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aisha

@aisha.....11110

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Gr8
thnx for the pm
nd update soon:)

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Wow. U r back with a bang. Back to back 3 outstanding chapters. It was so hearfelt to c jalal like this for his jodha and joha trying to lighten up his mood. I loved the dailogues wgen jalal wasraying in mazaar too. I just want to say once again that u r so great with dailogues. One of the best. I am lving this story. Plzzz update soon. Thx for pm.

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#523

wonderful...👍🏼 superb emotions...

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meghajj

@meghajj

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#524

Itni jaldi next chapter ek surprise tha Vaise I luv surprises Toh aise hi surprise karte rahena👍🏼

Thank u for such luvy dovy chapter☺️☺️

U truly deserves a big 🤗

Haye mein mar java unki itni emotional wali hug pe,unki sweet si nok jhok pe...

Fantabulous ss ka super fantabulous chapters👏⭐️

Edited by meghajj - 11 years ago

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Awesome,amazing and beautiful update.
Best hai jee...
My favr8 song u have used,Pallu di...
Love you...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Great to see you back Pallavi.. and that too with 3 updates in such a short span..😃😃

Amazing updates Pallavi!!! Read all three chapters yesterday and loved all of them! Beautifully written dear..and your command over hindi is simply amazing! One really gets the feel of Jo and Jalal talking...and it's a pleasure to read it that way, with perfect dialogues! ❤️😳

Loved all the parts..do update soon!! Waiting to read more!🤗

Edited by baubles - 11 years ago

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sarthshru

@sarthshru

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#527

i wanna see it in the serial..lovey n beautiful scene between jo ja

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...janu...

@...janu...

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#528

keka

plz plz plz update soon

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mandy001

@mandy001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#529

awesome pallavi...read both parts together...

vry emotional nd painful...loved it.

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#530

Last three back to back updates were power-packed and full on superb!!!👏👏👏👏 Loved all three updates to core..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ So heart wrenching and heart tugging.. pallu you write so well yar..😭😭😭😭 I imagined everything in front of my eyes..😛😳😳 Lovely updates...seriously tu writer ban ja..😳👏👏 I loved how Jalal prayed for Jo and confessed all his feelings👏👏👏 it was so so emotional scene.😭😭😭 I loved how Jo was looking for him and finally their eyes met..😳😳 gosh.. it was goose bumps giving update..😃😳😳 Keep it up pallu..⭐️⭐️👏⭐️👏 please update soon!👏👏 and sorry for such bekaar review..🥱