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To all those who don't know, I do tend to write every now and then. Its very random and whimsical, based on who and what inspires me.

I have this long standing connection with Cinevistaas shows, and for some reason, I am always able to predict them correctly. Freaky, I know. I like to think that I'm clairvoyant, and Cinevistaas isn't all that predictable. Yeah yeah, I should stop flattering myself.

Anywho, I'd somehow predicted exactly how would Ruhi make an exit from the show, and to my surprise [or not], it turned out word to word correct. That led to a spark in my head, and long story short, I've been working on my own version of Ruhi's exit, starting from Sharon's 1st asthma attack to Ruhi's exit.

Also, I've not written in nearly a year, so my skills are VERY rusty. Apologies for that! This one was supposed to be an OS but since it turned out kinda long and I only get to work on it in the middle of study breaks, its turning into a Short Story of sorts, and it won't cross 5-6 chapters.

Anywho, this one's to all those who're excited to see Ruhi leave..

Enjoy!


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Chapter 1: Below

Chapter 2: 104700421



PS: For convenience's sake, can we assume that the entire gang knows about her asthma, and Ruhi only finds out during the attack? Thanks!
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Chapter 1



"You've got to pick Sharon, whether you hate me more, or you love your friends more."

Ruhi's words resonated in Sharon's mind as she tried to work on formations for the impending musical, albeit unsuccessfully. Twisting her hair into a messy knot, she took a deep breath and tried to focus on the task at hand.

"Concentrate Sharon, concentrate. The team needs you now, and Rey's promised to take care of Ruhi. You can't lose focus. Concentrate Sharon." muttered Sharon to herself, as she tried to force the unnerving thoughts out of her head. As she turned to pick up her bottle of water, her eyes fell on someone who'd clearly been spying on her all this while.

"Ruhi? What're you doing here?" asked an agitated Sharon.

"Oh nothing, I just thought I'd come here to see how you've been faring. Clearly, I've gotten your knickers in a twist, haven't I?" smirked Ruhi.

Sharon took a deep breath and turned to collect her stuff, pointedly ignoring Ruhi in the process. As she was about to leave the rehearsal hall, Ruhi called out to her.

"Awww, what's the matter Sharon? Now that you've told your best friend to 'handle' me, you're gonna ignore me and walk away? Is that what he told you?"

Sharon stopped dead in her tracks as she turned to face Ruhi, eyes shining with unadulterated fear. "How?! What? Ruhi did you-" spluttered Sharon in shock.

"Sharon, Sharon, Sharon. Haven't you heard the saying that deewaaron key bhi kaan hote hain? And you were talking in the freaking cafeteria. Tsk. And I thought Ms Sharon Rai Prakash, the so called Diva of St Louis actually had some brains on her! Clearly not." replied Ruhi smugly.

Reeling in shock, Sharon was at a loss for words. All she could think to herself was that Ruhi'd cornered her, and there was no way in which she could protect Swayam and save the team. Not knowing what to do, Sharon did something she never thought she'd do in her entire life.

"Ruhi, please. Why are you doing this? We've really not done anything to you! Stop your obsession Ruhi, this is turning into borderline insanity! How low can you stoop to win Swayam? He doesn't love you, he can NEVER love you!" cried Sharon desperately, trying to get Ruhi to understand her fallacies.

Ruhi merely shrugged Sharon's plea as she walked towards her, looking her straight in the eye as she proclaimed, "But that's the catch Sharon, I am MAD! I am madly in love with Swayam, and anyone who comes between the two of us will have to face my wrath. First, it was just you. But since you got your beloved best friend Rey involved in it as well, he's going to have to deal with me too."

Sharon's eyes widened in shock as she took in Ruhi's statement.

"WHAT?! You've got to be joking Ruhi, stop it! You've got an issue with me, lets sort it out with each other! Why are you bringing the team and Rey in this?!"

"Because dill, dosti and dance is VERY important to you, aren't they? Its going to be fun playing with the entire team. Of course, Rey's gonna go down first. I'm debating between pulling out the breaks of his car or-"

"NO! Ruhi you can't do anything of the sort! You're already blackmailing me about the team, and now about Rey too! Stop!" coughed Sharon, as she tried to control her erratic heartbeat and short breaths.

