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vinu

@vinu127

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

res

unres!

kitni baar punchu?

kis cement ki bani ho tum jyo????

each time u write something, it sucks me in!

this one reminded me of one of ur earlier works-Unsaid!

that was till date my fav out of ur works on ZaYa... now this has taken over!

you are a genius when it comes to expressing a character's feeling!

i loved this one to bits!

especially the last 2 lines of each of their POV... it left me numb!

they were the essence of the entire drabble for me!

the depth in their thoughts potrayed, the turmoil of emotions-they was incredible!

Aliya's hurt and Zain's pain could probably not hav been explained better!

thank you for such a lovely piece of work!

Edited by vinu127 - 11 years ago

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Aishah Khan

@Aishahh_24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Short yet sweet! 😳

Another lovely piece of your work Jyo! It was amazing as always.

Totally apt for the current track.😆 Loved how you portrayed Zain and Aaliya's state of minds post the confrontation.

Thanks a lot for the PM 🤗

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sunithi

@sunithi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

its sounds so realistic..beautifully written..thanks fore pm..

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

this was SHORT🤔 maybe in quantity, but def not in teh quality.!

babe u ahve a way with words... I had this friend in GF(one of teh best mind u;)) and i am NOT biased😆😆😆.. a very talented writer... and u remind me of her so damn much!!!

U guys can say soo much in such precise consise language. the few worrds are so impactful that they just jump out and pull u into the writing!⭐️

i can never do that🤢

I could feel each and every emotion u wrote about n imagine Zaya going thru it. it was THAT powerful!!

❤️

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Did i gush too much🤔

koi baat nahi.. even if it felt so ..🤣 next time burai karke hisaab barabar kar lungi *HINT HINTTT*

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Crucio.

@Crucio.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

RESERVED!!

-EDITED-

Jyo, jyo, Jyo!! *I know you know your name -.-*

This was amazing, seriously. <33

Dono ka emotions described so perfectly.

I never knew when the tears escaped my eyes *ya I know, I get emotional on TV couples*

Perfect!! <33

I love you for this🤗

Newsflash : THIS WAS TOOO SHORT!! -.-

*why does everyone write drabbles. People should write LONG HUGE OSes. -_-*

Edited by Jhanvi_TaaRey - 11 years ago

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Aneesha

@Ashis

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

U have very beautifully portrayed zaya emotions in ur drabble...nice work...keep writing

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

wow this was a lovely os

it was so beautifully written

loved it

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dmgomg

@dmgomg

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Loved this! Wish you would continue and elaborate :D Thanks for the PM :)

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Awwwn totally heart wrenching same as episode

Loved it Awosome work

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