Arjun FF : Enigma (ch 24, pg57)

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

😃😃Hey everyone, I am usually a silent reader and suddenly this idea came up to my head...

I hope you all like it, so without further ado I present my first story!

Looking forward to your precious comments!

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PROLOGUE

2 years before:

" Verma, tumhe kya lagta hai? Will this technology work, it looks more of out of a matrix film! Do you think this will actually do it?"

" Kappy, you question too much rather than sorting and understanding... the man I hired for this job... kya tumhe lagta hai ki iss insaan ka degrees sirf alphabet practice ke liye hai?"

" No, Verma... par"

" Par war kuch nahi... I just need a yes.. haan?"

" theek hai haan"

"good, now stop grumbling! waise bhi now you have to go and create a base for me... I heard some new enforcement will start in a year's time, go there"

" Verma why can't you go yourself? I mean we both are working for the same reason, mujhe pehle kyun jaana?"

" Kyunki I happen to be impulsive unlike you... no not that you are a saint... but tum atleast baat karke trust jeet sakti ho... and the way I work... it may create more trouble! and our mission will fail before it starts." Verma laughed.

" theek hai, got it... btw koi khabar regarding him?" Kapoor (often called Kappy by Verma) asked while sorting out the files and checking the details of suspects.

" nahi but ek khabar mili ki again he has destroyed another person's life" Verma sighed.

" another case of ransom, kidnap ya kuc..." "nahi torture and death" Verma cut in and passed a file to Kapoor " iski biwi mar gaya..."

" oh god! bechara, he must be shattered... she was beautiful... kyun maara isko?" said Kapoor while glancing again at the beautiful woman, fair skinned, deer eyes, curly hair and a breathtaking smile

" Cause Kappy he was the only person who almost alone got the amount of info we got together... we are alive, how, we know that... he didn't and thus he lost her... God knows how much he must have suffered" Verma's eyes blurred, recalling the beautiful time of the past.

Kapoor, sensing the shattering voice " chal chai shai peete hai... baad main we will look into this..." in soft voice muttering " this guy reminds me of Samraat.. kaash"

" I head that Kapoor. No need to say in soft voice... waise bhi Samraat nahi hai aur ab hum kuch nahi kar sakte bas ab mujhe uss ACP tak pohochna hai, I need full details of his wife's murder and how much he got to know abt tht guy... is baar Sikandar nahi bachega."

Verma stormed out of the room and Kapoor looked on sadly... Verma calling Kapoor means that Verma needed some time off...

Looking back at that happy couple's picture Kapoor let out a sigh " Don't worry Verma, this man will lead us to the key.. am sure of that and ACP even you will get justice." With that Kapoor also left, leaving behind the file of Mrs. Roshni Rawte, the wife of ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte

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Thank you for reading my story :)

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Any feedback accepted :)

Index

Prologue - pg 1

Character Sketch - pg 1

Chapter 1 & 2 A

Chapter 2B

Chapter 3 A&B

Chapter 4

Chapter 5A

Chapter 5B

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Chapter 12

Chapter 13

Chapter 14

Chapter 15

Chapter 16

Chapter 17

Chapter 18 A

Chapter 18 B - pg 38

Chapter 19 - pg 41

Chapter 20 - page 44

Chapter 21 - pg 47

Chapter 22 - pg 51

Chapter 23 - pg 54

Edited by Armagadon - 10 years ago

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SAKIV

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Posted: 11 years ago

It is good.You started with a bang.We dont't know who they are and what their motive is.Its surely gonna be interesting.They are trying to use Arjun for their mission.Hope it wont be that dangerous.

You are always welcome if start onething by yourself.Keep it up.

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice start.

two people after sikander and planning to use arjun in their mission.

interesting

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Maham

@Mahaali2905

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nyc start
but opposite Arjun
koun pair up hoga ji
roshni, riya or sakshi ya koe nai.

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

very interesting start dear👏

its a really captivating part!

these people will help arjun to seek justice! that's interesting!😃

loved their convo n their understanding😊

this is gonna be a roler-coaster ride type story

very eager to read it

continu soon

plz pm me the updates😊

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello all!

First of all a warm thank you and hugs for your beautiful comments! Sorry I won't be able to give any PMs for the first 2 chapters cause being a newbie I have crossed 10 msg in 24 hours! So sorry but thank you so much for your lovely comments!

