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* Unnati *

@* Unnati *

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

Dear Creatives,

A big congratulations to you and your cast and crew for completing 100 episodes successfully. please do convey heartfelt congratulations to the leads for winning the best debut award in Gold awards. All of you deserve all the accolades for entertaining us.

this is to let you know few of our concerns regarding the impending track. Amidst all the disappointments regarding Barkat track and its execution, it seems that there is introduction of another character in the plot. IT is also reported in the media that this character is most likely to be the confidant of your female lead and may instigate the male lead to feel insecure in love. it is also reported that this character may be the probable suitor for Barkat too.

Now as an ardent viewer, I have few questions which I fail to get answers from the reports-

first of all without giving proper closure to the previous track, another character is introduced in anatagonist as well as protagonists lives to serve certain purpose simultaneously. Why this much hurry to entangle very thing to make the plot more complicated?

secondly, there was no effort to take Zain in the loop to reveal Barkat evil intentions. Now it seems writers are ready to break the team of Zain and Aaliya to accommodate her friend to help her. You first put the scenes where it is shown that Zain and Aaliya admit that when they work as a team, they are successful always. But now you are very conveniently forgetting that equation. I guess it suits your convenience at the moment.

Thirdly, Zain character was always shown bit childish, happy go lucky and may be mischievous. But he is not immature individual too as he is recently being projected . He may patience to invest much thinking regarding serious issues in life, but he is not mindless too. We have seen a very mature Zain during Aayat fiasco. If it is so, then why is it being shown that he is shallow enough to put his confession through a silly bet. A man with all his heart and genuine feelings will never do that. It was highly disappointing to see that.

Last but not the least, it is assumed that there is impending jealousy track thanks to introduction of the new character. There is a happiness all around fandom as most of the young viewers believe it will induce passion in the relation, But as a mature individual who belong to a working young professional tv viewing population, I find this absolutely uncalled for. A married man in love does not need to get an wake up call in the form of another man. It may sound very rosy for couples in courtship as it may fuel romance. But in marriage, a third person if induces jealousy and insecurity it takes the relationship for a ride imo. if the situations are not being communicated properly it only brings bitterness and indifference in the marital status. Why is it necessary to introduce a third person to trigger the confession between married couple. That just makes the whole story without any depth.If my tv viewing experience is right, the manifestation of jealousy by Zain will be comical as he is childish, utpatang. But happy go lucky nature is equal to being a joker too? Please do not make Zain one as it may ruin his character completely. If you want to peel off few layers in his character, do that but give him mature treatment and let him handle the entry of the third person more sensibly. It's a request from someone who has invested all this while, in your otherwise brilliantly written show.

sorry if I sound too critical, but these are real concerns which are needed to be communicated to the makers. Hope we get some things to look forward to in the show for the long run. Hope I wont be forced to use the remote, to change the channel at 9.00.

Sincerely,

A disappointed fan

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pinkeye

@pinkeye

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Rubs my eyes, look who is here.

ok now I stop singing the song. 😆

Thanks for posting after so long dear .your post echoes my thoughts regarding the show dear. But I never assumed that its your disappointment which is taking you away from us who love to read your posts. Hope your exams went well and you are enjoying the term break.

Now coming to the post, the beintehaa makers have messed up the original treatment of the show very badly by introducing the Barkat track. They may deny as much as they want , but the scenes, the approach towards charactes, the execution showed they were going like trial and error method. Chalo dekhte hai yeh chalta hai ya nahi, chalo dekhte hai who chalta hai ke nahi. There were no consistency left in any of the characters predominantly to accommodate another antagonist. I guess they were in two minds how to accommodate the new antagonist in the story. Moreover negative feedback to the ott acting of the chosen actor made things worse and they get the flaks from the viewers. then came the assurance of the maker that OLD beintehaa will be back. In other words the maker himself admitted that its not the old show anymore. Like his honesty and humility.

so we all were hoping eagerly to see the damage control and all of a sudden there came the news that another new character will be introduced with two different purpose to serve in both antagonist and protagonist story. I have a sincere question- Why this much hurry to introduce another character when the previous plot is already not going anywhere? I am yet to realise the purpose of barkat track but suddenly this aluu - zubbu track is thrown on my face. How many characters are needed for a single tarck to get closed or get complicated like cob-web? give the proper closure to the MIR Barkat fiasco with whatever logic left in the story. to accommodate them, they made Suraiya one dimensional, Shzia Nafeesa dumb, dumber, dumbest, Zain blinded and insensitive at times and now to make things worst they are busy introducing another character with some other purpose. Please mujhe batao asli story kya thi aur uska purpose kya tha. 😆

