SS:CRAVING LOVE(PART 6 UPDATED[LAST])

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guyzz. this is my 1st time to write a story... this story is not having any SANDHIR or SARTH scenes.. this story is about the love which randhir is craving for...MOM'S LOVE...which he gets from sanyu's mom... ok i cannot assure you with a mindblowing writing, its just simple story... i hope u like it...

PART1:-PAGE 1

PART2:- PAGE 1

PART3:- PAGE 2

PART4:- PAGE 3

PART5:- PAGE 4

PART6:- PAGE 5(LAST)

It was mid sem vacations(i dont know much about mech engg ka vacation system, its just my imagination). Everyone was planning how to spend there vacation except 3 people Randhir, Sanyukta and Parth. During dream team project, Vardhan was very impressed by the work and dedication of these 3, so he gave an individual projects to Randhir & Sanyukta. Parth was given some other project related to dream team. Sanyu was very happy learning that Vardhan was very impressed by her work and assigned her with a project. She was having mixed feeling, bcoz if she does this project than this vacation she might not able to go home and also on the other hand she was not ready to let go off this opportunity. Sanyu called her mom to inform about the same.

SANYU:- kaisi ho aap Ma, sab theek to hai na, papa kaise hai aur bhai...???

MA:- aree aree shaanti beta, ek hi saans(breath) mai kya kya puchegi...???

Ghar mai sab aacha hai, tere papa aur tera bhai sab theek hai. tu kaisi hai beta..???

SANYU:- M good ma. Aacha ma, i want to tell u something...

Sanyu was about to tell but she was interrupted by her mom

MA:- Wo sab chod Sanyu, yeh bata tu ghar kab aa rahi hai..

SANYU:- Ma, ussi ke baare mai baat karne ke liye phone kiya hai. Ma, mai iss vacation ghar nahi aa paungi.

MA:- Par kyu, kya hua aachanak, sab theek hai na, koi problem to nahi hai...???? (tensed)

SANYU:- Nahi ma, koi problem nahi hai, chill. Wo bas Vardhan sir ne additional project diya hai vacations mai isiliye.

MA:- Aree aise kaise wo kaam de sakte hai tujhe, vacations hai baccho ka aur wo kaam de rahe hai. Ye to thik baat nahi hai. Mai unse baat karungi.

SANYU:- Shaant shaant ma, isme unki koi galti nahi hai. Unhone mujhe pucha tha ki tum ye Kaam karna chahti ho ya nahi, aur mujhe wo kaam karna tha isiliye mene wo kaam liya, aapko to pata hai na ki mujhe mech engg kitna pasand hai, isiliye mujhse raha nahi gaya. Plzz Ma,maan jao na.

Seeing Sanyu pleading for the permission her mom gave her, but was still upset as she desperately wants to meet Sanyu.

MA:- Acha theek hai, lekin ek hi sharth(condition) par, tum apna aache se khayal rakhogi.

SANYU:- Ha ma...!!!

MA:- Ok beta, mai ab phone rakhti hui.. bohot kaam hai.

SANYU:- ok bye

AT NIGHT

In boys hostel:-

While packing Jiggy was blabbering many things as to how he is going to spend his vacation to Randhir, but Randhir was showing a deaf ear to him. Parth was having some work of dream team so he was going to b late. Suddenly while talking Jiggy accidently blurted out topic of his (Jiggy's) mom. Initially Randhir was angry but later on he smiled as he thought Jiggy hasn't intentionally done it, so he shooed off that thought. Seeing Randhir smiling Jiggy was relieved.

In girl's hostel:-

Kaustuki and Vidushi were packing there stuff. But Vidushi was not too excited, god knows why.. . Kaustuki was really very excited as she was having a big planning for her family. While packing she was continuously blabbering in front of Sanyu about how she is going to spend her holidays. She was done with her packing and both of them wished good night to each other and slept.

NEXT MORNING

Parth left early in the morning for some work given by Vardhaan Sir. As usual Randhir was doing his push-ups and Jiggy was getting ready. He text Kaustuki to meet before bidding good bye. He was leaving room waving Randhir good bye, just then Randhir said.

RANDHIR:- Jiggy ruk

JIGGY:- Kya hua Randhir bhai

RANDHIR:- Vacations mai thode push-ups kar liya kar.

JIGGY:- aree kya Randhir bhai, mai aur push-ups.. kuch bhi ha.

RANDHIR:- aacha, idhar aa.

