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Posted: 11 years ago
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Look at the way he holds himself
So arrogant and ruthless
Taking advantage of everything
And everyone
How can one be so mean
Selfish and blind
He drinks himself into a drunken stupor
Finds comfort with his Maya
So hang on
Who is Komal
Mother to two daughters. ..
Has he no shame
Obviously not
Otherwise he just hides
If Dadisa finds out
They'll be a huge drama
Briraj you are lame...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice effort girl. Do edit your post and correct the spelling of drama on the second last line.

Brijraj was one tharki character.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice!! 👏Loved it!! 😃
The words u used to describe him so suits him!!😆😉
Do write more soon!!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Your words are just perfect for him.

Good Job.

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