ff humari adhoori kahan..chap 3 pg3 25 may

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Tumhare saath hi jau gi!
As soon as zain heard it he grabbed her wrist and and took her with him.
Aliya was hurt seeing him in such turmoil.
Zain:gaari me betho.
Aliya:zain ure drunk...tum betho me drive kar lu gi.
Zain:tum ne suna nhi.
Aliya:plz zid mat kro.
She settled him and begun to drive.
Whole journey was silent with tears flowing out of their eyes.
They reached the house.
Aliya helped zain to come out and took her to the room.
She was about to leave when zain grabbed her wrist n pinned her to the wall.
Zain:tum ne bataya nhi?ye kon se games khel rhi ho mere saath?
Aliya was confused.
Aliya:tum kin games ki baat kr rhe ho mje samajh nhi aarha.
Zain started smirking and was clapping
Zain:waah waah...kitni maasoom hona tum...mje dhoka de ke keh ri ho kon se games.
Aliya couldnt believe her ears.
Aliya:dhoka?
Zain:han dhoka...nikaah mj se hua...or dil tumhara zubbu meatka hai...sharam nhi ai mere saath esa krte huay?ek baar b mere baare me...meri takleef k baare me nhi socha
Aliya:ye tum kia keh rhe ho?takleef...kesi takleef
Zain:wo takleef jo tum ne or is nikaah ne di hai mje...mri zindagi ulat kr rkh di hai...kaash humara kabhi nikaah nhi hota.
Zain faints and aliya catches him...she makes him lay on the bed and breaks down.
Her husband..her love..the man who always stood by her doubted her...he was in pain due to her...she destroyed his life...only aliya cud think of right now was to leave him and return his hapiness to him.

Aliya got up and packed her bag...she was in tears as she kept their nikkah photo in the bag...she looked at the earings which zain gave her ...she kept those safely.she wrote a letter and kept it at zains bedside table.she looked at him ...wiped his tears and carrassed his cheeks...she was shattered thinking that this myt be the last time she is seeing him...she gathered her wits and left...

in morning

Zain wokeup...his head ached...he felt dizzy...he did not find aliya around and got flashbacks of what he said to her..how he manhandled her...he looked around for her only to find a latter on side table.
He reads it:
zain...kal tum ne nashe me mujh se wo kaha...jo shayad tum kabhi na kehte.mjhe nhi lagta tha k tum ab b is nikkah ki wajah se itni takleef me ho.me nhi jaanti ti k me tumhare har dard ki wajah hu.tum esa soch b kese sakte the k me tumhe dhoka dungi?kia tum mje aj b smjh nhi pae. is hi lie main ja ri hu.bhopal,apne abu k ghar,is waqt hum jis haalaat se guzar rhe hain.mje lagta hai k mera tum se door chala jana hi theek hoga.aage allah ki marzi.apna khayal rakhna..me har namaz me dua kru gi k allah tumhe khush rakhe or tumari saari takleefein mje deden.Ab me tumhe is rishte me baandh k nhi rkhugi...agr tumari khushi mujh se alag rehne me hai to wohi sahi.allah hafiz.aaliya

Zain couldnt believe what just happened...
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sweetdesire thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow nice one
So Aliya left
Plz continue soon
Want to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one
do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i am glad u wrote it but plzz don;t end up this spice...plzzz dear continue soon plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awsm os
loved it
very beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chap 2

Zain cud not blv his eyes...his wife...his friend...his love left him.he hurt her.

Zain cud now remember everything he said to her..how he hurt her phisically...he was speechless
Zain:aliya..tum mje chor k kiu chali gyi...

He saw another note beneath a glass of lemonade.it said:zain tumhe hangover hoga...ye pee lena.

Now his tears escaped his eyes...he wanted her back..but how cud he forget how close she is to zubbu...he pretends that he is not affected by her leaving.

In bhopal:
Aliya reached her home and met her parents.
Aliya:aslamulaikum
Shabana n ghulam:w.salam beta.
They hugged her.
Shabana:yun achank.zain kiu nhi aya.
Aliya doesnt knw wht to say.
Aliya:wo busy tha is lie.
Finally she goes to her room and starts unpacking...she cries while keeping her n zains photo on bedside.she is broken.

In mumbai:
Usman:aliya kahan hai
Zain:dad wo...wo bhopal gyi
Usman:kiu...sab kheriyat?
Zain:use phoopa phups ki yaad arhi thi.
Usman:ok
Zain starts hving breakfast and as per routine he asks aliya to pass him the jam.
But the difference was...she was not there...she might not be there again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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eagerly waiting for part 3 . hope zain goes to bhopal to get aaliya back
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww My Zain! Go get her back!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing! I wonder what's going to happen next?
Please update next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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plzzz update soon plzzz...i just loved it

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