Arjun FF : Enigma (ch 24, pg57)

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Maham

@Mahaali2905

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

So m last guess is ryt sakshi bro pic q nai dia n awesome bhabhi and m speechless dear just superb wonderful u again nailed it with ur brilliant writting skill u r amazing plz wrote a novel on this or also post this story in ur personal blog just love it dear no words evrithing is just perfect either arjun, sameer part ho ya sakshi past brillant hats off, amazing amazing amazing and thx 4 msg.

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Maham

@Mahaali2905

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Yaar meri angrezi n urdu dictionary mai words nai hain mai kea used karun bus khud he woh unsaid words samaj lu dear 😉

Edited by ...Maha-Srk... - 11 years ago

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

That was too fast! ! I saw ch 4 and headed to home & found ch5 in the inbox when logged in! !

Anyways, both chapters were fantastic! !

The banters of SCS & Liza...then Arjun join in out of the blue...and that cute verbalmatch between s-a really hillarious...and the songs...nice choice!

And chapter 5... sakshi's FB ...God! ! Such a happy Time she had with her family... and now she lost her bro! It it that hint! !?

Anyways loved sam's sharp vision to see her pain...&his small soothing gesture...she really needs a brotherly support...

And our Arjun...bechara..missing his friend...and a little ride to his memory land...beautiful dear...keep it up.

P.S. I hope you'll post next chapter till I can post this comment! !

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magati

@magati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

my sweetie... its amazing

god you brought the arjun magic back...

abhi i am also feeling like continuing my works

such an awesomevwriter you are... and you think ki i am good...

i am nothing as compared to you my sweeto sis

continue soon

love you loads...

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

nice story all characters so well defined and then sakshi and arjun their 1'st meet and then what they were thinking was nice
aisha's thoughts and the flashback was nice too
awww sakshi's flashback abt her bro and her family was so sweet they had such a beautiful and lovely bond 🤗
so sweet of sam to comfert sakshi and saying that he will be their for her always 😊
arjun saw sakshi crying and realised that he missed something felt that their is more to her then she shows
who was that someone kidnapped sakshi right 😲
will arjun be able to find her
is sikki behind sakshi and arjun's huanted past ❓
i love thrillers but then there has to be romance as well coz pyaar toh hona hi chahiye so will sakshi and arjun will fall in love and sam and aisha kya unki gaddi aage badegi
pls to add also in ur list and pm me for rest of the updates 😊

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

It is sooo beautiful..

Mind blowing.

Full of suspense.

Funny and full of romance.

U wrote it beautifully.

Just living it.

And u added picture.

That was...

Words failed.

This is ur first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I very much doubt it.

Thank u for giving us such a mind blowing, fabulous, awesome Arakshi story.

A big wala huggy to u..

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

buddy nice post.Full of suspense .I am enjoying it .

plan carefully you need 11 more posts to become groupbie then no limitation for no of posts and pm's.

plan next 11 carefully then over of your newbie days.

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Sakthi

@greensakthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

yep, too emotional but awesome dr!

loved it, the fb was nice.

con soon plz!

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Sakthi

@greensakthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

of 5B:

interesting dr!

nice kidnap, u know? he..he..

con soon!

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

thanks for pm for 5b part
it was nice update arjun angry with sakshi and giving her hard time 😔
sakshi giving nicknames to all 😆
and then bumping into aisha spilling coffee on both of them sam worried to see aisha's cut on her hands and trying to tend her wound sakshi enjoying the scene 😉
arjun thinking sakshi as his mini cartoon 😉😆 chaloo arjun ne sakshi ko mini cartoon kaha per apna toh kahan 😉
sakshi teasing sam 😆
sakshi kidnapped
waiting for arjun and team to realise that she is kidnapped (assuming )
thanks again for pm 😊