13...a Kriyaansh FF

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

res

unres

amazing

super

chapter 2 was wow..

but rey ko kyun itna rula rahi ho...

and rey's emotions were so well depicted 👍🏼

amazing

well done 👏

and mystery box 😲😉

now i really wanna read further

im excited...

thanks for the PM

update soon

and do PM me

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Rupali_13

@Rupali_13

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Hey very nice update...👏.

Bt plz solve the mystery Quickly

I cnt see move crying of rey...😭

By the way thankx for update.

and plz update next part soon.

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

nice part. . .
U described it beautifully. . .
Black coffee instead of alchoholic drinks. . . Nice thought. .
Totally loved the update

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Just now read both the parts... And i must say a really nice concelt..!!!
never knew i wud see Rey crying this much in a Fanfic..!!!

Really liked the both the parts..!!! Waiting for this Mystery to reveal...

Update soon... 😊

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@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

ahhh rey is shattered broken hurt and what not...

you showed his emotion really beautifully...

ohh so a parcel came from Kriya...

really wanna know wats goin to happen...

loved this part...

update soon... (:

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

So Rey is a CRYBABY... Something new about it??

But you'll find me never asking questions.. I am just happy at the pace you are keeping. In the second chapter only there is Kria. So, that's great.

Smashing piece of writing Shivani!! Keep it up!

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Poor rey... he must be deeply in love with kriya...😊

Thats why ... he can't help... but to cry hard...😭

It feels so bad to see him this way...

& swayam must be hell worried seeing him so shattered...😳

A box from kriya??? 😲

There's a new ray of hope... finally... 🤗