13...a Kriyaansh FF

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Shivani

@shivheena123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: yogini64
Poor rey... he must be deeply in love with kriya...😊

Thats why ... he can't help... but to cry hard...😭

It feels so bad to see him this way...

& swayam must be hell worried seeing him so shattered...😳

A box from kriya??? 😲

There's a new ray of hope... finally... 🤗

I love that people are being so interested in the story of this ff! Thank you

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Reveal soon what happened b/w dem

UPDATE SOON n PM me too (b/w sent u buddy req) :)

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Amazing Update .. !!!

Must Say You Are An Awesome Writer.

Commendable Work 👏

Love The Way You Express Feelings 😊

Awesome One

Please Update Soon

Can't Wait To Know What's In The Box

Thank You For The PM

Would Be Waiting For The Next One.

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SALONI KAPADIA

@sally1196

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

LOVED YOUR STORY DO CONTINUE AND PLEASE PM ME 😊

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lizabhomi

@lizabhomi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

really nice story
do pm me nxt time u update😊

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Interesting concept :)

I loved how you portrayed Rey's emotions and how Swayam felt while seeing Rey like that

Please update soon and please pm me :D

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

hey dear.. juz came across ur story..

nd i simply loved it..❤️

looking forward to read moree..

plz cont. soon..

nd plz pm me wen u update..😊😊

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Yaar dis concept is grt!!!
Kriya is a loner n d only one she has is rey!!!
Bt wat has happened to kriya???
Y is rey crying??? N dat too lyk dis!!!
He is distraught yaar!!!!
He is crying lyk hell!!!!
Thnk god swayam is der to hold him!!!
To comfort him!! As much as he can!!!
Gosh!!! Its grt!!!!
Its gud dat he hasnt taken to drinking!!!
Ya he is drinking bt its black coffee n nt alcohol!!!!
N dis courier!!! Y??? N y is rey so shocked on receiving it??
Wats happening???
Plz update soon!!! N plz do pm me wen u update nxt!!! Plz!!!