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Posted: 18 years ago
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Omg!!!! its feels really gr8 to see u bak posting on RF 🤗

After a tiring day or work...this certainly is the best tonic to make one laugh really hard 😆

I have always always felt this that the way u write fics abt AY...the way u understand them.....no one else does....the talent that u have is totally unmatchable 👏...infact even though u r a hardcore yuvi fan....I have always felt that u r at ur best when u have to potray Ashi's feelings n her qualities😳......u understand her soooooo well n reflect her thoughts perfectly in ur fics/one shots 😳

This was obv the perfect Ashi date.....infact even the ideal Priya date...coz she has always said that she wants to go bungee jumping atleast once in her life 😳😳😳

How I wish I could have seen this in Remix........Ah! tht would have been pure bliss 😳😃


Edited by anvesha rulz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesmeee 👏 👏 👏 i was bowlled over by ur writing style by just that one line frm ur earlier one shot...he grinned and said cme here u silly girl,,,dis told me data u r perhaps one of the bestes gaugers of the beautiful relationship dese two wacked out people share...and well dis is perhaps the perfect perfect way of an ashi date....wen i read she was looking at the city below and counting the stairs veen beofre reading the next part i knew daat the lady planned a divine jump frm the top of the tower and ofcorse her soulmate has to agree else he wld hav to say goodbye to sme of his precious hair locks 😉....it was sipmly perfect...loved d simplicty wid which u wrote all of it so romantically beutiful..and ofcorse its humenly not possible to understand anvesha banerge ray...daats y shes d most unique and hatke...awesmee one sindhu...do write more its realy relieveing and revivng to read such creative stuff after a long long day... 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohhh yaar toooo goood .....n very very innovative....ashi really would have thought like that...greattt imagination..... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
Its really gr8.. n awesome.. 👏
So much lyk ashi.. so differnt.. yet so amazing..
😊 👏 👏
Edited by Dead devil - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohhhh awesume yaar way too gud 👏 loved it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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First of all welcum bk sindhu dunno😳🤗 if u know me or not but I love your fics and m big fan of your fics😳☺️ And am soo glad you made ur grand entry with the fic or shot itself☺️

And now coming to the shot... it was soooo dreamy 😍😍😍 I seriously loved the concept... ashi's date and it was soo perfect ashi☺️☺️ bunjee jump!!!😳😳woohoo... wow... i soo wish they showed this in remix 😍😍 its soo like ashi and yuvi😳 then chocolates and everything😳😳 it was soo perfect... your fics definatly gives me goosebumps😳😳 I soo loved it and keep writing more😳😳as i love your fics and one shots😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome one shot!
i love the idea of ashi taking yuvi out on a date.
i especially loved the part about the stairs and bungee jumping(the best thing for a date besides sky diving...lol)

hopefully you come up with another one soon!
Edited by gsoni - 18 years ago

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