@vikaschandra: Thanks a lot dear! Yes, they have targeted Arjun😲, good or bad only time will tell, I think dangerous would be an understatement! And rgdg ur question, you were partially right...😃 But thank you for your support.

@princess_pari: Yup you have got the first part right! I hope I don't disappoint you! Thank you so much 😊

@...Maha-Srk...: Thanks a bunch for your support! Yup you asked the question which will be answered in the next chapter! And below is the character sketch, so now you will get full idea! 😉

@skrafty: Thank you! Yes I will try to update every alternate day if I get good response!😊

@Godly_Affection: Thanks a lot for your comment!!!!😃 Wow you are one of the first person to comment on their bonding! I will try to make this the best and fastest roller coaster possible!!!😆 I hope you will like the following part as well!

@laila 1994: Thank you!😃 Will try sending u PM!!!!

Without much ado following is the character sketch as well as Chapter 1!!!

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(All the characters have same personality hence won't be describing them, just will be adding their names and pictures, however will give a brief intro about the new ones.)

Character Sketch

ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathore - ETF Chief (Mumbai/Delhi)

ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte - 2nd in Command (Mumbai)

Senior Inspector Ayesha Kapoor - Undercover & Ammunitions Expert (Mumbai)

Inspector Chandrakant Patil - Commando (Mumbai)

Shreekant Sen - Technical, Security and IT Expert (Mumbai/Delhi)

Liza D'cruz - Forensic Expert (Mumbai)

Sakshi Anand - Ex-Crime Investigative Reporter, Reporter of ETF (Mumbai)

Karan - Small time dealer/ Arjun's sidekick (will come later in the story)

Simran - Aspiring Actress/ Arjun's sidekick (will come later in the story)

Samraat - Mystery person no.1

Sikandar

Verma - Mystery person no. 2

Extremely impulsive, erratic, possesses a gift of intelligence, advanced technological equipments, sense of humour, a natural actor, hides emotions.

Kapoor - Mystery person no.3

Keen observer, has sharp listening skills, strong intuitions, master of disguise, manipulative, can gain trust easily, understands people

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Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 11 years ago

Prologue seems promising.

I liked it very much.

Continue soon.

& PM me too. I am sending you buddy request.😃

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 1

2 years later:

A young girl in her mid twenties was shocked as she received a letter from the Home Minister to join the ETF.

" Hey Gannu Bappu, meri band bajane thi! Theek tarha goli nahi chala sakti and now join ETF! Crime reporter giri se waise bhi koi nahi date karta, wah ab mujhe straight iss police wala group join karna padega! Ab toh life bhar kunwari rehna padega! Kya deva!"

she said in a single breath staring at her dear pot bellied Ganesh idol at her bedside table, and this was the millionth time that she ranted about her joining letter to ETF.

Walking up to her mirror, looking a her reflection she spoke " Kya hua Sakshi? Darr gayi? Arrey why fear when the Sakshi here? Goli nahi chala sakti toh kya hua... no one in this world can stop you from gathering evidence cause you have all tricks up your sleeve... ETF tujhse nahi, balki tu ETF ko favor kar rahi hai by joining it! And keeping your nautanki aside... this ETF is important..."

With the air of triumph she walked across her clumsy bedroom to find her phone.

" Huh, I'll tell tht minister, theek hai minister, chal tu bhi kya yaad rakhega,I'll join ! chal le le mera favor! But don't give me any favor back, kyunki mujh par ek ehsaan karna, ke koi mujh par koi ehsaan mat karna" she said dramatically pumping up her mini biceps which were merely a small dent in her thin arms.

Well the Gods were also enjoying the show and decided to check her so called dialogue and thus there was an immediate call from the minister!

"oh deva" she fumbled twice as she picked up the phone

" So Miss. Sakshi Anand, kya khayal hai aapka?"

" Ji sir, aapne hume yeh opportunity diya, iss se barkar kya ho sakta hai humare liye, hum kal se join kar rahe hai" Sakshi replied in the most sweet and humble tone possible.

" Very good Sakshi! This was expected from you, waise bhi maine DIG se baat kar li hain, he will see to it that you have no issues out there, chaliye, best of luck, bye"

" Ji, thank you sir, Bye" and the line got cut.

" Dekha meri jalwa Gannu ji! Kaise uss minister ne straight mujhe DIG tak recommend kiya!" she smiled brightly

" Gadhi, teri full plan flop thi, badi ehsaan person, uske saamne toh yes sir, thank you, kya opportunity... yeh bakwaas aur humility kaun dikha raha tha?" the Ganesh Idol seemed to mockingly ask her.

