Ek aur Tajmahal...!(kabhi FF) chapter 2

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Hi friends since you all know i am starting an ff on kabhi with a slight change.
Please read ut below and if you like it.then only i will continue this.
Please also tell me if you want pm or not. As i am nervous with the change and i know many wont be accepting it.

I also wanna seek this opportunity and tell that beautifully broken is completed so incase ypu want to board out of my buddy request please feel free to do so. As i want to pm only them who reads my story.

Thanks a lot
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😳CAST

Starring:


Aadi Kapoor - Karan singh Grover
Aria Sarin - Surbhi Jyoti



Avantika Rathod - Ketki Kadam


Akanksha - Neha laxmi iyer


Rajbeer - Rajbeer😡



Uday - Vishal Nayak



Rajbeer- Rajbeer




Vishal Rajput - Mohit sehgal



Vismaya - krystle dsouza


Bhaisahab/ BALRAJ - Vaquar shaikh

{Padmavathi - Shalini kapoor

Kaushalya - Vidya sinha

Radhika - Farhina Parvez Jarimari

Malvika - Archana Taide

Purab - vikrant massey

Ajinkya - Arjun bijlani}

sorry pics will be uploaded later😳


list will be added with time...😳
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INDEX

CHAPTER 1 BELOW

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READ THE CHAPTER AND DO LEAVE YOU YOUR REVIEW.
I WILL CONTIUE ONY IF I GET A GOOD START.
THANKS😳


CHAPTER 1

WHEN THUNDERS MEET...prologue

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On the street of Bhopal, employees for Kapoor Technicals, Uday and Rajbeer , are hanging out and trash talking about Sarin's. Sarin's and Kapoors came to Bhopal few years back. Being in same profession of construction they bound to develop rivalry between them. No one how did it started but, local people blame the piece of land near the badi dargah popular known as vishal bhavan, it happens like this, this property is called as gold fish because of its value and place in the market. Everyone knows who ever have this land will posses kuber ka khazana for life time. And like every other builders even this gold fish attracted Sarin's And Kapoor's eye balls; thus the big battle started.

"you should have seen their faces uday. It was not a smart move to play against us. Poor them, now must be grieving somewhere in their light aired villa." Rajbeer made a funny face predicting their situation at this minute.

"what made them thought they could win so easily against us. We work of sarin's and we never lose." He gave a prude smile with his eyes raised in honor.

Uday worked for sarin's in their accounting department while Rajbeer is a part of production. Apart from wonderful creative an logical brains, they had the biggest flaw in them. They are such a hip shooter and in spite of it their loyalty towards sarin, cannot be challenged. They were the best in their field and one of the most trust worthy people for sarin's.

"Hey watch there bro, a hot chick" rajbeer called it an ill mannered way pointing at two girls walking in professional black skirt, like some nasty illiterate and not a civilized worker.

"oooh lalala..." uday made a gibberish sound and showing his tongue in air they tried to disturb the girls.

"oh hello madam" rajbeer called out them barricading their way in a cocky accent.

The girls stopped and moved back but got banged against uday. " hey beauties, mind? If I drop you two somewhere?" he tried to sound sexy but it really gave a bad taste to their mouths.

"n...no we will manage on our own. Thank you." The other girl looked at them with those jeering eyes making uday instantly bite his jaw for control. As she is about to step further uday holds one of the two arm and pull her to him. " think you are too smart for your buttocks" he remarked them with stolid face.

Rajbeer laughed at the girls as they were on the verge of crying and one by one tears started to fall from their eyes but they kept quite just hoping to lord to send someone for help.

"hey no one will dare to stop us. So just don't bother to strain your self sweeties" rajbeer tried to push himself on the girl , trying to touch them in offensive manner. While amidst the girl franatically tried to hold their bags which were slipping from their shoulder in struggle.

"hey babies, is this bag bothering you two. Let me handle it for you." Uday took the bag of their shoulder, but before he could have thrown it one of the girl amongst two quickly hold it from other side, and now the tug and war between the evil souls and innocent , worried scared girls started. Just when they thought they will win , the handle broke and the bag fell on floor, revealing everything hidden inside.

"oops!" rajbeer squeak wolfish.

The girls stared at the identities that were mixed in dust with wide open eyes, and soon they could they tried to snatch the id, making uday and rajbeer suspicious about them. They pulled their Id from their hand and read their names.

