Sandhir Drabble: Battle of Sentiments

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@AnatomyAddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Anuradha

@federized2210

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Posted: 11 years ago

Pari baby!!!! I was just quickly glancing through the forum when my eyes landed on this!

And u don't know what this was???

Let me tell u...It was an exceptional piece of art!! How well u write :D

Btw I thought u didn't know much hindi...!!!

But that poem was perfect for this story!! It fits RD so well!!!!

It's from a bolly film, no? Amitabh Bachchan wala I guess🤔

Loved it so much!!!!

Do write drabbles like this and keep SanDhirians happy!!!

Love u sis❤️

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-Cascade-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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A drabble by Pari, ne? I thought that this would be awesome after reading it, I would say that it is beyond any praise.
Words like enticing and bewitcing can never justify this drabble cause it is deserves much more. It was enthralling ans magnificent.
It really amazes me how the entire story revolves around a piece of paper yet apty describes both SanDhir.
I admire how you have perfectly portrayed Randhir and Sanyukta with their real essence just the way they are.
This OS is a marvellous and refined piece of finery which have have penned down beautifully.
I really wonder why I haven't come accross any of your works but after reading this I have became a fan of yours.
I'm looking forward to read more of your stories...

--With love
Kajal

Edited by --ScarletRed-- - 11 years ago

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: federized2210
Pari baby!!!! I was just quickly glancing through the forum when my eyes landed on this!
And u don't know what this was???

Let me tell u...It was an exceptional piece of art!! How well u write :D
Okay! When an experienced writer like you tells an amateur like me this (^^)... You die out of happiness! My heart just fluttered... 😆😆 And that is a sign of worry😉

Btw I thought u didn't know much hindi...!!!

But that poem was perfect for this story!! It fits RD so well!!!!
I don't know hindi! I searched up the lyrics translation on google🤣 I try sometimes😆

It's from a bolly film, no? Amitabh Bachchan wala I guess🤔
Yepies... It's called Silsila😃... but I only know this song bcos of Lata Mangeshkar!😳

Loved it so much!!!!

Do write drabbles like this and keep SanDhirians happy!!!

Love u sis❤️

I love you moreee Anu (didi😆)

I am overwhelmed that you liked this drabble! How I heart you for this comment😳

Love you!

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

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Posted: 11 years ago

RESWA xP

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Yet the representative of women's right had planted an unknown seed of sentiments in his fertile mind... And this seed was rapidly nurturing, burrowing its roots further and further deeply in to him, ruffling and shackling all his barriers and facades.

^This, Pari, is what you write when you're at your best. Trust me, this line BEST expresses Randhir. Couldn't have asked for something better. :)

And worst still, there was no-one who could help him, offer advice, a few words of consolation... Like you would listen anyways! Came the snide remark from his brain.

^So fitting. I could actually visualise him thinking this to himself and then speaking about not listening and giving a sad smirk. <3

"I don't know what is worst, her being oblivious about my turmoil or her not giving a damn! Even though you are here, you are not here"

^Out of the world. Absolutely! What were you high on while writing this rey? This is PERFECTION. Beauty at its best. And I'm sure this line is where the entire drabble is concentrated.

You're a brilliant writer. <3 I love your works! Count me in as a pankha and I swear I'd be a loyal one! xD ;)

Edited by Reminiscence - 11 years ago

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Aryana

@Drama_Writer

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Posted: 11 years ago

Pari!!!!!!!!!!! First off, yay! So happy! I'm reading a piece written by you for the first time! And believe me, I can't imagine an Aus import like you making such a wonderful use of Hindi in your drabble!!!! Thoroughly in love with it!❤️👏

I loved the way you weave your drabble around emotions that would otherwise go untold in the show. The poem soulfully touches and sums up the whole meaning for the two of them so well!

Can't believe that my little doc-in-making is a fleetingly wonderous writer!

Keep writing more drabbles like this, and I swear I'll be a happy girl!

Love,

Aryana😳

PS: Now I know what exactly to look for on this forum whenever I get pissed cause of the show!

