Sandhir Drabble: Battle of Sentiments - Page 2

Originally posted by: Reminiscence

RESWA xP

-UNRES-

Yet the representative of women's right had planted an unknown seed of sentiments in his fertile mind... And this seed was rapidly nurturing, burrowing its roots further and further deeply in to him, ruffling and shackling all his barriers and facades.

^This, Pari, is what you write when you're at your best. Trust me, this line BEST expresses Randhir. Couldn't have asked for something better. :)

Naaaw!!!! You are tooo good at flattering me!!! Thank you sooo much Rini😳

And worst still, there was no-one who could help him, offer advice, a few words of consolation... Like you would listen anyways! Came the snide remark from his brain.

^So fitting. I could actually visualise him thinking this to himself and then speaking about not listening and giving a sad smirk. <3

OMgeee!!! I visualized him the same way! With that smirk trying to hide the emotions in his eyes! twinning😆

"I don't know what is worst, her being oblivious about my turmoil or her not giving a damn! Even though you are here, you are not here"

^Out of the world. Absolutely! What were you high on while writing this rey? This is PERFECTION. Beauty at its best. And I'm sure this line is where the entire drabble is concentrated.

"PERFECTION" I think not... Just a line that thought fitted in this drabble! I tried to connect it with the "agar tum hoti" part from the poem... I thought it made sense!

You're a brilliant writer. <3 I love your works! Count me in as a pankha and I swear I'd be a loyal one! xD ;)

Naaaw!!!! My fan!?!? Lady I am toh your fan only! Thanks for the makhaan😆

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

nice one...

Originally posted by: BeLi3Ve

hehehehe res xP

Originally posted by: Drama_Writer

Pari!!!!!!!!!!! First off, yay! So happy! I'm reading a piece written by you for the first time!

And you are happy?!?!!? Really!?!??! For this torture?!?!? Naaaw! Thanks for the maska😃

And believe me, I can't imagine an Aus import like you making such a wonderful use of Hindi in your drabble!!!!

Hold your horses! I would like to say Thanks to google baba for the translation of the lyrics!😆😆... I can only understand the very basics of hindi and can manage to speak it, but not without adding English or Gujju words though🤣

Thoroughly in love with it!❤️👏

I loved the way you weave your drabble around emotions that would otherwise go untold in the show. The poem soulfully touches and sums up the whole meaning for the two of them so well!

Naaaw!!! Thank You meri Mechanic Rajkumari! You are tooo sweeet😳

Can't believe that my little doc-in-making is a fleetingly wonderous writer!

Hahhahahaha... I shall stick to medicine😆

Keep writing more drabbles like this, and I swear I'll be a happy girl!

Love,

Aryana😳

PS: Now I know what exactly to look for on this forum whenever I get pissed cause of the show!

Faints out of excitement... re-reads... Faints again! Why you gotta be soo darn sweet for?!!😳

Okayy first of all this is sooo not a Drabble! Dribbles are supposed to be rushed pieces of writing that might not make sense at times!!

Originally posted by: TashaForever

W*F.

I am Killing you.

*runs away from Tanya*

Are you crazy ending it there?

I want a continuation.

Just make it a TS of drabbles or maybe a whole series.

I dunno.

But I, the HITLER, want a continuation.

Hmmm... THE HITLER!? Don't you think people have already had enough torture by me?! And you want me to continue this? Urr, no thank you! I treasure my life too much😆

Baaki sab was perfect.

Isnt that why Imma asking for a continuation xP

Yet the representative of women's right had planted an unknown seed of sentiments in his fertile mind... And this seed was rapidly nurturing, burrowing its roots further and further deeply in to him, ruffling and shackling all his barriers and facades.

^^This para...'the representative of women's right'. LOL.

Thank You! 😳

UPDATE

ASAP.

🤣... Exams kyon dega?

~Tanya

PS. Short comment. but u dint inform me in advance :/ So bhugto sazaa xP

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

I shall be honest.. I was already giggling and smiling like a buffoon when I read, "BeyondWords"😆😳

O, tu badan hai main hoon chhaaya
Tu na ho to main kahan hoon
Mujhe pyaar karne waale
Tu jahan hai main vahan hoon
Hamein milna hi tha hamdam
Issi raah pe nikalte

Yeh Kahaaa aa gaye hum? Tere saath saath chalte!

Yeps! That is the one!! I thought to this drabble, when you asked for other random songs... And I was listening to this one at the same time! Sooo the penny just dropped😆

PM business is bliss, you made me realize that meri RI!! :*

That is sooo true!! We should do it more often😉

Amma and Baba Are eternal Lovers Friends Sisters and wachos! Aren't they!?

