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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 238

First I thought its a good bye time reading the tittle but no Lordy has other plans... such a cute start of morning Lady Khushi u r adorable... So there is an outing type thing planned by Lordy...

When Kushi descended down the stairs, the Gupta family stared in disbelief at her for it was impossible to convince their eyes that the exquisite lady on the stairs was their hapless youngest.

Of Cource for they are so used to of seeing a pagal Khushi who don't give a damn how she looks but now in this look they had to be astonished...

Master Shashi teasingly bent down to look under the rim of Kushi's hat and smiled on seeing her face, "Ah, found her! My little Princess."

AWEEE lovely

Hawww the moment Khushi turned into First Lady by dressing Buaji became so mischievous lol pulling her leg and all😆😆😆

Aww Lordy wanted to gift Khushi the whole Jewelry shop but the book lover wanted only books and Lordy bought them for her... love it...
Oh they came to our Inn so that's why it has Lordy's and Lady Khushi's pleasant smell in air. Innkeeper bhaiya didnt tell me anything thats bad. Iced cream nyc Lady Khushi trust me u will love it like I do "picking up a piece of iced creme cake and putting in mouth* *emmm* its delicious ... btw Lordy are u sure u r not into cookery business and u have mill for making silk and clothe for u know perfectly well the recipee of Iced Creme a lord like u knowing it all 👏👏👏... oh so they met with the vegetable girl ohooo our JP's dil wali nyc lol so true Lordy will ask just that.Loved the chapter



Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shass



<font color="#0066CC"><font size="2">read it n loved it as always dear fari-- btw good question even i didn't get it..😕</font>

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shukria Shassy I have yet to read urs dhondnay ka padi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome update..
Arshi nd ram went market together..
Khushi is really happy..
Lovd it..
Thnks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Again Aquiline!! I read your comment and was humbled that you took the time to read my comment and welcomed me on this journey! I've been silently reading this tale that you have so wonderfully written and I must commend your efforts that even after 238 chapters my interest has not faded away. Coming back to the update, I must say that Arnav's 360 degree change in behavior is really admirable. I love how he has become friendly and so attached to little ram. I hope that both Arnav and Khushi will adopt him...he's just too adorable and cute!!! 😳 Loved their date to the inn and how Lord Arnav introduced them to the heavenly delicacy, iced cream!!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Edited by Urvi.S - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: casper

I left you speechless... O Dear Me Did I now ? Was it that good... ? I am glad it makes u happy and that makes me equally Happy...your writes up are such visual treat... it like am seeing them playing in front of me while I am reading them at the same time..

But firstly...thank you for the warm welcome...& to the Comrade am here to stay as long as it last...!! 😃

@Hoope - "Midnight Heath" got illuminated by the "Magic of Fireflies" ---- Mind Blowing!! ...Loved every word of that and that exactly how I saw it...as well... 👏


@Shass Thank you My girl...!! 😛

Now to the Update...!! Aye Aquiline... I loooved the Update...

A tear of joy runs down my face.. If this is any indication to what their future holds .. then so be this... Not only Lordy is going to be one heck of guy he is going to one AWESOME father as well who is going to spoil his lil kids in best way he can... (Why do I get a Feeling Ram will make it to the Castle as a permanent member soon ) who on the earth thought this man would be domesticated as he comes to be... He is willing to LIVE/Love now... and not for anything else but what he feels within... * greedy I am Aquiline I DO desperately WANT to peak in his head right now to see whats going on" 😉

Am sucker of tiny details... and How you give them to me... proud parents of the Girl... I love this Garima of yours.. she is such an awesome lady there is so much of depth in this women... & Shashi... & Buaji are a joy I love, in spite of it they still see their Goddess of Mistress in her...!! Sigh***

"ICED CREAM"... now you would not bring that up just like that would you.. so lets break it down... what do we have...

consumed as snow (womb)with fruit toppings, (baby) it was later created out of more viable ingredients to constitute its rich taste."

"Sugared milk (Shyam - despised by both Arshi) and sweet cream(Anjali,)" or (Arnav Khushi... drumming fingers hmmm)

don't put snow in it any longer. The cream is put in a big bowl and the bowl is placed in a box that is filled with ice and snow from the mountains."