Jiggy goes near Randhir

RANDHIR:- Chal ab push-ups kar

JIGGY:- Aree nahi nahi, mar daalna hai kya mujhe. Mujhse nahi hoga.

RANDHIR:- Kar chup chap tu.

Jiggy starts push-ups but fails to do it.

RANDHIR:- Ghar pe practise kar, aa jayega... Vacations khatam hone ke baad dekhta hu tujhe.

and he(RD) continue to do push-ups

JIGGY:-Sharam aani chahiye mujhe.. Do haate kaate log hai mere room mai. Ek He-man ek Superman aur unke bich mai ek Common man jisko push-ups karne nahi aate. Huh...!!!!!!

He watches the clock and remembers that he has called kaustuki to meet him and he runs to the gate. After reaching there, he found that still she has'nt reached even if he is 10 min late. After sometime Kaustuki with Sanyukta came to meet Jiggy. Jiggy was actually feeling awkward to talk romantically with Kaustuki

SANYU:- Hey Jiggy

JIGGY:- Hi Sanyukta, Hi Kaustu

KAUSTUKI:- Hey Jiggy

SANYU:- So Jiggy ready to go home

JIGGY:- Ya, and tumhare project ka kya hua..???

SANYU:- Aree abhi tak shuru bhi nahi kiya.

JIGGY:- Aree Randhir bhai ne bhi shuru nahi kiya hai

SANYU:- Oh really... Whatever...!!!!!!🤔

Sanyu till now had sensed that she is no more required over here.

SANYU:- Aacha Jiggy mai ab chalti hui, abhi Kaustuki hai na tumhari company ke liye

(she wink and leaves) 😉

JIGGY:- Hey Kaustu baby, kabse wait kar raha hui.

KAUSTUKI:- Sorry Jiggy wo bich mai kuch friends mil gaye to unse baat karne lag gayi.

JIGGY:- Now your that friends had became more important them me...????😡😡

KAUSTUKI:- Not again Jiggy, plzz atleast not now when we are leaving for home

JIGGY:- Sorry baby, to tum mujhe call karogi na, atleast din mai 10 times...????

KAUSTUKI:- What, 10 times...!!!!!!!!! are you mad Jiggy. My mom, dad, my whole family will b around me. How in the world m going to call u soo many times, its not possible. Just 1 to 2 times Jiggy not more than that, its my home Jiggy not hostel room.😕

Jiggy gets angry, and to add fuel to his anger Yo-yo enters.😡

Till now Kaustuki believes that Yo-yo is not that bad as she used to think.

YO-YO:- ohho ji Kaustuki, kaisi ho aap..??

KAUSTUKI:- Mai thik hui

JIGGY:- YO-YO...!!!!!!😡😡

YO-YO:- Shaant Jiggy puttar shaant, bas haal chal puchne aaya hu. Oyee waise abhi bohot din Kaustuki ko dekhne nahi milega na, to isiliye aakhri baar baat karne aa gaya.

JIGGY:- YO-YO TUM...!!!!!😡😡

YO-YO:- Ohho Jiggy puttar shaant, oye teri girlfriend ko tujhse chinne nahi aaya hui, Kaustuki bhi to meri dost hai, hai na Kaustuki..????

Kaustuki smiles at this, as she finds this cute😳😳

YO-YO:- Oyee Kaustuki ne smile kar diya, bas meri puri chutti aur mehnat safal ho gayi.

JIGGY:- Chalo Kaustu, hume disturb ho raha hai yahape.

KAUSTUKI:- Ruko na Jiggy, Yo-yo bas bye bole aaya hai.

Yo-yo smiles like mad after seeing Kaustuki taking his side. 🤪 Jiggy gets angry but somehow controls it thinking this is the last day, so he should'nt waste this sweet time by getting angry on her.

JIGGY:- Yo-yo, abhi yeh bandar ki tarah smile karna band karo aur chalo.

Saying this all the 3 waved good bye to each other and left for there home.

How was it guyzzz. Must me little boring na and may b 2nd part will b also boring. but i will try to make it little interesting. plzz comment karna and also criticism is welcome. Thank you sooo much for reading. Do leave comments.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey it was amazing start...
Do continue..!!!
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The story seems to be very interesting.
Do update soon.
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nice start.. Like it.. Continue soon..
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nyc😛
plzz update soon😛
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Hey good plot line.. No Sandhir no sarth... Well it's unique... Cont ASAP.. N ya pm me wen u update...

