zaya os: i trust you!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi people...
i am back with another os...
will be continuing the previous one too... dont worry...
so here you go:

surraiya: tumhari himmat kese hui aaliya... barkat ko thappad maarne ki?
aaliya: mami yeh barkat nahi hai... yeh bobby hai...
zain: bas karo aaliya... bahaut ho gyi tumhari bakwas...
he went and stood beside bobby and kept his hand on her shoulder.. tears welled up aaliya's eyes... zain could see the tears and felt a pain of guilt inside him..
aaliya: zain kam se kam tum toh mujhpe vishwas kro...
zain: shut up aaliya! tumhe kya lga mei apna khoon ka rishta chhod ke tumhare rishte mei padh jaunga? no way aaliya! yeh meri behan hai... and u hv no right to slap her...
aaliya: lekin zain...
zain: shut up aaliya...
aaliya started crying and went to her mamu..
aaliya: mamu aap toh mera vishwas kijiye...
osman: aaliya i trust you... par iska yeh matlab nahi hai ki mei barkat pe vishwas nahi krta...
aaliya: lekin mamu...
zain: shut up aaliya.. bahaut sunn li hum sabne tumhari bakwas...
he walked towards their room and after a while she walked there too...
[hey are you thinking that zain is betraying her? no way! he is zain abdullah... he is not betraying her... aapko toh samajh jaana chahiye tha... chalo aage padho samajh jaoge... aur agar padhna band kiya na toh😡]


*******FLASHBACK*******
zain: i trust you aaliya par hum ab kya karein?
aaliya: mujhe nahi pta zain! meine uss medicine waali se bhi baat ki thi.. par woh keh rhi thi ki woh yaha nahi aayegi.. jab meine usse pic dikhayi toh usne pehchanane se mana kr diya...
zain: so tumhe lagta hai ki barkat ne usko bribe di hai taki woh apna mu na khole...
she got up from his embrace and stood in front of the window...
aaliya: haan zain! u r sooo right... esa zarur ho skta hai...
he came from back and hugged her from back as he rested his head on her shoulder...
aaliya: lekin ab hum kre kya?
zain shook his head meaning to say that he has no idea..
aaliya: hey i have an idea...
zain: kya?
aaliya: zain dekho agar bobby ko pta chala ki tum meri side pe ho toh woh zyaada careful ho jayegi... and then she will not take any more actions... par agar usse yeh lga ki tum uski side pe ho toh shayad se woh tumhare saamne itna careful na rhe...
zain: toh tum kya chahti ho? mei kya karun?
she turned around and looped her arms around his neck...
aaliya: tum kal mere upar chilaoge...
zain: what??? no way!!!
aaliya: zain agar tum ese karoge toh how i reveal bobby's truth?
he grabbed her closer by her waist...
zain: par mei apni princess ke upar nahi chilla skta...
aaliya: plz zain...
she pecked his cheeks lightly... he smiled...
zain: okay but only for u...
he slowly neared her lips and suddenly recieved a sweet slap on his face...
aaliya: chillana hai... kiss nahi krna hai... :)
they both laughed... and then hugged each other...
zain: i love you...
aaliya: i love you too...
*****FLASHBACK ENDS******

to be continued...
thoda unexpected sa tha toh pta hai u r shocked...
hope you liked it...
apni comments aur likes chhod ke zarur jaana...
they meant a lot to me...
aapka ek like mera mood badal skta hai...😛
thanks a lot for reading...
and please comment and like...
thanks a lot..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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too good yaar i loved it
i hope aisa hi ho..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awsm start
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ravinanaik

too good yaar i loved it
i hope aisa hi ho..


sacch mei yaar...
mujhe toh lgta hai yahi hoga...
and u noe wt i was thinking...
maybe zain is going behind the lady who said that buk-buk is not the one who was der..
maybe he wants to confront the lady...
or maybe they are really acting that they are angry wid each other...
or maybe he really is angry...
whatever it is...
lets wait n watch...
thanks a lot...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was superb😊
plz continue it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow loved it yaar
so that was ZaYa's plan
awesome
want to read more
so plz continue soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the start 😳
do continue soon
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Originally posted by: sweetdesire

wow loved it yaar

so that was ZaYa's plan
awesome
want to read more
so plz continue soon



thnx a lot dear...
yeah i know it was a little unexpected...
mujhe lga yeh padhte hi ki zain is not supporting aaliya tum sab band kr doge...
thats why i put a authors note in there too...
thank you sooo much..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey i am back with another part...
since i am on leave today i am updating parts really soon...
its a lucky day for you i guess...
here you go:

zain: kesi thi meri acting?
aaliya: bilkul bakwas...
she said to tease him as she turned around to leave only to be pulled back hard against his chest.. he grabbed her waist and looked into her eyes..
zain: accha lekin tum toh ro rhi thi!
aaliya: haan toh agar mera pyaar mujhe daate toh mei roungi nahi...
zain: hmm.. par aaliya tumne aaj dekha barkat kitna ajeeb sa behave kr rhi thi..
aaliya: matlb?
zain: matlab ki jab barkat apna evil waala smirk de rhi thi..
aaliya: haan meine bhi notice toh kiya hai.. yeh koi nayi baat nahi hai.. woh yeh roz krti h..
zain: haan.. par hum ab kya karein?
aaliya: meine ek detective ko hire krne ki socchi hai..
zain: hmm.. spying and all.. seems like a good idea to me.. chalo theek hai hum ek spy hire krte hai..
they nodded ready for their plan...

