{Journey of a Wife - 5 } - Hum Rajwaade Hain!!!!!! Last ch - Page 146 - Page 62

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Originally posted by: -SuHaaN.R-

Did u see Navin, Andy "agrees" with me. We both know u immensely well, and we know u won't be happy; if u end your PRIDE AND JOY well before u intended to! U always had that murder-track in mind, u told me about it when u were ending book 2; u even added a court-scene to 1 of your previews, now why CUT it completely?

I think I'm giving this lecture too many times now🥱, just write it - it'll make everyone happy!

(U know I'm right😉 .. & yes, I already know "U DON'T LIKE ME"😆; that's why Andy and I are sticking together, we only have each other for company in your DISLIKE LIST😉)

Originally posted by: -SuHaaN.R-

O my genade, O Hemel Suhaan , jy het my geskok😲😆! wat doen jy? Wat doen ek😕? Almal kan lees wat jy se, en jy se enige iets wat in jou kop is. Ja Natuurlik ... ek is kwaad en ek wil dit vir almal se! Dis waar dat die "LIKES" baie laat gekom het, maar jy het te veel gese. Omdat ek wil weet hoekom😭. Wil jy he dat almal stop lees? Nee Man!! Hulle sal jy weet! Nou maak jy vir my kwaad😡!

Die verhaal was uitstekund👏 - soos altyd. BaieDankie 🤗 . Ons almal wil he dat jy meer en meer van JOAW vir ons gee. Nie ALMAL nie! Elke person is verlief op die storie, moenie se iets wat jy nie bedoel nie. Ek bedoel dit. Jy wou die skietery van Ayaan skryf, dan doen dit!! Ek het nie die tyd nie ... en dit sal 'n baie lang stuk wees🥱.

Andy is so bekomerd dat die Boek die laaste sal wees. Ek weet😆!! Sy het 'n scrap aan my gegee en sy se ek moet met jou praat .. ek moet vir jou se om nie te stop skryf nie. En jy het DIT gedoen ... dankie😳 - maar ek stem nie saam nie😉. Ek het gese ek sal probeer met jou praat - jy luister aan my altyd, luister nou .. moenie ophou skryf! Fooi tog! Jy maak my kop seer😔!!!

JOAW sal 'n boek 6 he😉! In almal se drome😉, want ek skryf dit nie!

Originally posted by: andy.a

Nw! U cnt end joaw in 2 chaps! And navi, thats the best JOKE I EVER HEARD!

Originally posted by: -SuHaaN.R-

Hey navi, how are you?😊

Sorry for the late comment , could not get time to comment as I was busy for a long time, last week was a torture.. anyway lets not waste time talking silly things. 😆

Coming to the update, it was really awesome and thrilling. So you decided to be good and not let the snake bite udita... the letter by the child welfare people had the necessary effect na...it was such a great experience to help them draft that letter... he he he... actually they were too busy to answer to your reply as they were celebrating their holiday in the Caribbean...(thanks to the person who made them draft the letter at the first instant😆)

And you actually let the snake bite uday... great shocker!!!! I knew you wont hurt udita and uday would save her, but I NEVER EXPECTED you would let the snake bite uday!!! I mean, you never even like even a ant to bite uday and you let a green mamba to bite uday!!!! I am shocked!!! Ok, enough of the drama that i am playing now, at least that incident brought manyta back to her senses na, great!!

Anyway I recently read an article , it was an interview with the green mamba who bit uday

Reporter: can you describe what made you bite udita and what were your feelings when uday pulled yoy away?

GM: hisss.his.hiiiss..hisss ( I was bored, plus I wanted to get a chance to be famous, as long as I sat in the park without harming anyone , no one would notice me ever... so bitting someone famous would make me more famous... and now I give some 15 -20 interviews daily)

After letting a hiss and stretching his body to a more comfortable way,,, the greem mamba continued

GM: hhhiss...hiissshi hiss hi hisssassshisss.( anyway since everyone loved udita, it was a perfect chance, bite her and become famous, especially since her mother was not paying attention, then uday came forward and snatched my golden opportunity, but my brilliant mind took this chance and I just brushed my fangs on uday's hands, but the temptation was too strong and I bit him deep. That taste,,,aaa...)

Reporter : so how did uday's blood taste?

GM: hisss hisss hiiisss( it was just tasty... too sweet... I just loved it ... and I wish I had a second chance too)

Reporter: any chance that you would reappear in the story again?

GM: hiiisssiiissshhhisss( I would want to appear in every update, plus I also heard the writer like snakes, so there is a great chance of seeing me in every other update, and I hope to become more famous and loved than udita...)

Reporter: anyway thanks , for spending your time with us... and I hope we would never EVER SEE YOU AGAIN...

Wasn't the interview interesting? He he he... coming back , I was pleasantly surprised when manyta actually used her sense to save uday... she did a great job really... finally uday's old manyta was back... aw!! I forgot to say the way you started the story with a suspense, I feared it was udita, but later it turned to be manveer... god!!! How my heart ached na seeing uday and manyta in that condition!!! And even when uday was out of danger you kept manyta in a dangerous state..

Their conversation was great, heart touching...the way how manyta gave up her dream like life and embraced reality... that part was so well written

Coming to the part I liked the best, giving DS a idea of her stupidity... I wanted uday to do the honours, but I can settle for the second best, giriraj...the was how he told DS that she was selfish and had spoiled uday's reputation was great, so great I really felt happy. Atleast that old cow would now e realize she was wrong all this time and would NEVER EVER INTERFERE WITH MANVEER'S life again...

Now what did you mean by last night for unnathi and vijay... does that have anything to do with the murder plot you are planning, any chances of separating them?

Between I am really looking forward to see the murder track( you have to do that navi, for you, for me and for all) and the further part, especially the delivery at the farmhouse... He he he... may joaw go for many and many more books

Thanks for the pm, though I booked m y place before the pm

Love you❤️