Wackos isn't enough to categorize what we are...🤣

That Quote!!

"Your emotions are the slaves to your thoughts, and you are the slave to your emotions."

Aiyo! Why am I being defined in it??

I never use quotes when I write, SO next time you are choosing one for me! Pweej? Though I get confused how to use quotes for Oses with songs! xP

Sowwwies!!! I shall keep that in mind next time... I shall make sure no disappointments next time! I shall try😆... Damn it!

Best Till Date! Well we have SO many drabble writers here with different storylines Don't we? But this one (not cause of the Dedication) Touched me!

Maska?😆 (reads all of the comment)... Sowwy Sowwy, tere pyaaar😆

The grip of language! Amma you have so profusely grown! I can't even...!
You had me all! You nailed it! The concept and the use of paints and that darn poem! Haye That Poem!

I am melting... (imagine how donkey said it in Shrek)... Literally kya khaa ke aati hai tu!?!? How can one person be soo darn sweetu?!😳❤️

Can I ask You something?

Agar Tum hoti apne Baba ki padosi toh kaise hota? Toh kaise hota?

Toh aise hota ke... Our parents would question our sexuality🤣

Thank God that Our Tastes Match Otherwise I couldn't have been as much overwhelmed as I am right now! How I wish we could sing this and Lag jaa Gale together in our absurd voice, ruining yet enjoying the song! Why is Australia not two minutes from my hose! X(

Omgeee!!! how did you know I have an absurd voice? Know me tooo welll!!! Hahahhahaha, you are overwhelmed? Who are you and what have to done to my baba?😆... Babes! How I wish I could just walk to your place and then we could eat chocolates together🤣

Well the comparison isn't ending here! Me loves you more than you love me! End of discussion!

Nooo!!! This is only the start! Wait and watch... I heart you waaay moreee!!!!

You have started having open endings as well meri Shaitaan ki khaala! I love you for that though!

Hehehhee... Sau toh hoon! Actually it's open-ended b'cos honestly I couldn't think of an ending🤣... SO, my laziness took over and I ended it there😆
I love the end the MOST! :* Tussi yeh lo Mera ❤️

And I thought I already had your ❤️ ... 🥺... Loool!! Taken and not giving it back😈

Admirable piece of art! Dekha kara diya na comment eggjams ke beech!

You had to comment! My love is too strong for you to ignore...😆... I am getting lamer by the passing day😆

Paas Ayiye ke hum nahi aayenge baar baar! Is that the reason of me getting this Dedication? Me a buffoon so you need to tell me pweej! Sowwy!

I already did😃

You are getting your Lagjaa Gale Soonish! Before I update my cliffhanger story!

Yaaay!!! Partaaay timee!!!🥳🤗.. Before June starts pleaajjj?!?!?

Tumse milkar (virtually though) aisa laga tumse milkar!

Armaan Hue pure dil ke... lalalalalalala... My toad/sheep like voice kicks in🤣

I want to meet you really!

^^ This feeling is definitely mutual!😳

By the way the ones who don't know the Proximity *ahem* of Baba and Amma! They are missing out something too astounding!

Hmm... Parde mein rehene do... Parda nah uthao!😳

Aaja Gale lag jaa!🤗

🤗❤️

And yeah! Loads of Chocolates are kept for you, only if you reach here on time!

Diet can go to hell... Chocolatesss!!!!!! though they have already been demolished nah?

Teri aur Sirf Teri

BaBa!

Muskurane ki wajah tu ho! Jiya jaye na jaye na jaye na, orey amma re! ☺️

*Shitt... Tries to think of something better*

"Suno nah sangmaremar ki minaare... Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tummare"❤️

P.S.--No errors baby! You are too perfect! :*

No errors? Sacchi! Mission Accomplished! 😃

P.P.S.--I love you MORE! xP

Doubt that for sure!!!😳

P.P.S-If you call this flattery then Moi not talking to my Amma! Hmph!

I am not going to call it flattery... I am going to call it your pyaar for me! You pyaar which is... hehehe, never mind😉 and plus, you know you can't resist talking to me😎

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Phewww! Finally done!

Longest reply everrr!!!!!!

But babes, Thank You SOOO much for this beautiful comment!

You actually have no idea how much this means to such an amateur writer like me!

*Lag jaa gale, ke phir ye, haseen raat ho na ho...*

Love you MORE! :*

Teri,

Amma😆

PS: This is longer than the drabble! In fact your review was longer than the drabble! hehehe, I ❤️ you!

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That is because I am not as alsi as you are when it comes to long comments! Hmph!

What is up with this new word amateur that you have been using for yourself? Wanna be smacked eh?

Late aagain just kill me already