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@krystel21

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: aishu3003
😊

Originally posted by: So_Naley
It was simply amazing!
I truly hope that your vision comes true and we get something even half as great as this on the show!
I totally thought that this chappy would be depressing coz of the confrontation but surprisingly it was really interesting to see the levels of mania to which Ruhi could stoop down to and this confrontation just made me pity her for the situation she has put herself in...nobody is supposed to be that obssessed !! Dude !! This convo made it clear that she has pretty much crossed all the limits of sanity and now its time for her truth to come out!!

Coming to the best part,the Swaron moments!
I know Simmi,Nil and Rey were there too but all I was concerned about was Swayam's reactions!
And hey!The loverboy was as protective,concerned and shocked as he ought to be in that situation!
It was pure bliss to imagine that situation of Swayam lifting her in his arms and Sharon blushing left right and centre!
And the last scene of Simmi leaving the two lovebirds alone and her convoy with Rey and Nil was hilarious!
Boys will always be boys when it comes to matters of the heart!

All in all it was totally fabulous!
Do update soon!
Looking forward to the actual revelation of Ruhi's reality and Swayam's reactions when he actually finds out the truth! 😊

HAHAHA so my vision didn't come true and we didn't really get this, but we did get something even more amazing and dramatic and fit for a SS reunion, so yay? Haha.

I honestly don't remember what did I start off with when I began to write it, but TBH, sad stuff is not my forte. I can do romance and I can do drama; heck I can even do melodrama, but no depressing stuff. Haha. So the Ruhi stuff turned out to be very dramatic, a bit too dramatic I'd say! I tried to show the evil in Ruhi more than her supposed mental illness, cause I feel that's not been handled well by the CVs. So yeah :)

For me, SS are a perfect blend of intensity, passion, flirting and everything cute. So yeah. And ofc, we all know the extent of Swayam's love for Sharon, and vice versa. It'd be near criminal if I wasn't able to do justice to his character :)

Simmi is my favorite character from the show, and I feel so bad that she gets so less screen space :( Sharon-Simmi and ShaRey and the occasional Simmi-Rey convos are my personal favorite, which is why I included it here, something that stems out of my fantasy, haha!

Thank you for the long comment, means a lot! I have a couple of chapters left and I plan on finishing them by the end of the weekend so that'll be my version of the SS union. :)

Originally posted by: pooja123456
Hope swaron talk it out

They will, but not so soon. Thanks for the comment :)

Originally posted by: fanista
nicely written
i loved how swayam picked her in his arms
and see went all red hehe
update soon

Hahaha yeah, I need light moments in my works, so I try and add them now and then. Thank you so much for the comment :) I plan to update by the weekend :)

Originally posted by: sweet16cash
Your writing does'nt really seem rusty to me like you say on the contrary you wrote pretty well I liked reading your work..😊.
The things I absolutely loved in this update of yours was undoubtedly Swayam's panic and care for Sharon ohhh I've missed it so very much I loved reading every bit of it..😊.
Simmi and Rey's teasing was entertaining to read and so was Simmi's best friend care for Sharon..
It was a very pleasing update..👍🏼.
I can't wait to read the next chapter with Swayam staying back at Sharon's home to take care of her so update it soon..😊.

Haha hey, thanks so much :) Well its rusty. I've written much better stuff than this :(

I mentioned this in another reply, I love the intensity and passion in Swayam's love for Sharon, and that's what I tried to show here :) As for the Simmi-Rey teasing em, well Simmi is my favorite character in the show and I absolutely love the ShaRey and Simmi-Sharon bond, so this is my tribute to my favorite dostis in the show!

I did update the next one, so I hope you liked that! I plan on ending this by the weekend, so fingers crossed!

Originally posted by: cutelove
awesome...update soon

Hey, thanks so much! Hopefully, by the end of the weekend I'd have updated and completed this :)

Originally posted by: bhavz_vrushan
luvd Swayam's concern fr Sharon...
cnt wait to read nxt part...update soon...

Thank you :) The next part is alr up, I plan on finishing this by the weekend!

Originally posted by: -Jasmita-
This was so good.
Beautiful I loved it.
Swayam concern.
Update soon.

Hey Jas, thank you so much for liking this :) I plan on finishing this off by the weekend, so fingers crossed!