Ruhi smirked with vindictive pleasure as she watched Sharon plead, cough and struggle to breathe. To her, it was as if Christmas had come early, watching Sharon writhe in pain. Her smirk soon turned into a frown when she noticed Sharon desperately ransacking her bag, looking for something which was evidently not on her at the moment. As she tried to figure out the reason behind Sharon's sudden loss of breath, Simmi and Nilesh entered the rehearsal hall.

On taking in the sight in front of her, Simmi rushed to Sharon's side in shock as she tried to calm Sharon down.

"Nil! Hurry, look for Sharon's inhaler in her bag! She's got to have it there! Calm down Sharon, please, you're hurting yourself! Ruhi, what happened here?! She's not had an attack in ages! Nil, what the heck are you doing?! Get the damn inhaler out!" shouted Simmi, as she tried to rub Sharon's back in an attempt to soothe her breathing.

"Its not here Simmi! What do we do?! Lets rush her to the medical room!"

"Nil its 7 PM in the evening, the medical room is closed! Freaking hell! OMG Sharon please, calm down! Stay with me!" shrieked Simmi, as Sharon continued to gasp for air.

"I really don't know Simmi! I came here looking for Swayam and we-"

"OMG NIL! Call Swayam! He always had an extra inhaler on him! There's a chance he still has one on him now! Do it, fast!"

"But why would Swayam have an inhaler for Sharon?" asked Nilesh, as he made a questioning face towards Simmi.

"That's NOT the issue now, just get him here!" screeched Simmi, as she tried to unsuccessfully calm Sharon down.

"Swayam! Yeah listen, Sharon seems to have had an asthma attack, and she doesn't have her inhaler on her. Simmi's asking if you had an inhaler?"

"WHAT?! Sharon's having an attack? How did it happen? Where are you? Where is she? Are you guys with her?" spluttered Swayam, as he spilled water all over himself in shock.

"Rehearsal hall bro, come quickly! It seems like a bad attack, she can't even breathe!" replied a worried Nilesh, as he cut the call.

Swayam dashed over to his locker, opening it with a bang and literally threw all the contents out of it. Rey, who was waiting to talk to him about Kriya's rejection, was shocked to see his demeanor and asked him the reason behind it. Swayam, however, ignored Rey's ministrations as he looked for the inhaler. On finally spotting it lying down right at the back of the locker, he sprinted out of the room towards the rehearsal hall, Rey hot on his trail.


Swayam's heart came into his mouth when he saw Sharon nearly collapsing due to the lack of oxygen in her system. Rey, who was trailing behind him, rushed towards Sharon on seeing her this way and tried to soother her, but to no avail.

"Swayam, get the inhaler! What're you waiting for dammit!" screamed Simmi, as she spotted Swayam frozen in his tracks.

Simmi's voice shook Swayam out of his state of shock as he rushed towards Sharon with the inhaler in his hand. Pulling a nearly comatose Sharon into his arms, he gingerly placed the inhaler into her mouth and carefully pumped the spray, all the while patting her head. Rey and Simmi continued to rub her back while Nilesh had rushed over to pull out the car, so that she could be taken to the local hospital once they'd managed to revive her.

Ruhi, on the other hand, was seething in fury on witnessing the scene play out in front of her. She couldn't fathom for the life of her as to why was her plan backfiring. Swayam was supposed to hate Sharon, not hold her in his arms! Her eyes burned at the sight in front of her and she slinked out of the rehearsal hall in a huff, something which didn't go unnoticed by Rey.

After a long and painful wait of 5 minutes, Sharon took a deep breath and blearily opened her red eyes. Simmi and Rey hugged each other in joy, while Swayam just continued to stare at her, eyes shining with unshed tears.

The first thing that Sharon saw on opening her eyes were Swayam's eyes. His chocolate brown eyes, normally shining in mirth, were now shining with unshed tears, as she felt him stroke her hair. Like always, she lost herself in his chocolaty brown orbs, thanking the Lord for this private moment that she was able to share with him.

