My ff: The Chockopie and the Prince- Ch. 3: The Flashbacks (p. 2)

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Lol had been waiting for PREMNA...LOL AM MISSING CHOCOPIE A LO THESE DAYS..

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beginner46

@beginner46

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Really loved it dear 😃😃😃

Well done👏👏👏

I'm missing my chocopie so much😭😭😭 where is he

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Trisha

@-Trishh-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Wow! The emotions were beautifully displayed and it seemed so professionally done. Just loved it 👏 🤗. Good job !I'm also truly missing our chocopie:( 👏 🤗

Edited by samarth300 - 11 years ago

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edabella

@edabella

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: edabella
Like I said, my ff is not in order & most of it takes place in the future. This particular chapter takes place not long after the birth of Prem & Kalpi's daughter. Prem started liking Kalpi while she was a surrogate for Paakhi & Raghav & Prem ended up delivering their baby. So emotions were running more high w/him during this more drastic time. W/the way the CV's have been portraying him so far on the show, your reaction is understandable 😆.

I just wanna say that Prem actually starts having romantic feeling for Kalpi earlier than this. Sorry, the thing is I made up more amount of Pralpi scenes & a good chunk of them ended up taking place before anyone gets married in my ff so in conclusion the time that Prem falls for Kalpi has been changed & I will see what to do w/Kalpi in terms of when exactly she falls for Prem. Anyways, I basically got into more detail w/my explanation which is located on this page right before chapter 3 in this reply.

Edited by edabella - 11 years ago

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honeykomal

@honeykomal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10152343529609736&set=a.10151944259529736.1073741826.784284735&type=1&relevant_count=1

neeraj malviya aka prem original account...guyss let us kill him now wit mesages tht we die for himm

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sarusmiley

@sarusmiley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

naveena...plz continue ur ff..its very unique n beautiful...u have an awesome writing skills..plz upadate this

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aggarwalrachna

@aggarwalrachna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

superb ff..keep making more and more...😛

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Lovely FF. You have written everything wonderfully. Thanks for sharing such a great story. 😊
I can't believe that I haven't come across this beautiful story before.