Emotions - ZaYa Drabble

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e m o t i o n s

"What kind of games are you playing?"
"Sometimes I feel like letting you go!"
"Here, I let you go."
"Do I have the permission to talk to your Aalu?"
"Did I disturb you?"
She shuts her eyes close and leans her head back on the chair. He doubts her. He doubts their relationship. He shouldn't. She doesn't want to reach to the final conclusion but she can't help and think... he doesn't trust her.
Aaliya reads the letter in her hand and wonders if this is the right thing to do. She knows it is. There are no two ways about it. They both need space. She is sure about herself. She needs to sort out what she feels and being away from him is probably the best way of doing that. She walks over to the bed and tucks the letter under his pillow, takes a good look at him and then walks out of the bedroom, the house... and then his life.
Heartbreak- this is what it feels like. Unwanted - that is what she feels like. Hurt - that is what she is experiencing right now. Shattered - that is what she looks like.
oOo
He wakes up in the wee hours of the night to find her side of the bed empty. His head is throbbing with pain. "Damn this hangover will be bad!" he thinks before drinking a glass of water. He rests the pillows against the headboard to act as a back support and his eyes fall on the letter. He unfolds it and starts reading.
Zain
I am going to my abbu's house in Bhopal. I think we both need to be away from each other for some time. Please don't come looking for me like you did the last time. I will be gone by the time you wake up. I know you will handle everything at home.
Look after yourself. Don't do something reckless. You will always be in every dua I make.
Aaliya
Zain mercilessly crushes the letter, the fragile piece of paper shredding to pieces as his fingers dig into it. Anger pulsates through his veins as a scream erupts from his throat and he punches the wall in front of him. This isn't how it is supposed to be. No, not at all!
"Does she not love me?" he wonders out loud before collapsing onto the bed as tears make their way down his pale face. Zain Abdullah isn't the one to sit and mope about a situation; but tonight, he cries.
Rejection - this is what it feels like. Unloved - that is what he feels like. Devastation - that is what he is experiencing right now. Broken - that is what he looks like.
oOo

Hello lovelies. Another short piece on ZaYa based on the precap. Wrote this on the suggestion of Nivriti [NocturnalBeing]. I know it is short, but I hope you like it. Do leave your comments and feedback. They always mean a lot 😳

Also for PMs please add Jojo_PMAcct1 and not my personal account, thanks! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES 🤗
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JYO...you know your writting is phenomenal don't you? cause i fall in love with it more after every read, so flawless!😳

and you are tu the BOMB at this writing all this intense stuff. Both Zain and Aaliya's monolouges were a treat to read. Very on point and beautifully written!

The emotions you named for both of them in the drabble are incredibly apt in the current situation...i instantly fell in love with this drabble.

the depth and beauty of it is unmatched and the monologues are so befitting in terms of their feelings...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its beautiful like always.i can imagen those scene.hope u write it a OS then drabble.keep writing.
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Wow
Beautifully written
Me loved it
Keep writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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such an awsome drabble 👍🏼
loved it ❤️
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Once again.. another beautifully written piece.
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Brilliant Jyo Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on Zaya & pm Me!
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I cried when I read this short piece of literature. You explained both of their emotions really well. ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written Drabble 👏
Loved the emotions of ZaYa u presented
Awesome read 😳
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RES...thanks for the Pm Jyo🤗

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