"Sharon! You're fine! Thank GOD for that! What had happened?!" gushed Simmi, as she tried to pull Sharon out of Swayam's arms. This seemed to shake the two out of their reverie, as they came to their senses. Swayam, however, crushed Sharon to himself and buried his face in her hair, much to Rey and Simmi's delight and surprise.

"Sharon! What'd happened to you?! How did you get an attack all over again? I thought the asthma had gone! I mean how?! What?!" exclaimed Swayam in an agonized voice.

Sharon pulled away from Swayam and smiled bleakly at him, not knowing what to say. To her luck, however, Ruhi's sudden disappearance had made Rey realise that she'd had something to do with the attack, and stepped in to cover for Sharon.

"Swayam, lets leave all this. First up, we need to take her to the doctor to get her checked. Come on now, Nil's got the car out. Simmi, can you inform the rest of the team that we'll be taking Sharon to the hospital so all rehearsals are cancelled? We'll start it off tomorrow." instructed Rey, as he veered the topic away from dangerous waters.

Swayam stood up with Sharon in his arms, much to Simmi and Rey's amusement. The two shared a look and decided to have some fun with the couple.

"Swayam, Sharon's had an asthma attack. She didn't break her foot. You could put her down you know." remarked Rey with a straight face, as a facial muscle twitched.

"She's ill! I'm not gonna put her down until the doctor tells her she's fit to walk. Lets just go visit the doctor first." replied Swayam pointedly, not wanting to let Sharon out of his sight.

As Swayam walked out with a visibly red Sharon in his arms, Rey and Simmi burst out into laughter and quickly hugged each other before rushing to follow the others to the hospital.

"Sharon, remember to take your medicines on time. I really want to stay over, but there's no one at home tonight and mom wants me back. I'm really sorry!" gushed Simmi, as she placed medicines and water on her bedside table.

"Its alright Simmi! You were there when I needed you the most, and that's all that matters. Kaka's at home anyways, I'll call him if I need anything." replied Sharon gratefully.

"And you actually think you're gonna stay alone? With kaka? And I'm going to let that happen? Really Sharon?" remarked Swayam from the corner of her room, while he continued to fix the loveseat by the window.

Sharon turned towards Swayam in surprise, as her face split into a wide grin on understanding that he'd be staying behind. Swayam chose that moment to turn towards her, and was bowled over by her sheer joy on her face that made her look all the more beautiful.

Simmi smiled to herself as she quietly slipped out of the room, giving the duo the privacy that'd been evading them from a long while. As she shut the door with minimal sound, she turned and bumped into Rey, causing the two of them to squeal in surprise.

"SHUSH! Don't make a sound, lets get out of here! On your tippy toes, mind you!" whispered Simmi aggressively, as she pulled Rey towards the living room.

"Haiiin? Simmi, why're we moving around as if we've come to rob Sharon's house?"

"Seriously, all you boys are such certified idiots." huffed Simmi, as she plonked down on the sofa.

"Me too?" asked Nil in a rather sad voice, as he came out from the kitchen with a bowl of popcorn in his hand.

"Seriously guys? Okay so Nil, we're not staying here for the night cause Swayam's insisting on staying back to take care of her. And THAT is why I dragged you away from the room Rey! Boys!" sighed Simmi, as she picked up her bag and motioned the two to follow her out of the house.

Rey grinned at Simmi as he turned to walk out with the two of them. "Well,", he thought to himself, "At least someone's love story is moving in the right direction!".

Edited by BalamPichkaari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was simply amazing!
I truly hope that your vision comes true and we get something even half as great as this on the show!
I totally thought that this chappy would be depressing coz of the confrontation but surprisingly it was really interesting to see the levels of mania to which Ruhi could stoop down to and this confrontation just made me pity her for the situation she has put herself in...nobody is supposed to be that obssessed !! Dude !! This convo made it clear that she has pretty much crossed all the limits of sanity and now its time for her truth to come out!!