I was all for separation track and repeatedly said that it will give me sadistic pleasure. But not at the cost of the character of the leads. Zain is getting ruined each day. I guess with this Zubbu track, they will alter AAliya too along with him. jealouysy track could have easily waited and used post Barkat scenario. I have my doubts as they are incorporating Barkat and ZAin ki jealousy track, it will ultimately reach climax simultaneously and may serve one purpose which I do not want to think about. people who are saying that Zain needs the push , he needs the wake up call and jealousy will induce passion etc etc, I have a question for them- Do you think Zain has the maturity to all of a sudden become sensible and take AAlu Zubbu revealing Barkat true face with clean heart? Oh come on, it is expecting too much from that immature guy as per your belief. That day I will not blame him for not understanding Aaliya's silence at all as she nedds to make effort to things conveyed to him. She may not have the heart to reaveal regarding Barkat ki harkat but she really had the time to convey about meeting Mir and patel firms. In a way, it will only going to get used against her. Abdullahs are way too attached to Barkat to get convinced by third person like zubbu.

After ranting so much, I just want to say that makers are not having any idea how to take the already messed up track and making the characters inconsistent, plots are introduced to test the waters and the episodes looks like discontinuous beads of scenes. It is incoherent amalgamation of scenes jumping from one to the other though entertaining. at the moment it is looking like badly cooked tasteless khichdi with nice tadka. I am still stuck with this as I love the actors and the portrayal of their characters.So please give some attention to all these inconsistencies and do not force me to use my right as an audience.

signing off with another song- Koi lauta de mere beete huye din.

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SunoNa123

@SunoNa123

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

unnz, u here?? 🤗

Im beyond disappointed with the way show is going..

hope the CVs wont land up saying, dekhna hai toh dekha like someone else had said

earlier😆

caught up with some work, will come back later to the post.

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Piya

@piya2025

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

Unnati 🤗 Missed you.
& About the post,Well written & Probably many of us talked about all this some way or the other, in various post.Thus, our concern are the same.Just hope CV's 'd understand us & won't disappoint us further.

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Piya

@piya2025

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: * Unnati *

secondly, there was no effort to take Zain in the loop to reveal Barkat evil intentions. Now it seems writers are ready to break the team of Zain and Aaliya to accommodate her friend to help her. You first put the scenes where it is shown that Zain and Aaliya admit that when they work as a team, they are successful always. But now you are very conveniently forgetting that equation. I guess it suits your convenience at the moment.

Thirdly, Zain character was always shown bit childish, happy go lucky and may be mischievous. But he is not immature individual too as he is recently being projected . He may patience to invest much thinking regarding serious issues in life, but he is not mindless too. We have seen a very mature Zain during Aayat fiasco. If it is so, then why is it being shown that he is shallow enough to put his confession through a silly bet. A man with all his heart and genuine feelings will never do that. It was highly disappointing to see that.

@ Bold-WORD👏

@ Red- Are you listening CV's? That's what We talk about when we say don't compromise on any character,Don't mess them up.The imperfection is what makes them perfectly likable.

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adithyan

@adithyan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Glad to see u back Unnati...

i do agree to u r post

i liked yest epi..it was hilarious...new guy is looking cute...

but

Jealousy tracks r good in daily soaps...it can be fitted into Rizwaan-Aayat story...but as Unnati pointed out ''in marriage, a third person if induces jealousy and insecurity it takes the relationship for a ride imo. if the situations are not being communicated properly it only brings bitterness and indifference in the marital status'' Asli zindagi mein jealousies and insecurities itne funny nahi hoti...

Zain-Aliya ne ek doosre se ek vaada kiya tha...hope creatives usse yaad rakhe...they r not at all communicating properly...saying a cute sorry after an impulsive action that too two times😡...no comments...plz let them communicate properly...why cant Aliya just share her thoughts...Zain can disagree na...

Thr is nothing wrong in running so many parallel tracks togethr ...but do close the loops properly...and plz dont ruin any characters

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Riya Dutta

@RiyaDutta

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: * Unnati *

first of all without giving proper closure to the previous track, another character is introduced in anatagonist as well as protagonists lives to serve certain purpose simultaneously. Why this much hurry to entangle very thing to make the plot more complicated?

secondly, there was no effort to take Zain in the loop to reveal Barkat evil intentions. Now it seems writers are ready to break the team of Zain and Aaliya to accommodate her friend to help her. You first put the scenes where it is shown that Zain and Aaliya admit that when they work as a team, they are successful always. But now you are very conveniently forgetting that equation. I guess it suits your convenience at the moment.