"The box is strong and, when it is shut, the ice remains within without melting for a few hours ( So Far the Baby is Alright now since its under Arnav Care)

a young girl stepped towards the table with a tray on which were three bowls and three silver spoons.( Child born with a silver spoon as they say )

the light vapour of mist ( fumes- Disappearance of the baby) that rose from the white dessert )and the rich red strawberries that had been dipped in honey before being placed on the crest of the white globes of milk and cream.

"Time to put to trial your iced cream!" (hmmm this is tough one --- OOHHH Ohhh ... Kushi being put to Trial for Arnav and Anjali )



Either Arnav & Khushi trying to save the Anjali Child..but will not be able to do so ( If this is a connection to Anjali's dream) or this is something do with Arnav Heart being still cold ... But then the silver spoon does not connect...



😆... U love to wrack my brains...!! Still Pondering will be back to Edit... on this more !!



Rabba ve,
Thank you for your kind appreciative words, dear casper...🤗
And, What an analysis on "Iced Cream"?!!! Im awestruck!!!... I love the way how you have decoded the mystery of sugared milk and sweet cream... and how you have cleverly connected it with the dream of Lady Anjali... Brilliant analysis. Clap
P.S. Your way of decoding reminds me of those decoding posts i used to read in IP Redux during the golden days of IPK... Your way of seeing things is so deep and so different from the view of our regular readers. Im loving this...
P.P.S. Welcome to Arhasia and Welcome to the "Crazy Club of Decoding TBTBR"!!!... we are so happy to have you amongst us. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shass


i didn't want to start a discussion as my hectic schedule wont allow me to keep up.. but since we're talking about it..i wanted to say something.. after listening to his part of the song hp,i'm a little more convinced about his feelings for khushi..


When you're caught in a lie and you've got nothing to hide
When you've got nowhere to run and you've got nothing inside

that part was about his curse though am not sure about how much of it is applicable on his marriage..

It tears right through me, you thought that you knew me
You thought that you knew

that part is for khushi..he says so coz he did try to explain himself after returning the second time after his retirement but she didn't give him a chance..well she didn't give him a chance in general either,she never tried to understand the real him.

I'm not perfect, but I keep trying
'Cause that's what I said I would do from the start
I'm not alive if I'm lonely, so please don't leave
Was it something I said or just my personality?

i loved this part coz its nice to know that even the all mighty, am-so-important general knows that he's not perfect,that he has flaws too but no one understands him esp this one person who he wants to..n its sad that this one person(his wife) who does care,is not so important near him...have a feeling that even she doesn't know the 'real' him.


I'm not perfect, but I keep trying
'Cause that's what I said I would do from the start
I'm not alive if I'm lonely, so please don't leave
Was it something I said or just myself?


such an important verse.. ''i'm not alive if i'm lonely''..
tells what he feels about himself..the dilemma of his life/existence.. he has no1 n this one person that he does want to be with him is also slipping away..

the following line says all about how helpless he feels,obviously coz he did see something(the dance of lordy n khushi),most of all he saw how happy khushi was with him/or how she gave herself to lordy..he sees a hope lost n so pleads this time to her..

but my favorite verse is the last one hp.. he seems so clueless why she'll not choose him..see he can only see n be what he is,thats the only thing he knows to be..he cant understand what others think n how n why..he still doesn't understand what a huge blow he gave to khushi's trust in him when he lied to her..or how disgusting it was for her when he kept hitting on her after her marriage..he's clueless!! clueless not just about the reasons for her decisions..but for understanding ''why n how'' behind his being wrong.. i love this!..so..if someday he does realize what where went wrong..how will he react to it all??😉😛