Coming to the best part,the Swaron moments!
I know Simmi,Nil and Rey were there too but all I was concerned about was Swayam's reactions!
And hey!The loverboy was as protective,concerned and shocked as he ought to be in that situation!
It was pure bliss to imagine that situation of Swayam lifting her in his arms and Sharon blushing left right and centre!
And the last scene of Simmi leaving the two lovebirds alone and her convoy with Rey and Nil was hilarious!
Boys will always be boys when it comes to matters of the heart!

All in all it was totally fabulous!
Do update soon!
Looking forward to the actual revelation of Ruhi's reality and Swayam's reactions when he actually finds out the truth! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nicely written
i loved how swayam picked her in his arms
and see went all red hehe
update soon
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Your writing does'nt really seem rusty to me like you say on the contrary you wrote pretty well I liked reading your work..😊.
The things I absolutely loved in this update of yours was undoubtedly Swayam's panic and care for Sharon ohhh I've missed it so very much I loved reading every bit of it..😊.
Simmi and Rey's teasing was entertaining to read and so was Simmi's best friend care for Sharon..
It was a very pleasing update..👍🏼.
I can't wait to read the next chapter with Swayam staying back at Sharon's home to take care of her so update it soon..😊.
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luvd Swayam's concern fr Sharon...
cnt wait to read nxt part...update soon...
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This was so good.
Beautiful I loved it.
Swayam concern.
Update soon.
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Amazing start
Loved it
Swaron scenes were blissful
Update soon
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aswom start plzz update soon
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Thank you for your overwhelming response to Chapter 1 :) I don't have the time to read through and reply to all the msgs, but rest assured I will reply to each and everyone of you personally.

Had a bit of free time between classes and a lot of inspiration, so here's Chapter 2. I am personally not very sure how this turned out since I haven't written romance in eons, so yeah. Likes and comments are appreciated :)

Happy Reading!


Chapter 2



Sharon turned towards her bedside table to pour herself a glass of water, when Swayam rushed over to be by her side.

"Do you need something Sharon? Water? Juice? Are you hungry? Or do you want your inhaler? Should I-"

"I'm fine Swayam! Chill! I'd just wanted some water!" replied Sharon smilingly, while she went on to take a sip of water.

Swayam laughed in relief as he plonked himself down on the bed next to her, gazing adoringly at her disheveled state. "Only Sharon could be this..khoobsurat, while wearing pyjamas and sporting messed up hair. Sigh. I don't think I can ever fall out of love with her, can I?" thought Swayam to himself.

"Anyways Sharon, what triggered the attack again?" asked Swayam quietly.

Ruhi's words repeated themselves in Sharon's mind as the glass slipped out of her limp hands, wetting her blanket. Swayam, who was observing Sharon carefully immediately moved the glass and helped her lie down, realising that there was a major issue that'd been troubling Sharon.

"Okay okay leave it, you don't have to talk about it Sharon. Lets watch some TV?" asked Swayam cheerfully, as he attempted to diffuse the tension in the air.

Sharon regained her composure as she turned towards him with a light smile on her face and nodded faintly. Swayam grinned back at her, and went over to her DVD collection and pulled out a DVD collection of the Friends series to play for her.

"How did you know I wanted to watch Friends?" asked Sharon in surprise.

"Cause that is your comfort show. When you're stressed and upset, you sit down with chocolates and popcorn and marathon Friends. Now I can't let you eat chocolates and popcorn, but I can definitely watch friends with you. Season 2?"

A feeling of warmth engulfed Sharon's entire being as she allowed herself to bask in Swayam's concern for her. She snuggled under the blanket, only to realise that it was damp because of the earlier incident. As she pushed off the blanket to get up to take out another one, she was surprised to see Swayam at the foot of her bed, holding the spare blanket in his hands.

"Looking for something?" smiled Swayam.

Sharon laughed, a hearty laugh which Swayam hadn't heard in a long while. As he helped her pull the blanket on, he couldn't help but realise how much he'd missed Sharon. The way she laughed, the way she flicked her hair, the way she demanded for things to happen the way she liked them. How had he lived all this while without her?!

