A poem I wrote on JAJ - take a look :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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my poem- it sucks but still posting it here :)

Far from a magical land, carresed by the waves of destiny,
weaving her way through the fabric of life, she waited with a bated breath
there came finally a day when the angel himself stumbled upon death
as he found her, she gave him life,
hope to get back to his future wife,
to the place that was his..
compelled by loneliness, she finds him again, thinking his place as hers,
making his world as hers,
taking his pain as hers,
sharing his happiness and hers,
slowly, enjoying life as partners,
friends they are, her name is jeannie,
she calls him juju,
he loves it, when she calls him,
her voice sweet like that of cuckoo
Far from a magical land, carressed by the waves of destiny,
weaving her way through the fabric of life, she found a friend, a world she can call hers..
he found a friend too, in her annoying little self, a world that revolved around hers
Far from a magical land, carresed by the waves of destiny,
jeannie met her juju, in a world that's not hers
but together they found a world of love that's only theirs.


Pathetic poem, I know.. my poetic skills r below avg.. but had to write this. wrote a poem after an year I guess.. but dint take me long to pen this down, hope it makes sense to ya guys.
thnx for reading⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hayeee Allah walahi its awesome and so deep 👏

cant stop drooling , OMM OMM , its the BEST 👍🏼
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AWEEE SO NICE DEEP HEART TOUCHED .. PRIYA 👍🏼
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priyam ap mahan ho each word was so beautiful
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Originally posted by: -Have.a.dream-

hayeee Allah walahi its awesome and so deep 👏

cant stop drooling , OMM OMM , its the BEST 👍🏼



thank u thanks so muchh sumii mmuuaahhh🤗❤️ glad ya liked😳
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Originally posted by: aps..

AWEEE SO NICE DEEP HEART TOUCHED .. PRIYA 👍🏼




thanks so muchh yarrr🤗❤️ glad ya liked😳

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Originally posted by: menamithu

priyam ap mahan ho each word was so beautiful



aweee
thank u thanks so muchh yarr🤗ahh it was nt that great but my best ya😳❤️ glad ya liked😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing poem
so true
keep writing poems like this
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thank u😊
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Originally posted by: --Shamoo--

amazing poem

so true
keep writing poems like this



thank u so muchh yar! sure.😳

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