Love
Ayesha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guyzz... i know the 1st part was boring and may b this part is also boring.. but plzz read it once.. thank you...
PART 2

Now whole college is empty, only non-teaching staff and Randhir, Sanyukta, Parth and Vardhaan is present. The whole day Randhir, Sanyukta , Parth were busy with their work, no one was at rest, not for even a second. The only rest they were taking is during breakfast, lunch, dinner and sleep time.

In mech lab, Sanyu was stuck with some parts as she was not having full knowledge about how and where to apply. Bcoz the project she got was somewhat new and hard for her so she went to library. Randhir was also in library to get some information about his project. Sanyu enters library and sees Randhir engrossed in books, she ignores him and went to take her book. As soon as Sanyu picked her book from shelf Randhir just snatched that book from her.

SANYU:- WHAT THE HELL RANDHIR...!!!!!! pehle mene yeh book uthayi thi.

RANDHIR:- So, konsa bada teer maar liya, i need it more than you. Waise bhi, tumhe yeh book mile ya nah mile, kya farak padta hai. Tumse to koi kaam hone to nahi wala, even if you scratch your head on this book.

SANYU:- Randhir, enough is enough. Chup chap ye book mujhe de do, for your work you have many books, i have just one, so give it to me.

and tries to snatch book from him

RANDHIR:- Ohho really, ab to mujhe issi book ki jarurat hai, if you want it then you have to wait.

Meanwhile Parth comes in library as he hears someone fighting in library.
Parth sees both of them fighting and comes to control the situation.

PARTH:- Guyzz guyzz, just calm down. Kya hua, kyu lad rahe ho...?????

RANDHIR:- Tumse matlab, kyu aaye ho yaha (looking at Sanyu) ohho, now I got it, dur nahi reh sakte na tum log jyada der. Right now I got it.

Parth gets angry

SANYU:- Randhir, just shut up. Hum dono Kaisa bond share karte hai, u should'nt be concerned about it.

RANDHIR:- Ohho come on Sanyukta Agarwal, I dont give a damn about u 2, jo karna hai karo and just leave from hear, mujhe bohot kaam hai tum log ki tarah nahi jo pura din timepass karte rahe ek dusre ke saath.

PARTH:- Randhir, enough. Bohot bol liya (still angry, clenching his fist)

RANDHIR:- Ohho really, kya kar loge tum (and takes a step towards Parth)

Sensing the situation going out of hand, Parth calms down himself. Looking at Sanyu

PARTH:- Kya hua Sanyukta, kyu lad rahi ho.

SANYU:- Dekho na Parth, mujhe jo book chahiye wo iss MCP ne liya, even if he is having option of books for his project still he is not giving it.

RANDHIR:- Complaints complaints (sarcastically) aur karna bhi kya aata hai tumhe

Sanyu gives angry look to him
Parth looks around the library and finds a book.

PARTH:- Yeh lo Sanyukta, tumhare project ke liye ye book thik rahegi, issme uss book se bhi jyada information hai.

Sanyu checks it and finds that Parth is right

SANYU:- Thanks Parth

Randhir gives deadly glares to both of them

PARTH:- Thanks bolne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Ab chalo

Both smiles and leaves
Randhir was too angry and stumps his fist on nearby table unable to control his boiling anger.

When Sanyu was in mech lab working on her project, her phone rand, it was her mom. She kept it on speaker

SANYU:- Ha maa bolo.

MA:- Kaisi ho tum

SANYU:- Aree mene kal hi to baat ki thi na, kaisi rahungi.. Ofcourse aachi hui.

MA:-Kuch nahi beta bas teri yaad aa rahi thi isiliye phone kiya. Sorry disturb kiya hoga to.

SANYU:- Kya maa aap bhi, kuch bhi bolti ho, aisa kuch nahi hai, aap mujhe kabhi bhi call kar sakti ho.

Randhir comes in mech lab to take some parts he requires. He overhears the convo

SANYU:- (contd) aur agar bohot busy bhi rahungi na, tabbhi mai aapke liye time nikal hi lungi.

MA:- Ha ha pata hai, isiliye jyada phone nahi kiya karungi warna tu mujhse aisehi baat karti rahegi aur tera kaam kabhi pura nahi hoga.

SANYU:- Kya maa aap bhi. Koi baat nahi maa, jitni jaldi ho sake utni jaldi mai apna kaam khatam karke ghar aane ki koshish karungi.. ok..????