"oh my ass! So we have caught a rival fish here." They laughed out together playing with their hair and clothes.

"ms, Akanksha thakur, and Ms. Avantika Rathod, hey nice names hun!" they teased and girls clutched their hand tight afraid with any mishaps by them.

"look at her Uday" he pointed at the fair skinny blue eyes girl, " Akaksha right?" he kissed in air; " by the clothes they have worn I must have understood it earlier. Her clothes makes her look like hooker." He added and laughed while akansha bited her lips and started to cry with the humiliation she was facing. People came and passed but no one tried to question boys. After all they were sarin's mens; who wanted to face difficult death?

Uday and Rajbeer kept on humiliating the poor girls and they kept quite in fear . Finally they got the chance and they ran away leaving their belonging with uday and rajbeer. Avantika dropped her phone too on floor , while running; which was now ringing with the name AADI'

Uday ran behind them to a distance, after that they let the girls go. They made their fun for a while till uday got a message from his team. Informing about the concert that has started.

"avani my dear, what happened?" avantika ran straight to her room, followed by vishal and his wife vismaya.

"avani, talk to your bhabhi beta. Tell us what happened?" vismaya knocked the door to avani's room , pleading her to open and talk.

"avani?" vishal called out, knocking on door.

A minute later avantika turns the knob and walks away from door. Vishal tries to get in but vismaya holds him behind; " let me talk to her, she will be more comfortable to share what happened with me than you. Please" she requested him and he agreed letting vismaya go in.

"avani" vismaya entered carefully scanning room for avantika and she spots her next to bed on floor she looks disturb and scared.

Vismaya quickly sits next to avantika and pats her head to calm her down, feeling care and concern avantika quickly burries herself in her bhabhi's arm. And she starts saying everyting what had occurred with her in the market. After listening to everything, vismaya's blood boils up and taking Avani's hand in her's she pulls her to her brother, narrating everything to him as well.

"this time they had taken too far" he spits anger; " how dare they touch my sister?" his hands fixed in fist and eyes changing its color to red, his anger was quite evident with his purple face, he would have blown their heads if he had a gun right now!

"ramsen! Call bhairaja. We have to do abhishek of devi maiya with sarin's blood" he says and he picks up his gun hanging on the wall and with that taking few of his man's with him he drove his car away.

In the charity event for astha women's center.

" boys and girls, the much awaited performance of the day is here. So may I ask for a huge round of applause for the final performance for the evening by...uh uh uh...you watch it yourself."

"Banjar Ret hai, Zameen Banjar hai

Banjar asmaan, Ye ghar Banjar hai."

A girl in 22 age runs with a guitar from crowd to the stage , her hair is open she is wearing jeans and a white tops, designer bracelets anklets and colorful bangles of plastics on her one hand while other hand has a string of colourful rings.

As soon as she reaches the top, she turns with a sharp you and audiences are left stunned by experiencing her radiant beauty around sparkling around them.

"Aria aria aria!" people started to cheer for the girl standing on stage and she waved her hand to all and smiled at everyone with a wink.


Banjar Ret Hai Zameen Banjar Hai
Banjar Aasmaan Yeh Ghar Banjar Hai
Banjar Dil Yeh, Yeh Nain Banjar
Banjar Nain Ke Aaason Banjar Hai
Is Bajar Seher Se Dil Mein Dundhu Mein Gile Mithi Kaa Manjar...

she played guitar again and everyone around the stage , started to dance bounce and clap with the rhythm. She played more feisty and complicated notes and every mouth was busy either praising or awing at her talent.

Just when she is about to start the high notes, Uday and rajbeer enters. She watches them coming from the corner of her eyes, her lips showed a wry smile and eyes blasted with explosion for unknown reasons.

She sighns someone from back stage for something and she starts to walk to them herself. Uday and rajbeer sets and dust their clothes in enthusiasm watching her coming to them.

( Banjaar Lamhaa Hai Waqt Banjar Hai
Banjar Waqt See Yeh Raat Banjar Hai )... (2)
Banjar Raat Khwaab Banjar
Chand Taaronn Ka Saath Banjar Hai

She continues singing and walks to them as she is only mere inches from them she offers her hand to hold. The cocky boys , assuming her to melt in their charm they walks like a blind behind her. They tried to hold her hand but she tossed them and made them to follow her. She guided them to wards the stage and when they were there she hinted at someone and music turned off playing a series of clips on projectors.