Originally posted by: SanskritiS
Amazing start
Loved it
Swaron scenes were blissful
Update soon

Thank you so much :) Hopefully I'll update by the weekend :)

Originally posted by: unishaz
nice start..

Thanks! :)

Originally posted by: swaronlove001
aswom start plzz update soon

Chapter 2 is up, I'm planning on finishing this by the weekend! Thank you :)

Originally posted by: daisydee425
amazing

Oh pshhh :) Thanks!

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@krystel21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

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Originally posted by: Mihi4VruShan
WOAH! Do continue soon!!

Haha thanks so much Mihika! Planning to complete this by the weekend :)

Originally posted by: pooja123456
Do update soon

By the weekend :)

Originally posted by: cutelove
super awesome ..swaron.moments so heart touching...awesme..update soon plz

Awww haha thank you! Hopefully by the weekend :)

Originally posted by: fanista
continueee soon

By the weekenddd :)

Originally posted by: cool.surabhi
Read both parts in one go...
Its awesome... Its So Swaronish...
Can't wait to read further...

Update soon...

-Surabhi

Wait it is SwaRon-ish? Bull's eye! I just hope I did justice to them :) Hopefully will update by the weekend, thanks so much!

Originally posted by: unishaz
nice.

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: Jensenrocks
Wow what amazing writing
Loved both the chapters😊
Please update soon

Ohh pshhh thank you :) Hopefully, by the weekend!

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
loved both parts...
swayam stays overnight to take care of sharon...awww so sweet...
update soon

Awww thank you :)

Originally posted by: SanskritiS
Amazing part
Swayam taking care of Sharon
Love the blanket scene

Thanks! :) Oh you did? Haha that was an okayish scene. I personally loved the waking up scene :)

Originally posted by: sweet16cash
Classy writing I'd say..👍🏼.
I loved your second chapter too very much..
The blanket scene, the concern Swayam shows, Swayam Sharon and friends marathon, them sleeping in each others arms, Kriya's teasing..
I loved every section of your update..
Your writing is simple without any embellishments and I love that keep writing.😊.

Awww that's too kind of you, thank you so much :) It means a lot to me, really :) I hope you like the upcoming updates too!

Originally posted by: Sayaani-Chidiya
Chapter 1 was rather dramatic. Not your fault, that's how Ruhi needs to be dealt😛 I loved chapter 2, very very cute And oye, complete this FF okay?😆

We need to talk man. I believe you have an exam aaj right? And yes, its an SS with max 5 chapters so I'll complete it by the weekend pakka 😆 And thank you!

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
It is just a serene write up...
I just love the way you use the words..

beautiful... :D

Awww thank you so much :) Too kind of you!

Originally posted by: swaronlove001
nic

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: Tan.vish.K
Hey this was an AMAZING piece to read 👏
How did I manage to miss out on this no idea
Both the Chapters were a pleasant read
Especially the second one.. 😳
You are one hell of a writer and would also Love to read more of your stories..
Great going dear 😉
Would love to read ahead
Please do Update soon
Quite eager to read what happens next 😃

Awww thank you so much, really means a lot! Haha I wasn't too happy with it, I haven't written romance in a while. I do plan on updating soonish, like by the weekend! Thank you for your kind words :)

Originally posted by: apy_swaron
Wow wow wow...loved both the chapters..
Tha second one being the best...
Would love to read further... So pls continue...
Update soon...cant wait to read more...

Thank you! I plan on updating by the weekend, so yeah! Means a lot to me :)

Edited by BalamPichkaari - 11 years ago

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@krystel21

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thank you everyone for the wonderful feedback :) It feels good to see that I can still write, given that I haven't dabbled in fiction for a year now! I promise to give an update by the weekend, even if I don't manage to complete it :) Lots of love to you all, and have a wonderful day and weekend xx

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Read the both chapter in one go. Beautifully penned Swaron scene. I loved the blanket scene very much. Awesome job. Do continue soon plz :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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sorry ... i just finish read your other part now... finally swayan and sharon
had spent a lovely time with each other... and in morning kriya had enter and
see the sight she was happy for both swaron... and she could tell them about
rey confession to them... do continue soon and pm me

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