"Swayam? Swayam!" called Sharon, shaking Swayam out of his daydream.

"Yeah Sharon? Do you need something?" her asked concernedly.

"Actually, my normal blanket is damp and this is the only spare one on me at the moment. I don't want you to catch a chill so how about you share the blanket with me for some time, till the other blanket dries up? I am sure that one would dry up in a couple of hours. Of course, unless you have an issue with it then you can surely do whatever you want, I really don't want to force you to do something you don't want to do." spoke Sharon in a rush, as she looked up at Swayam with hopeful eyes.

"Sharon, calm down! Yes, I'll sit on the bed with you and watch Friends for a while, and when the blanket dries up, I'll take it and crash on the loveseat. Now watch!" laughed Swayam, as he settled down in the bed, maintaining a safe distance from her.

As time passed and night fell, slumber soon overtook Sharon's senses as Friends played in the background. Normally used to having the entire bed to herself, it didn't take long for Sharon to inch closer towards Swayam and grab a fistful of his shirt in her hands. On noticing this, Swayam tried to pry her hands away from his shirt, but to no avail. Sharon seemed to be holding onto his shirt as if it was her lifeline. Finding no other way out, he kept his phone on the bedside table and moved into a comfortable position, lying down next to Sharon as he let sleep overtake him.

Neither of the two realised when did they land up in each other's arms in their sleep. Needless to say, the two of them had the best sleep of their lives that night.

As her alarm rang, Sharon tried to turn towards the source of the sound to turn it off. However, for some reason, she wasn't able to move very much as she seemed to be stuck in the position that she was in. As she struggled in her half asleep state to try and pry herself free from the vice like grip she was being held in, it only got stronger. A disconcerted Sharon finally opened her eyes to a sight she never thought she'd see anytime soon.

Swayam was asleep with an expression of absolute contentment on his face, as if he was having the best sleep of his life. In the middle of the night, it appeared as if Sharon had maneuvered herself to spoon around Swayam as his arms encircled his in a tight grip. Smiling sleepily, Sharon snuggled closer to Swayam, if that was even possible, and went back to sleep.

The sound of his phone buzzing incessantly next to him was enough to put Swayam out of his state of slumber. He was shocked to see Sharon nearly sleeping on top of him, and his arms encircling her. Mentally cursing himself for not moving out of her bed later in the night, he tried to move Sharon, but to no avail.

Responding to Swayam's slightly twitching body, Sharon's eyes fluttered open blearily as her face split into a sleep grin towards Swayam. Bowled over by her dazzling smile, Swayam froze for a minute as his mouth automatically turned up of its own accord and smiled back at her, as if it was the most natural thing in the world.

A loud knock on the door knocked the duo back to their senses as Swayam pulled his hands apart and Sharon rolled off to the other side of the bed. Swayam jumped off the bed as if he'd been electrocuted, and rushed to open the door, only to find Kriya on the other end.

Realising that she'd interrupted a possible private moment between the two, she grinned at them, saying "Erm..morning guys? I thought you'd be awake, but I guess you were busy.. Anyways, I'll be waiting in the living room? Freshen up and we'll have breakfast? I got you guys some pastries from the nearby caf,"

Swayam mumbled an incoherent reply as he rushed into the washroom. Kriya's eyes met with Sharon's, who just buried herself under the blanket in embarrassment. Kriya entered the room laughingly and began to prod Sharon, who poked a very red face out from under the blanket.

"My my, someone's blushing and all huh?! I am so sorry Sharon, did I interrupt the two of you?" asked Kriya cheekily.

"Oh shut up Kriya! Go out and wait, I'll be out in a while!" mumbled Sharon.

Kriya hugged Sharon and chuckled to herself as she walked out of the room to wait for the two of them. She was glad that the two of them were finally making some progress in their relationship. She'd desperately wanted to discuss Rey's confession with Sharon, but she decide d it could wait for a couple more hours. She plonked herself down on the sofa as she flipped through one of the many magazines in Sharon's house as she waited for the two to come out of the room.

Edited by BalamPichkaari - 11 years ago

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