The clips on the projector rolled making everyone gasp and groan in anger. It was the scene where they were disturbing avantika and akanksha and few were the same sought of scene they played with other girls. The reel stopped and everyone turned their head to uday and rajbeer in disgust.

"bol, what should we do now of you?" she says using a funny gabbar tone from sholay.

Uday and rajbeer looked down to their feet afraid of everything that can happen to them.

Uday shivered in fear thinking about what aria had in her mind, just when he stopped thinking he felt a sharp burn on his cheeks, he opened his eyes to meet one of the girl who he had abused lately and then the sequence only started and girls dragged him and rajbeer to corner , giving him slaps after slaps while here, aria started her singing once again.

Is Bajar Seher Se Dil Mein Dundhu Mein Gile Miithi Kaa Manjar... (2)

Hooo Ho Oo Manjar

Banjar Reth Banjar Zameeno Ki Is Daur Mein
Banjar Maan Banjar Dhadkano Ke Is Shor Mein
Banjar Ehsaas Mein Banjar Saaason Mein
Ek Safar Zaruri Banta Hai Jo Dilo Ki Dum See Chalta Hai... (2)

The song again was stopped abruptly with the screech sound of cars outside the entrance of the event. Only a few minutes later, several mens entered the room where the concert is stopped, the crowd is teared and in walks Vishal with his best mens. His eye lays on uday and rajbeer , who were distraught and girls were still slapping them with sandles and chapals.

A satisfy smile speared on vishal lips on seeing uday's ad rajbeer's condition , this was exactly what he wanted to do to them. But why would his enemy would do something for them? He wonders

Aria enjoyed thechanging color of vishal rajput and the respect she could see with confusion worked like a amusement tonic for her.

She smiled and finished what was left for the show. The show ended and police enetered to take udaya nd rajbeer with them. She dusted her clothes and walked up to the cops smiling teasingly at uday and rajbeer.

"if hookers are those who wear a skirt or a short than you two are definitely pimp and sarin's donot keep pimps in under their shelter. You two are fired. Get lost and never show me your faces." She clicks her fingers in challenge and cops nods to her with a smile, pulling the faint bofy of both to the door.

Aria turns to exit after bidding bye to her friends and crews. She starts walking to her car but spots Vishal waiting for her and his car is crossed to her's.

"welcoming me?" she asks raising brow and a sarcastic smiles.

"no, I just want few answers from you." Vishal says with a smile.

"shoot" she rubs the back of her neck in tiredness.

"why did you help avantika and akanksha, they are rajputs you knew it still?" he asked squeezing his brow.

"they are womens, and that's more important to me then any IANS" she speaks out yawning and the smile; " and by the I had fun kicking their asses" she points at jeep where cops are taking uday and rajbeer.

"you know what." Vishal smiles in amused taking his glasses off from his nose ; " if you were'nt bhaisahab's enemy's daughter. You truly would be our daughter in law" he completes impressed by her fearless and brave qualities.

Aria smiles walking up to her car's door she opens and sits in. igniting her car to drive off after a reverse take, she halts her car just in front of vishal.

She slides glasses of car down and winking at him she continues, " but I am Aria Shah Sarin, and you shouldn't forget that mr. Vishal rajput" she chuckles and putting glasses on her nose she drives of, leaving vishal amused behind who watches as she gets disappeared, "kuch to baat hai tum me, garv bhi or ghamand bhi. Ek pal me dushmani yaad dila gai" he smiles nodding his head in No.



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PLEASE LEAVE YOUR REVIEWS😳

please dont copy my script plot or story with out my permission. this story their characters belongs to me only.

Edited by -TIARA - 11 years ago
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and who was going to inform us...
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res
unres
wonderful start tia...
wt a fab entry of aria...
garv b hai n ghamand b... nice one ...
aadi ki entry nahi ki only naam liya in todays update...
continue soon dear...

p.s... naam bohat mushkil hai... i vl try to manage...
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Originally posted by: aarzoo50

and who was going to inform us...

baby...its under construction
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Should I really need to res here???
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Originally posted by: aksasya

Should I really need to res here???

aisa kyu puching 😭
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Originally posted by: -TIARA

baby...its under construction


aur menw bhoonchal la diya. lol
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Originally posted by: aarzoo50


aur menw bhoonchal la diya. lol

matlab 😕

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