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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Aha...dis is it...dis is da missing in d3...DIALOGUES...I felt sad for swaron on Friday...though shantanu was fab in his job...bt still something was imissing n a lil hurried that epi...ryt?..BT ur OS toh..
Brought tears in my eyes...boss hats off to u...

PS such wonderful work share karne k liye thanks a ton...keep smiling 👏 😊

Edited by GlamourousPearl - 11 years ago

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nancynnv

@nancynnv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

It's was beautiful
Full of emotions !!!
I loved ur improved version of Friday's epi
Swayam hayee ! Rula hi diya 👏

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

it was awesome

grt song selection

thanks for the pm

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fanista

@fanista

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

sorry i thought i resed but i didn't

so coming to the os

it's heart touching

you seem to be gifted !

the way rey came to swayam to hug him

to convey that sharon left the world

i started crying like a maniac

then loved how swayam brought his

sharon back to life by yelling constantly to be back to him

pm me

update soon can't wait

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

tis was one hell of a story

which was emotional n heart-wrenching

starting from the begining when swayam pulls her

in his arms scared of loosing her

n ignoring ruhi completey

the sequence where he cries his heart out

when he fears he might loose sharon for ever

was brilliantly penned

i must say you made me fall for ur swayam

all over again

all in all a very heart-touching os varshu 😛

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

it was simply awesome... 😃

beautifully penned down...emotionless perfectly defined...

loved d way u have described swayam emotion's...it was really heart touching...

overall i just loved d fst part...it was amazing...

cont soon...waiting for next update now... 😊

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Ahaan Someone seems to be on a writing spree Varshu but I'm lovin it and this one was leg wait for it endary legendary as your other works, this Os was legendary Varshu..
Your Os's are always high on emotional content and you write emotional stuff great you have a talent there, expressing emotions in writing is a tough job but you do it with ease and do it well so Kudos to you for that..😊.
This one was emotional and showed Swayam's desperation and love for Sharon and I enjoyed reading it hope to read the next part soon update soon babes..😃.
P.S- Congratulations for the half century and one run I.e your 51 likes counting mine in it..😃 😛.

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Sachi

@sachi123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Hi, I didnt comment on any of your works before! Extremely sorry for that!I am Big Fan of your writing! You understand soo soo well! I keep re-reading your works,they are just amazing! When you commented on my Work, I was so overwhelmed,Thanx a ton!
Keep Writing More and More!
Love,
Sachi.