days passed the detective collected more and more evidence against barkat.. he collected pictures of her talking to mir khan.. giving him money for his household bills.. he followed her every step... and kept informing zain about it.. on the 5th day aaliya told zain that she saw barkat talking on the phone with mir khan.. she was telling him that aaliya is coming in between his plan so to get her out of the way she has to create some misunderstandings between zain and aaliya... this
zain angrier... on the 7th day he finally decided to reveal barkat's secret...

all of them were sitting in the garden area enjoying their afternoon tea.. suddenly barkat got a call from unknown number... it was zain.. they had downloaded the app of voice modifier so that their voices are not recognized.. barkat picked the phone...
aaliya: hello ma'am i am calling from **** services...
barkat: yes...
aaliya: ma'am can i speak to mr. mir khan please?
barkat: no i am his daughter speaking...
aaliya looked at zain who was hearing the conversation as the phone was on loudspeaker...
aaliya: but your father gave me your number and said that someone named bobby would receive the phone call... are you bobby?
barkat: yes this is bobby mir khan speaking... what is the matter?
zain and aaliya smiled they have collected the extra evidence to reveal bobby's truth... they didnt have any other plan but to buy a new sim and call from that..
aaliya: ma'am that's it we had to do a confirmation phone call... thanks a lot...
she cut the phone call...
barkat: but-
she couldnt complete it and kept down her phone in disgust...

zain and aaliya came in the garden area holding hands.. osman got up and told them to sit down but they refused...
zain: dad humein aapko kuch dikhana hai... aap do minute andar chalenge..

they all walked in and zain switched on the tv.. they all settled at the couch.. zain sat on the sofa while aaliya sat on the edge of it..
osman; kya dikhana hai zain?
zain: ruko toh dad.. yeh dekhiye...

VIDEO
barkat was standing at the mirror and talking to someone on the phone... her face wasnt clear but the voice sure was..
barkat: abbu kaam ho hi gya tha.. par aakhir mei uss zain ne osman ko baccha ke saara plan bigad diya...
after hearing a reply from the other side she continued...
barkat: abbu aap aaliya ki tension mat lijiye... usse pta toh chal gya hai par uspe koi vishwas nahi karega.. bada pyaar ka izhar kiya hai zain abdullah ne... abhi abhi dekh ke aa rhi hoon... he was shouting at aaliya... aap tension mat lo...
VIDEO ENDS...

everyone is shocked except zain and aaliya... barkat pretends to be shocked... zain stands up and walked towards barkat...
zain: kyun kiya tumne yeh sab?
barkat; bhaiyu meine-
he raised his hand to slap her but aaliya stopped him by holding his hand...
aaliya: nahi zain... haath mat uthao...
zain nodded then turned back to barkat... fuming with anger...
zain: agar aage se tumne mujhe bhaiyu bulaya toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...
osman came and stood next to zain and kept a hand on his shoulder...
zain: dad... pehle toh mujhe bh lga ki aaliya ko koi galatfemi hui hai isliye meine ek detective 'iss ladki' ke peeche lagaya... phir dekhiye mujhe kya pta chala...
he raised his phone and showed osman the pictures... osman was hell shocked... surraiya walked in and glared at aaliya... she placed a hand on barkats shoulder while she broke out her crocodile tears..
surraiya: yeh zarur issi ka kiya karaya hoga... issi ne tumhe badhkaya hai zain...
she said pointing towards aaliya...
aaliya: kyun mami... aap barkat pe zain se zyaada vishwas krti hai..?
surraiya got angry and raised her hand to slap aaliya but zain came in front of her and stopped her hand from reaching aaliya's face.. aaliya had closed her eyes scared.. surraiya looked confused...
zain: mom aap ese aaliya pe haath nahi utha skte.. jaanta hoon ki aapko humare nikaah se khushi nahi hai par mei aaliya se pyaar krta hoon... aap uspe haath nahi utha skti..
surraiya: kya jaadu chalaya hai tumne iske upar aaliya..?
zain: mom pls.. mei aapki izzat krta hoon iska matlab yeh nahi ki mei aaliya ki kam izzat krta hoon... aur aap ese uski insult nahi kr skti...
surraiya glared at zain who then stood beside aaliya and held her hand...
zain: dad... YEH LADKI BARKAT NAHI HAI!!! YEH BOBBY HAI!!! BOBBY MIR KHAN.!!!
they whole family was shocked...
zain: NIKAL JAO ABHI KE ABHI!!
barkat then ran towards osman and hugged him..
barkat: abbu..
zain got more angry at this drama and then walked up to her... grabbed her arm and slapped on her face... the whole family was shocked... aaliya ran towards zain to stop him from slapping but was too late.. barkat was shocked...
zain: tum ne kyun kiya yeh sab? pese chahiye the? itna drama... bhaiyu bhabhi ne yeh kiya... bhaiyu bhabhi ne woh kiya... tumhe kya lga humare rishta itna nazuk hai.. kyun khela humare sentiments ke saath?
barkat: bhaiyu aap-
zain: SHUT UP!!! DONT FORCE ME TO SLAP YOU AGAIN!!!
zain turned on the recording they had made of aaliya-barkat call.. everyone was shocked when it ended... barkat had herself claimed that she was bobby mir khan...
zain grabbed barkats arm and threw her out of the house...
zain: agar dubaara tumhe iss ghar ke aas paas bhi dekha toh tum dekh lena..
he closed the door...

to be continued...
i know it was too long and no zaya romance at all..
but promise next chapter lots of zaya romance and kiss.. okay?
sorry if it was too long...
thanks a lot for reading...
do leave ur comments and likes...
thanks a lot...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow love the update dear
so much drama
me loved it
Finally Team ZaYa is successful to throw that boby out
mazza aa gaya
waiting to read more
so do continue soon
take care

Geet

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