i know you understand this but just felt like saying..😳😳

Honestly, during the first read, i thought he sang that song keeping Lady Anjali in his mind. But now i know that he was singing the song after witnessing the intimacy between Lordy and Khushi, i think you are right. Though this song perfectly suits Lady Anjali too, but logically speaking, at that moment he must be thinking of his cure who is drifting away from his life... So your explanation perfectly suits the situation... 👍🏼 👏
@ Purple: Yes, he was always aware of that... Remember all those letters he used to write Khushi from the warground?... He always used to mention this... how his heart is all lonely and tormented in this cruel world and how Khushi alone brings the warmth to his heart... I think he was always aware of the void within him and was in a constant quest to fill that up... i guess that's why he asked Khushi to be his HEART"S COMPANION...
@ Pink... actually, i was waiting for this day... the moment he witness the truth of the actual bond shared by the Lordy and Khushi... the bonding of their heart. You are right. He was so confident that Khushi will not say "No" to him, because before Lordy- Khushi marriage he thought Khushi despised Lordy (that's the idea he got from her letters to him), after marriage he thought she was being loyal and submissive to Lordy only because of the "Bond of Marriage"... He never thought that they might share this kind of strong bond with each other's heart and soul... that was a strong blow indeed.
If i compare both the beasts, i'll say that though both have their humanities sleeping inside them in all these years of their cursed lives, i guess Lordy was more lucky to have his FAMILY around to keep himself more sane and more humane... But General, i guess was not blessed with that warmth of a FAMILY for a long time and he was damaged more severe than Lordy. Hence such self centeredness... not even thinking once before betraying his wife or family who has started providing him the warmth of a home of late or betraying the girl (his cure) or her family by making that unacceptable proposal... *sigh* He have a long way to walk on the path of redemption... 😔
Edited by hoopoe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you to all my darling readers and Comrades for your love! I am a little too occupied with college and things, so cannot detail on my pre-note like I could in the last few chapters. But I assure you, I read every one of your comments and I love each one of you, especially those who fearlessly step forward to express what they felt on reading the chapters. Every comment is a resonance of your heart's affection for me and my tale. I am thankful to the Almighty for giving you all as my readers.

The following chapter alongwith many others had been conceived in my mind when characters began to be mercilessly butchered in the script of the show. In response to the many tracks that killed the hopes of the viewers, the potential of the characters and the perfection of a promising script, here is Chapter 239.

Chapter 239: The Dent in the Elite Deportment

While Lord Arnav was treating his wife and Ram to some "iced cream," Lady Manorama and Payal were at one of the elite lady parties in another part of the town. (And no, the two groups are not going to accidently meet in the middle of the town.)

Payal was happy for a single reason: Lady Manorama was wearing the violet gown that Payal had personally embroidered and gifted to her mother-in-law when she had been staying the week in the Village. Except for that single highlight, everything else was very much the same.

While the mother sat gossiping with other women of her age, Payal found herself seated at the end of a circle of pompously dressed young ladies of her age. The girls knew Payal was Lord Akash's wife but they also knew which family she hailed from. The knowledge of the latter diluted the significance of her matrimonial privilege.

The ladies were being handed little snacks, sweets and drinks, and everyone was enjoying the party in the flurry of giggles, gossips and glamorous glee.

A certain group of well-dressed young ladies invited Payal to their circle and Payal graciously accepted the offer. She shared in their casual conversations and even added a thought or two of her own which amused her peers a lot.

One of them, a proud-looking sort, surprisingly liked Payal's ideas, finding them to be calculated and wisely stated. She struck on a dialogue with Payal and gradually the rich girl was certain Payal was a simpleton at heart and would confirm to anything that was true.

But the girl traversed one step too far when she openly expressed her views about Lady Manorama.

"Her dresses are loud and her opinions baseless. I cannot imagine what she has that gives justice to her position."

Payal was shocked on hearing this debacle.

"Truly," another lady put in, "Empty vessels do make a loud voice."

The circle of ladies laughed on this quip, turning Payal's shock to hurt and then to disgust.

"I cannot believe you are talking this way about one who always speaks highly of your circles," Payal looked at them and they stared at her in astonishment for they had hoped she would be joining their side of the parley.

One of the girls, sensing they had upset Payal with their opinion of Lady Manorama, had begun to correct the moment, when Payal interrupted her with her firm but kind voice, "There is a side of Lady Manorama that only few have seen. It is because of her good heart that she let me be wed to her son. She could have easily asserted that her only son should find a wife hailing from a family of prestige and power. But she didn't. Because, as a mother, she valued her son's wishes above her own desires."

The girls were speechless as they listened to Payal, her voice unusually forceful.

"Forgive me if I have hurt any of your feelings," Payal asserted, "But she is my mother by marriage and I will defend her the way I would the mother of my birth."