"Ar...arr..arrey... toh kya, humility is the best policiy!" she defended.

"Honesty is the best policy, meri bachchi" the Ganesh idol looked back.

" ok maan gaye mere bhagvaan, chal abhi main sone jaa rahi hoon, kal agar achcha gaya toh ek ke jaga do modak doongi, goodnight gannu ji!"

Saying that she again trekked' back to her clumsy bed and pull the covers over and fell into a blissful sleep.

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Hey Guys! Thank you for reading! 😃

From now on each chapter will have a beginning pic which shows a bit about the chapter!

Hope you all liked it! Will be posting ch 2 soon! 😃

Btw should I go in details about the ETF days or race it towards the main plot?

Any feedback appreciated 😃

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Hey Guys! Here's Chapter 2,

SInce being a newbie I can't post more than 10 posts in 24 hours, hence here i have edited this post so as to my readers get to read the new chapter!

any comments or feedback, pls feel free😊

silent readers, the like button is always there😃

sorry if I have not sent PM to any of my buddies... some prob out here!

@princess_pari: Thanks for being the first commenter! 🥳Yes, taking your advice into thinking, first few chapters will be about ETF life and then comes the plan!

@Godly_Affection: Thank you sooo much! Yup it's Arakshi, though u'll get glimpses of Samyesha, Shriza and l'il bit of Arni. Haan, Sakshi and her dialogues 😆

@Shamsad1607: Am so sorry for not notifying, I'll try my level best! Glad you liked it!😃

@..Maha-Srk...: Yippeee! Someone commented on CS as well! Thanks yaar! Nope Samrat won't be negative, (I'll try my level best😉). Waise bhi for pix, chun chun kar photo liya hai! Hope u'll like this chapter!

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CHAPTER 2

At the ETF office:

" Hey Guys!"

" Oh hi Ayesha! Waise tere wala kaha hai?" Shree smiled as he asked

" Mr. Shreekant Sen!" Ayesha flared back

" Arrey Chotu, amake bacha, maa kali re (help me out, it's maa kali) Shree looked at Chotu.

" Aye, Shree chod na, kuch kaam ki baat kar" Chotu said while having his cup of coffee.

"Isko kya hua?" Ayesha asked , momentarily forgetting that she had intended to show Shree how good she was at shooting.

" How do I know Ayesha?" then muttering slowly " tu khud damn it se nain lada rahi hai par damn it ke saare effects to chotu pe aa raha hai, shotti (truly) chotu and kaam?"

"Kya kaha Shree?" Ayesha asked back with the i just heard you look'.

" Kuch nahi maa!" Shree looked back, " Acha Chotu, Ayesha sahi keh rahi hai, kya hua, muh latak kyun gaya, kahi 11.30 ko apni 12.00 to nahi mil gaya?"

"Nahi!" Chotu squealed back, " Voh kya hai maine abhi Rathore sir ko suna hai ke koi crime reporter join kar raha hai... pata nahi yaar hum sab jawaan aur ache khase hai, woh toh bilkul, budhdha, chasma lagaye hua, walking stick types hoga. Arrey Rathore sir was also giving praises ke this crime reporter ne bohot saare cases ka tip bhi diya, even thought uska job nahi hai... ab itna kaam ke liye koi budhdha hoga na!"

At that precise moment the lights went off

" Udi baba! Ayesha dekh na, mujhe lagta hai Chotu sahi hai, dekh uss budhde ke baare main baat kiya aur light chali gayi!" Shree sighed.

Ayesha smirked at these two's bakwaas! " But theek hai, chalo yeh dono hi to jaan hain team ka, shoot light chali gayi, I hope Rathore sir ke paas extra flashlight hain" she said not exactly realising she spoke the last line pretty loud! But when the two monkeys were still quiet she realised something was wrong, one light came back, so that's good, two they were staring at something as if they never saw before.

"Haila" Chotu exclaimed softly

" Udi baba! Maa Parvati." Shree whispered to the beauty in fornt of him.

Brown black shiny hair flying through which came dancing around till her waist, big doe shaped eyes, filled with curiosity and amusement, a gracious smile which can take breaths away, wearing a simple white top with a dash of color- a red scarf, her small pretty hand filled with bangles of all possible shapes and colors, but what stood out was her warm aura, aura of positivity and happiness, innocence yet mischievous, a smile will come up by just looking at her.