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

W*F.

I am Killing you.

Are you crazy ending it there?

I want a continuation.

Just make it a TS of drabbles or maybe a whole series.

I dunno.

But I, the HITLER, want a continuation.

Baaki sab was perfect.

Isnt that why Imma asking for a continuation xP

^^This para...'the representative of women's right'. LOL.

UPDATE

ASAP.

~Tanya

PS. Short comment. but u dint inform me in advance :/ So bhugto sazaa xP

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

O, tu badan hai main hoon chhaaya
Tu na ho to main kahan hoon
Mujhe pyaar karne waale
Tu jahan hai main vahan hoon
Hamein milna hi tha hamdam
Issi raah pe nikalte

Yeh Kahaaa aa gaye hum? Tere saath saath chalte!

PM business is bliss, you made me realize that meri RI!! :*
Amma and Baba Are eternal Lovers Friends Sisters and wachos! Aren't they!?

That Quote!!

"Your emotions are the slaves to your thoughts, and you are the slave to your emotions."

Aiyo! Why am I being defined in it??

I never use quotes when I write, SO next time you are choosing one for me! Pweej? Though I get confused how to use quotes for Oses with songs! xP

Best Till Date! Well we have SO many drabble writers here with different storylines Don't we? But this one (not cause of the Dedication) Touched me!

The grip of language! Amma you have so profusely grown! I can't even...!
You had me all! You nailed it! The concept and the use of paints and that darn poem! Haye That Poem!

Can I ask You something?

Agar Tum hoti apne Baba ki padosi toh kaise hota? Toh kaise hota?

Thank God that Our Tastes Match Otherwise I couldn't have been as much overwhelmed as I am right now! How I wish we could sing this and Lag jaa Gale together in our absurd voice, ruining yet enjoying the song! Why is Australia not two minutes from my hose! X(Well the comparison isn't ending here! Me loves you more than you love me! End of discussion!

You have started having open endings as well meri Shaitaan ki khaala! I love you for that though!
I love the end the MOST! :* Tussi yeh lo Mera ❤️

Admirable piece of art! Dekha kara diya na comment eggjams ke beech!

Paas Ayiye ke hum nahi aayenge baar baar! Is that the reason of me getting this Dedication? Me a buffoon so you need to tell me pweej! Sowwy!

You are getting your Lagjaa Gale Soonish! Before I update my cliffhanger story!

Tumse milkar (virtually though) aisa laga tumse milkar!

I want to meet you really! By the way the ones who don't know the Proximity *ahem* of Baba and Amma! They are missing out something too astounding!

Aaja Gale lag jaa!🤗

And yeah! Loads of Chocolates are kept for you, only if you reach here on time!

Teri aur Sirf Teri

BaBa!

Muskurane ki wajah tu ho! Jiya jaye na jaye na jaye na, orey amma re! ☺️

P.S.--No errors baby! You are too perfect! :*

P.P.S.--I love you MORE! xP

P.P.S-If you call this flattery then Moi not talking to my Amma! Hmph!

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Unknown

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --ScarletRed--
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A drabble by Pari, ne? I thought that this would be awesome after reading it, I would say that it is beyond any praise.
Naaw Man! When a writer like you says something like this to an amateur like me... I fainted!

Words like enticing and bewitcing can never justify this drabble cause it is deserves much more. It was enthralling ans magnificent.

Yeps! I fainted again!!! Thank You sooo much!😳

It really amazes me how the entire story revolves around a piece of paper yet apty describes both SanDhir.

I like to write random things I guess😆

I admire how you have perfectly portrayed Randhir and Sanyukta with their real essence just the way they are.
This OS is a marvellous and refined piece of finery which have have penned down beautifully.
I really wonder why I haven't come accross any of your works but after reading this I have became a fan of yours.

Yep! It's positive... I am going to get diabetes at such a young age! How sweet can someone get!😳😳... Thank You very very much Kajal!

I'm looking forward to read more of your stories...
Actually I am eagerly looking forward to yours!!! Please update sooon!!! Pretty Please😳

--With love
Kajal