Thirdly, Zain character was always shown bit childish, happy go lucky and may be mischievous. But he is not immature individual too as he is recently being projected . He may patience to invest much thinking regarding serious issues in life, but he is not mindless too. We have seen a very mature Zain during Aayat fiasco. If it is so, then why is it being shown that he is shallow enough to put his confession through a silly bet. A man with all his heart and genuine feelings will never do that. It was highly disappointing to see that.

Hey Unnati 😳 glad to see u again😃

@bold: Exactly my point...wats the rush to show so many tracks together at a time which is leading to a lot of disconnect, confusion and inconsistency...things would have more interesting if they would have taken step-by-step measures and untangled the loops and layers...now its all a hugely complicated track with lots of open loops and threads.

@red bold: Words...DITTO...in all these Zain is totally out of loop...n then CVs broke their Vaada to each other by making Aliya not keeping Zain in loop and to make the matter worse they have introduced a new character to totally distract Zain and make him jealous..while Aaliya and her friend solves the Bakbak fiasco as a team...I am seriously?

why Zain is being reduced to an over-protective brother n an over-jealous hubby wen bakbak fiasco soon gonna un-cover...how can we expect Zain to trust Aaliya on D day wen things get worse n Aaliya might need his support at that crucial point...cummon that time I wont blame Zain if he doesnt stand for Aaliya...is this he way u develop trust by hiding things frm ur hubby/wife!!!😕

@bold blue: M with u on this...Zain proposing to Aliya or vice versa bcoz of a challenge or being instigated by a third person...is a total NO NO for me!!!

LOLss...ma post looking like Zain ke satrangi cloths 🤣🤣🤣

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SunoNa123

@SunoNa123

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

M even tired cribbing 🤣🤣🤣

Riya, piya o re piya, adhityan agree completely 👍🏼

Mujhe bus mera old BI lautado , get back Zain on loop, keep zaya as a team..

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Sudharsan

@-Sud-

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

I agree with a post !!

Very nice letter !!! Hope CVs read this

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Sunshine

@SunShine_A

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Hey

Good points and glad to hear your views after really long. As for introduction of new character I really think it is to end Barkat's track and that may not be via teaming up of Zubair and Aaliya but Zubair acting as a catalyst maybe coz wherever ZaYa tean worked it was never agaibst someine from family. Zain had invested all his faith and trust in Aaliya but now situation is different, its Zain's sister we are talking about whom he met after 18 long years, who has faced a heinous childhood and was unaware about love of family and parents. He's very sensitive taking her and its natural for him to be over protective and he has not himself seen anything which would trigger his mind. So, Zubair could be just one reason for Zain to believe that what Aaliya said had truth to it, he would help Aaliya to make Zain see things and later ZaYa team can dispose her off. Zain has transformed into a good son and brother but is yet to be a husband and lover. He showed maturity in Aayat track but wasn't it different and he had a different person there?? You act differently in different situations with different persons, sometimes mature person acts so childish that you fail to fathom and vice versa and here Zain is yet to mature with Aaliya, yet to understand her and Zain is not deeply in love, he may think but its on very early blossoming stage. Zain was a person who never believed in love, commitment and marriage and now he's getting into it so overnight expecting a transformation and deep, intense feelings is really silly. You'll hv those immature traits of Zain within him and they would be seen in all decisions n actions of his concerning Aaliya.

And lastly jealousy, while I agree what you said about married couple but disagree on equating with Zain Aaliya marriage. And though people hav different outlook towards the track but that doesn't make one grp immature n other mature, perceptions vary. People are looking forward to this track coz they want to see Zain's side about Aaliya. Right from starting Aaliya had to fight with Zain's player image, his past and all his relations in past but never was Zain shown facing same and how it would be for him to see someone else knowing his wife better, being closer to her than you ever had. And I didn't get how can Aaliya and Zain marriage be equated with regular marriages, its not, yes they are married but are not regular married couple. They are more like a couple in courtship who hv feelings for each other and are in process of exploring and understanding each other where they do feel a right but not sure if thats right to feel that way. And in the process u meet some one who knows ur love better and introduces u to a new side will bound to inflict jealousy, a sense of insecurity.

I for one really looking forward to this track, if maturely handled then can do wonders for story and I do not think I belong to immature group who want track only to see some cozy shots, am seeing it as a development in ZaYa relation

Edited by SunShine_A - 11 years ago

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