Emotions - ZaYa Drabble - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res :P
-Edited- (hehe finally :P)

As usual, you went beyond my expectations! you managed to write so beautifully in a small number of words! Loved how you ended each scene with their feelings <33 You wrote their emotions so beautifully! it was such a good read <3 and you kept it realistic too, so that was awesome :D actually what am i on about, your OS/TS/drabbles are always realistic, that's why i love your work so much!

you're succchhh a wonderful writer jyo!

PS. short comment hai, i know but drabble hai na is liye there is not much to write about but pakka i'll give you a bigger comment on your OS!😳😆

PPS. My dabba is beautiful, both gifs☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful!
really emoitional!
keep writing and thank you for the pm!
Edited by pinki123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastically written...But is there any way u can turn it into a full fledged OS? plzz think about it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u have beautifully expresses the emotions they were going through, specially the mentioned emotions, u wrote in the last few lines, so true and clear... amazingly written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jyo.. how do you do THIS ?!
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This drabble is just AHMAZZING! like WOW. I loved both the pov's. Awwh. & how you used what they felt in contrast, yet so simliar brilliantly.
I wanted to see flashbacks frm Zain's pov and then cry over what had happened. omygosh.. can't wait for mondaay.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This so well written! Your vocab is amazing dude! 😉 I loved the words your used to describe their emotions and feelings... they made me imagine all this! This is seriously WONDERFUL! 👏 Umm.. I asked you to give me some writing classes, right? 😛 After reading this, I'm sure you're going to be my next teacher 😆
Sorry for this late comment 😳 Actually I was too busy and didn't check IF this weekend! 😃 Thanks for the PM ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jyo this is absolutely beautiful...
You have written it so very beautifully from the characters perspective, amazing.. 👏


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