AsYa OS ~The Furnished Room ~ - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Happy birthday srija,
May god give u all happiness
I like both ends
You are a good writer dear
Pls update ur ff


aww thanks for the comment! Im glad you liked it! 😃😃

yes I'll be updating soon probably by tomorrow!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: manognasai

Happy Birthday Srija ji (Madame_Noddy)...God bless u.Hope u have a bright future ahead!😃
Awesome OS Sadie...I love O Henry's stories a lot.And u did justice to it!


doing justice to O'Henry is compliment in itself! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i would say classic 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Ok so I thought I do justice to your hard work.
I had read this story before quite a few years back from O henry collections. You did do a well drafted narration to it.
A good writer is capable of drawing the strings of emotions and desperation.
You did that for me.
And for that very reason you efforts are highly commendable.
This is quite a spin. You should be proud.
Much Love
Juliet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Sadie Sadie Sadie😡

What is wrong with you to write something so depressing! Haha I'm sorry but that's kinda my forte 😆😆 I love writing depressing stuff!
I read the happy one first and it was splendid. and then I made a mistake I read the sad one even though I knew I shouldn't have. I don't have any comment on that. Aww I'm so sorry jules!
Please write something witty now will you!
What happened to my Ninja Pony Sadie! Ninja pony got lost somewhere I guess! 🤢🤢
You defiantly need some erotica. I have to get myself to write the rest four soon. you seem to be getting fumbled without any release.😛 FOUR FOUR FOUR FOUR! 😃😃
It was beautiful Darling but sad And yes I loved the happy wala OS. Yaay you liked at least one! 😆😆
Write more!
Love
Juliet😃


Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Ok so I thought I do justice to your hard work. aww you dont have to do that Jules! Your above comment was just fine!

I had read this story before quite a few years back from O henry collections. You did do a well drafted narration to it. Well Im glad i could do that! 😃
A good writer is capable of drawing the strings of emotions and desperation.
You did that for me.
And for that very reason you efforts are highly commendable. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! 😃
This is quite a spin. You should be proud. I really am!
Much Love
Juliet.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Very nice os. Love the happy ending wala part. Confused at sad ending wala part that how zoya died? Pls clear this confusion
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Comments updated on pg1 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was beautiful and I simply loved it great work! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
nice update!!
O.Henry many times leave us hanging!!!
Thanks 4 alternate end

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