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Posted: 11 years ago
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so far so good naddya... interesting story continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Naddiya am soo sorry am very late...awesome story..i love it very much..continue soon and thank you soo much 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nadz..perfect update once again...u alwz make me speechless with ur heart-touchin updates..!!

cant wait to read part 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww ,, Loved it .
Waiting for part 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just read the first 2 parts of your OS. The way Raman misses Ishita and how Ruhi is trying to make convey that to both Ishita and Raman is too cute. Also loved how you showed the trauma Ishita is in and how Raman is worried for her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww loved the update specialy ranan worreid for ishu aww
Nadi good job 👏
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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" yeh Raman karna kya laga " Mrs Iyer walked like crazy out side the bedroom

"Madhu try to understand Raman is her husband " Mr Iyer wanted to complete his sentence when the door bell rang


" i have heard Ishita has come back home " Subbu mom walked in

Mr Iyer look at Madhu , she took a deep breath & silent;y thank God that Raman was there "kaise na bola" she asked in her tone

" asie baat chupti nahi Madhu " she gave a cunning smiled

" newspaper mein aaiya tha kya " Mrs Iyer smiled

Subbu mom look here & there " Ishita kahan ha " she asked

" sorahi hi " Mrs Iyer said

" hmmm"


In bedroom ,as he held her tight she had stop murmuring & moving,he wiped his tears " my heart says you are innocent ,to open eyes of my sister & parents i have to take this step " he look at her hand a smile appeared on his face ,he saw his phone clench in her hand " pagal aurat " he smile & removed her curls " to bring back them home i must find the truth " he unwillingly made her rest " i can sit here holding you all day , but to find the culprit i shall go " he placed sleeping Ruhi arm around Ishita "take care of your Ishi ma " he caress Ruhi ,he waited for a while to check her , she was asleep , he walked out


" yeh " Subbu mom shocked to see Raman

" kya huwa " Mrs Iyer asked , Raman look at them " lagta hai tumhara newspaper na galta news di , Raman My son in law is here " Mrs Iyer grab Raman arm

Subbu mom stand ,Raman understand the situation

"amma lagata hai logo ka paas free time bohot hai " he look at mrs Iyer " I have made Ishu asleep let her sleep as long as she wants to ,do call me when she gets up " he said to Amma & walked out

Subbu mom drop her jaw

"Kya huwa " Mrs Iyer asked her as she picked up her bag ,without saying anything she walked out


Mr Iyer "Madhu woh itna bhi bura nahi " he said as she closed the door

"Ishu sogai , kal raat se tou nahi soi hai woh " she quickly walk to check Ishita , " Raman na" she paused as mr Iyer placed his hand on her shoulder "let him take care of our Ishu " he smiled at her Mrs Iyer didn't reply




it was late evening when Ishita woke up , she sat & look around " time kya ha " she tries to figure out where she was

" Ruhi your Ishi ma woke up " Mihika said

" Ishi ma aap kitna sotai ho raat ko sab ko tang karo gai " she made face & said

"why no one woke me ?" Ishita check the time & asked

"Papa na bola tha aap ko sona da " Ruhi said " pati i will tell papa Ishu ma woke up " Ruhi ran out before Ishita could stop her

" Raman's cell " she search for it

" woh Raman la gaya " Mrs Iyer walked in

" Raman aaya tha " Ishita tries to remember



At Bhalla place


"Papa Ishi ma utth gai " Ruhi came running in & shouted

" laddoo bato " Toshi ji murmur

Raman look at her , he grab Ruhi arm & walked to bedroom

" Ruhi take this & ask your Ishi ma to get ready , we three me you & Ishi ma will go out " he said

" really papa " Ruhi said

" yup go " he smiled gave her bag


At Iyer place

"Ishi ma papa na bola wear this & get ready we three are going for dinner " Ruhi placed bag on bed

"go tell your papa i am not going any where ?" Ishita made face & said


Ruhi ran out to Bhalla's home

"Papa Ishi ma na bola mein nahi ja rahi " Ruhi made sad face & said

"hmmm"

" ab kya karo papa " Ruhi asked

" kuch nahi " he sat , Ruhi look at his sad face

" papa aap na Ishi ma se baat karnai hai " Ruhi asked him

he shakes his head in yes

" mein kuch karti hoon " she cupped his face & said , he smiled & kissed her palm ,she ran out he followed her


Ishita had freshen up , she look at the bag what he had send "meri sari " she taken out it


"Ishi ma me & Mutto going for walk " Ruhi came with muttu

"Ruhi wait " Ishita followed her

Raman who was standing at door saw Ishita

" aap yeh sab kyun kar raha hai " Ishita said she was about to turn he grab her hand & pull her

Ruhi turn back & look at them

" papa chalo Ishi ma ko kidnap kar lata hai " Ruhi winked

"Ruhi " Ishita look at her

"no Ruhi papa is waiting in car , you & Ishi ma come down" he left her arm & walked down stairs

" Ishi ma chalo " Ruhi asked her

" Ruhi you go with papa " she walked in

" ishi ma kya aap ki papa se fight hoai hai " she asked her

"no beta " Ishita said


" go Ishita , may be he want to talk to you " Mrs Iyer said

"Amma aap bhi " Ishita in shocked look at her , Ishita walked to the balcony to see ,he was sitting in car

" let him wait " she angrily walked back to room


" Pati Ishi ma ko kya huwa " Ruhi asked her


"what he thinks of himself ?" she walked to the her room window to check , he was still sitting , she look at time " i will see for how long he can wait for me "

Edited by naddiya26 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
lovely update nadz..esp loved first half...beautifully written again...!!

waitin for part 4..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
nice ... part 4 soon pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Superb update
Loved it
Aww raman made Ishu sleep
And ruhi also slept
Grrr this Subhu's ma na I tell u she doesn't have anything else to do
khair loved how Mrs. Iyer told raman their son-in law also there
And the best thing loved his taunt to her
raman wants to take ruhi and Ishu out but Ishu refusing
Let's see how Ishu agrees to go out
Waiting for part 4
Continue soon

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