as well. I will write them soon
Edited by delhigirl - 11 years ago
delhigirl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#10

PART 2

With heavy steps, Kalpana walked up the stairs to her house. Vitthal had whisked away to cool off his anger, with Pakiya following on his footsteps to make sure he was fine. Kalpi slid down on the floor against the wall. Her body felt numb and mind blank. "What will happen when Aai comes back?" she thought. How could she explain this to her? She had to convince Raghav to stay away from her for everyone's peace of mind. Knowing him, she knew it will be a herculean task.

Just that moment Neetu came to her, her voice full of concern. "Now why did your baba need to do that? Couldn't he just think about your feelings even tiny bit. Your Aai - baba have no consideration for you. Your aai has always been supporting my daughter Pakhi". Venom spewed from Neetu's mouth. In a second, Kalpi sensed the falsity in her voice. "Is she playing games with all of us? Pakhi had told her that I was with her, so what did she say to baba to make him so angry?" she mused.

Thoughts swirled in Kalpi's mind. Raghav had said that Kapoors destroyed his mother and family, but she had never asked him the details. What exactly had they done? Was her family even right in harboring them if they had done something so abhorrent that Raghav had sacrificed his love for revenge.

Gauri saw her son walk into the house with repressed anger. Pakhi was tailing behind. Hatred erupted in her heart when she saw Pakhi, which squashed the worry she was feeling for Raghav. How dare she make lunch for her son and take it to the office. Raghav went into his room and slammed the door. Pakhi hastened after him but was stopped by Gauri midway. "Do you think you are very smart? I will never let you get close to my son. Forget me, he will never accept you in his life and I will make sure of that. If you want to live in the castle of your dreams, then go right ahead". Pakhi turned away and went to her room, tears streaming down her face.

She did not know how long she cried but soon enough her eyes were dry. She resolved that she will not let Gauri aunty destroy her married life. After all he had signed the wedding documents in the court with her. She had all the rights as his wife. He may have loved Kalpana but he chose her over his love. He will have to be hers.

Raghav walked restlessly in his room. He could not bear that Kalpi had to face the consequences of his actions. Whether it was to bring Pakhi has his wife or to put sindoor on Kalpi's forehead at the temple; everything was hurting her. Should he tell her the truth? Should he tell her the reality of his marriage? No, he thought, it might put her in a more difficult situation. In his heart he knew that it was only Kalpi who was his wife. He needed to end this revenge sooner than over a one year period. He sat down and started calculating his next moves. He had to finish this quickly.

Edited by delhigirl - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".