With that, Payal sweetly excused herself and left for the garden outside to catch a breath of fresh air, away from the dizzying aura of perfumes and the stench of bitter backstabbing.

Seating herself on a wooden bench, the only one in the garden, Payal sighed sadly. It was certain now: she would never be able to feel a sense of belonging with the women her husband's position expected her to be acquainted with.

After spending a few minutes more to her dismayed thoughts, she turned back and headed to the festive hall again. The last thing she wanted her husband worrying over were rumours that his wife always stayed away from parties.

It should be interesting for you to learn that the table of refreshments was located adjacently close to where Payal and the company of young ladies had stood. It cannot be coincidence that Lady Manorama noticed her wineglass was empty and decided to get a refill at the very moment that Payal was with the girls.

Lady Manorama had obtained a refill and was about to return back to her friends when she heard a young lady praise Payal's wise views on a topic.

Snorting in derision, Lady Manorama decided to lag a moment to hear what stupidity of Payal's the blind girls had thought to be wise.

Only she stayed a minute longer, resulting in her overhearing the entire discourse, including the part where she herself was the subject. After Payal had spoken in defence of her mother-in-law, it was a dazed looking Lady Manorama who returned to her friends.

"What happened, Lady Manorama?" asked one of her friends, casually, "You look like you've seen a ghost."

Lady Manorama was still disabled of speech and stood blinking at the air.

Another friend offered to reply for Lady Manorama to the comment made earlier, "Of course! No doubt she's seen a ghost. Or should I say, THE ghost that married her dear son."

A round of laughter erupted post this remark.

All of a sudden, speech returned to her tongue and Lady Manorama looked at the previous speakers icily, "Hello, Hi! A ghost to you, is she? Pray, let me remind you who she really is!"

It was at this precise moment that Payal walked back into the chamber and found her husband's mother in a fury.

"Payal belongs to the Raizada family now and when you refer to her as anything absurd, you tag the whole partakers in the Raizada name by that absurdity."

Open-mouthed, Payal stared in shock as Lady Manorama continued, "This dress you were all in praise of, it is not exported from Paris. I lied. The truth you will not believe either. This gown was worked upon by the hands of none other than Payal herself."

Payal's heart had stopped beating and she pressed her fingers to her forehead, hoping that she not faint.

It was at this point that Lady Manorama looked up and noticed Payal at the doorway.

For a moment, they only stared awkwardly at each other as the crowd of women around them watched in hushed silence.

Lady Manorama was not one who would sell her pride so she addressed Payal thus, "Hello Hi! Just in time, Bruised Beauty. I was reminding our friends here that I am the only one who has legal rights to call you names." Lady Manorama looked around, "For all you lot, she is the wife of the Second Lord and, therewith, the Second Lady of Arhasia. It would be a crime to not bow to her."

Payal paled at the words of Lady Manorama.

Lady Manorama scowled at her, "What are you doing, girl? Is this what I've taught you!" Lady Manorama put her hands on her hips and lifted her head proudly as she told Payal, "Stand erect with your head lifted proud, like so. Can't you see that these women are waiting to respect your presence with a bow?"

Payal didn't need to mirror the poise of her heated mother-in-law. No sooner had the latter's last words been uttered than the entire assembly of gowned women curtseyed in urgent respect, some mumbling curses under their breath for having to bow before a village-bred.

"That's more like it!" mumbled Lady Manorama, sneering at the curtseying assembly, and then she stepped towards Payal who was blocking the doorway in her staggered state, "Don't just stand there, Bruised Beauty. We have wasted enough time here and better speed for the Castle."

Payal had already turned on her heels and obediently sped in the direction of the carriage.

Lady Manorama looked over her shoulder one last time, "You can stop bowing now before you break your backs and curse it on me! Hello Hi, Bye Bye!"

And then, with a lift of her proud head, she strutted off royally for the carriage.


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Posted: 11 years ago
wow the part was awsome .
so sweet of monorama at last she recognised payal.
waiting for next part😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
i sued to always wonder how come the bad man alwayz hears the right thing at the right time... thank god for a change the two main person who deserves to hear it just did so!! awesome...
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a nice update.
Finally payal got the respect she deserved.

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