MA:- Hmm, thik hai beta. Aur bata, tumne kuch khaya ki nahi ya aisehi bhooke pet kaam kar rahi hai..???

SANYU:- Ha maa, breakfast kiya hai, abhi thodi der mai lunch karne jaungi.

MA:- Dekh Sanyu, mujhse jhoot mat bol, mujhe pata hai ki agar tu ek baar apne machines ke saath lag gayi na to tu khaana peena sab bhul jaati hai. Saach bol, tune khaana nahi khaya na abhi tak...???

Sanyu biting her tongue

SANYU:- Maa, aap kaise har baar pakad lete ho mujhe.. OK, thik hai mai khaa lungi khaana.

MA:- Pakka na Sanyu, dekh jhoot mat bol wapas, maa hu teri. Jara khud ka khayal rakha kar apna.

SANYU:- Ha maa, pakka. Ok ma ab mai phone rakhti hu bohot kaam hai, raat ko phone karti hui. Byee maa.

MA:- Byee Sanyu.

And they both disconnects the call.

By the time there convo ended, Randhir was sad. Sanyu turned around to take something and she saw Randhir standing there listening to her and her mom's convo. She got very angry and shouted on him

SANYU:- TUM YAHA KAB SE KYA KAR RAHE HO, MERI AUR MA KI BAATE SUN RAHE THE..??? Listen one thing you MCP, jaise tumhe pasand nahi ki someone else peep in your personal life, i also dont like it. Did you get that...!!!!!

Randhir was quitely standing, listening to each and evry word of Sanyu but didn't responded to any of her reaction. Getting such a cold response from Randhir, Sanyu again said

SANYU:- Answer me Randhir...!!!!!!

Randhir just looked at her and left the lab leaving behind confused Sanyu.

SANYU:-(in mind) Iss MCP ko kya hua, react hi nahi kiya. This guy is unpredictable.(and she continued to work)

IN LIBRARY

Randhir went and sat on his respective place and was thinking about Sanyu and her mom's convo and also simultaneously he recollected his dark memories of his and his mom. He started comparing in mind that how Sanyu's mom takes care of her, can catch evry lie of hers and also main important thing LOVES HER and on the other hand he remembered his childhood, when he used to sit at dining table waiting for his mom, but that time his mom was not available and dad was too busy with his alcohol. So Randhir used to have his dinner alone and sometimes he use to skip his dinner or lunch. He was really upset of this.

*FLASHBACK*
(childhood)
RAMU KAKA:- Randhir baba, khaa lo na

RANDHIR:- Nahi kaka, mai maa ke saath hi khaunga, Wo aa jayegi

RAMU KAKA:- Randhir baba, memsaab late hongi aur unhone kaha hai ki Randhir ko khaana khila dena.

RANDHIR:- Nahi wo aayegi, jarur aayegi.

And he don't have his food and goes to his room. He expects that his mom will come and they together will have dinner. He used to wait for her till late at night but she never used to turn up and eventually Randhir fell asleep.

NEXT MORNING

RANDHIR:- Kaka, kaha hai ma.

RAMU KAKA:- Wo to subah hi chali gayi, aur kaha ki aapko breakfast karva dena.

RANDHIR:- Mere baare mai pucha nahi, ki mene kal raat khaana khaya hai ya nahi...???

RAMU KAKA:- Wo, kal memsaab bohot thak gayi thi aur sidha soone chali gayi. Unhe laga ki aapne khaana khaa liya hai isiliye shayad pucha nahi.

At that time Randhir was shattered and thought Mom doesn't love him and also he meant nothing to her.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

PRESENT

By the time flashback ends, Randhir's eyes were wet and also red with anger at the same time. Randhir said

RANDHIR:- I will never forgive you MS. RENUKA SANYAL, you made my life hell. I WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOU.

Plzz do leave comments. Thanks for reading.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi lovee...(after a long tym na?)😉
Awesome update dear...nd d concept was really different... Loved it..😃.
Very nice title lovee...👏
Continue soon... Waiting 4 d next update...
Sorry 4 d late reply... 😛Thanks 4 d pm..

With love❤️
Karthika

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I've read part 1 ... great start.. will read other parts soon :) ~Res !!
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FF ka parts are awsme yar so love between mom and daughter and and so emotional in randhir mom and son ... so sad yar pls post nxt part soon na 😭

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