Ayesha felt that a gentle breeze had come into the team.

However humare bechare Choree ko toh laga ki hurricane aur typhoon ki maa aa gayi ho!

As Sakshi walked in with a confident gait, she was taken aback by the shocked faces of one cute curly haired guy who wore big spectacles yet had a slight taste for fashion

" Geek... par cute hai!"

and the other one whom she temporarily named as baby hulk!'

then she looked at the lady giving glares to the other two to come out of the trance... she had an elegant beauty about herself... agar paas se dekhe jaaye to she has a beautiful dusky appearance with soft curls around her hair, an athletic body, beautiful eyes holding a lot of depth and a small smile adorning her gorgeous face.

" Wah! Agar yeh police officer hai to yeh to criminals ke aise hi band bajaaye gi! But yeh inspite of looks to kill... I think she is one tough girl"

Ayesha, thoroughly embarrassed by her peers immediately shook hands with the girl in front, " Hi I am Ayesha Kapoor!"

" Hi, main hu Sakshi , Sakshi Anand, you know the budhdhi crime reporter! Ab main ETF ki hissa hoon!" Ayesha smiled to that comment, taking an instant liking to Sakshi.

And fortunately Chotu snapped out with a red face, poking Shree to react!

" Heh.. main koun hoo? Oh yeh Chotu hai"

" Chotu, really?" she exclaimed as she looked at the wwe sized player in front of her.

" Nahi pura naam Chandrakant Patil, pyaar se hum Chotu bulaate hain" said Shree with a sheepish smile " aur main hoon..."

" Specky Sen! Technical expert and gadget freak, basically he is the IT spine of our entire team" " And I am Liza D'cruz, forensic expert" Chriped Liza with a small wink and a smile.

"Jaani Dushman!" Shree just gave his glares to Liza.

Sakshi was immediately taken in by the relation the two had, akhir time pass ke thori na reporter hain! Inspecting Liza as a beautiful gothic chic accidently stuck in 21st century, Sakshi sure liked the hate love relation the two had! "Hmm in dono ke beech kuch toh pak raha hai... though ab shayad khana jal gaya hai!"

" Hi, I am Sakshi Anand! Toh poori team yaha hai kya?" Sakshi enquired.

" Nahi do aur log hai, Rathore sir aur Arjun sir" Ayesha replied.

" Arjun, you mean the ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte! Wow, bohot kuch sunna hai unke baare main, unke cabin kaha hai?" Sakshi asked.

" Wah Sakshi day one mai marna chahti hain... let me see kya welcome Arjun Sir tumko denge!" Shree thought.

" Kuch kaha tumne?" Sakshi asked

"No Sakshi...I'll lead you to Arjun sir's office" Shree replied.

While walking towards office Sakshi thought about the people she just met... and her sharp eyes didn't miss Ayesha's little smile at the mention of Rathore sir "Wah, yaha to shayad sab ka booking hai!" she smiled as she walked straight into his cabin.

" Wah re Sakshi, bina knocking andar chali gayi... chal... agar zinda ho toh humse mil lena... arrey udhar Mrs. Sameer Kapoor... matlab Rathore sir.. good Sakshi bach jayegi!"

Shree quipped to turn back and see a fuming Ayesha behind him...

"Kuch kaha Shree..."

" Kuch nahi Ayesha, main to hazaar baatien kehta hoon, surprising yeh hai ke tumhe sirf kuch baatein hi sunai deti hai!" before Ayesha could react Shree ran away for "some" computer programming left!

" Kya baat hain Ayesha, aaj tum kaafi naaraz lag rahi hain.." Sameer asked

" Woh kuch nahi sir, bas kabhi kabar Shree aur Chotu ka sar phodne ka iraada hai!" Ayesha smiled

"Acha woh kyun? Aisa kya kehte hai dono?" Sameer showed a genuine concern.

" Arrey sir, aisa kuch nahi... bas woh, Sakshi?" Ayesha fumbled

"Kya hua Sakshi ko?" Sameer asked

" Sir mujhe lagta hain ki Arjun sir ne uski class lena shuru kar diya hai, aap kuch kijiye warna.." Ayesha looked through the glass wall of Arjun's cabin

" Ayesha don't worry, main uss ke liye hi Rawte ke cabin me jaa raha tha! Aur haan, baad main bataana zaroor ke woh dono kya keh rahe the, bye" Sameer said and walked inside Arjun's cabin.

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CHAPTER 2B

Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago