a love divine.....one shot ay

its an AY one shot(kinda obvious innit).....i know d title is crap...but whu cares...enjoy..
nd ya..dedicated 2 rakhi..my number one fan(for reasons even she cant understand)

A LOVE DIVINE


ashi stared at her ceiling intently....no..she was nt wonderin wat color to paint it(thoh black wud b cool)
she was wonderin abt the equality of men and women...yes..ur readin a remix fic onli..nt a socio-political essay
the thing is...yuvi..her bf u know...used 2 take her on fancy dates....rock concerts(were he would play d guitar)..
a shed filled with candles...hude teddy bears..yeh i know kinda mushy...but it was cute at d moment....
juss now a thot was enterin her head...was she supp 2 take him on a date as well..thts were the equality part came in...
but if she did...it had 2 b wild nd wacky...it had 2 b better dan his dates...after all ..she was anvesha banerjee ray...
a sudded idea came 2 her mind..nd she jumped off her bed and grabbed her cellphone


"ashi...where r we goin..."yuvi asked fer the hundreth time...
"yuvi..quit whinin...u can c fer urself when v get there"
"where is 'there' exactly"he wondered...
"here v are.."she beamed at him
he turned a dissapointed face 2 her...
"here...u bought me on a date to a clock tower"he asked incredulously
"yuvi...dont u know nethin abt me..."
"no...coz its nt humanly possible 2 understand u"he grinned givin her a light kiss
she smiled mischevously at the compliment....

they reached the top of the tower...
on the number 6 of the clock stood a table covered with white lace...
on the table was a red rose,a yellow rose and a coral one symbolising love ,friendship and desire
they feasted on strawberries covered with chocolate nd cream...nd icecream with hot chocolate fudge nd chocolate brownies
..in short..a whole lot of chocolate(its an aphrodisiac..in case u din know;))
"wow....dat must hv been like a million calories"yuvi sighed
"hey ...im supp 2 b sayin dialouges like dat"ashi teased him...
he simply smiled....2 full 2 retort...


"now for the best part...."she said..her eyes twinkling...
"of course deres more......the excercise...2 burn all this off"
"hey i was juss kiddin...dun make me run up nd down these stairs"he pleaded

she led him 2 an open balcony....
the view of the city was simply stunning...
"you know..i was thinkin....the stairs r 2 many..."ashi said
"xactly..nd 2 think v hv 2 climb all those steps down"he groaned
"nd this is where u thnk me...coz v arnt gonna climb...v r gonna jump.."she flashed a huge smile
while yuvis mouth stayed open in shock....
she harnessed their ropes...caught his hand ..nd jumped...
no..it wasnt suicide...juss bunjee jumping...
"bungeeeeeeeeeee...."they yelled as they sailed in the open sky...into the depths of the ground...
a feelin unlike nethin they had ever felt..it was like....flying..

at tht moment ..they looked into each others eyes...their hair flying in the wind...nd realised there was nowhere else
in the world tht they wanted 2 b....
ashi looked at yuvi..juss feelin blessed 2 b with him...her lover..her soulmate...her friend.

bunjeeeeeeeeee jumping!!!!!!!!dis was totally ashi😆u can never guess wat shes gonna do 😉dis was gr888😆u literlly made by mouth water wid all dose chocs😳😳how i luv ur fics😉ur totally gr88888888888888🤗made my day😳

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Wow sindhu. awesome one shot 😳

See...it made me laugh n go aww as well

Deffo ashi material and very refreshing...to ead about the clock tower n all...I just loved ur idea of ashi's date... 👏 👏

Its much much much better than going to island n dancing over there...thats why I love ashi...she'z so hatke...my inspiration for doing all the goonda-gardi thingys 😆 😆 😆

Lovely one shot overall! 😳 👏 👏

And I forgot to add about the bungee jumping.....jeez I wanna do that once in my lifetime!!! The picturisation is great....ashi n yuvi both up in the air....flying down! 😛

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i luv itttt.........its damn gud sid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

its got its own feeling to it...which i really don kno how to describe..... 😛

thnks harshu...but plzz tell..is this a train..??y is everyone reservin places 😕

aaaaawwwwwww sindhu i luv u 🤗 the cutest awesumest fic ever read 😳 😳 😳 ......
ashis date cudnt b ne better 😳 😆 had to b adventurous n fun n wild .....all mixed in one ☺️ just tooo purfect.....the best part was the the jump 🤣 can so imagine poor guys epression wen ashi said
"you know..i was thinkin....the stairs r 2 many..."ashi said
"xactly..nd 2 think v hv 2 climb all those steps down"he groaned
"nd this is where u thnk me...coz v arnt gonna climb...v r gonna jump.."she flashed a huge smile
while yuvis mouth stayed open in shock.... 🤣
i luved its start tooo 😳 😳 😳
the table the chockholic calorified date was superb n yummy 😳 😳 😃 the flowers n corels were cool.......ashis date just had to b this way......cudnt b ne better!!!
wonderful brilliant......
n thanks 4 writing this 4 me.......am proud to b ur no.1 fan ☺️muah sweety 🤗

Originally posted by: hellraiser

thnks harshu...but plzz tell..is this a train..??y is everyone reservin places 😕

Well after trains n planes n medical college seats n all...

reservation has finally enterd RF as well...

It's the new "in" thing for ppl to say "reserved" to fics n then edit their posts later

N yeah...I sure luuuuurrrrrvvvvveee this method of posting...yeah i do😳

Originally posted by: hellraiser

thnks harshu...but plzz tell..is this a train..??y is everyone reservin places 😕

i wnted to rply first😆😆nd so i did😉😆 even though its crazy nd phscyotic its fun😆

first of all.... soooooo good to cya back sindhu 🤗 ... i so love ur fics, & its so good to read one after such a long time 😳
& next, bunjee jumping, yes, thats exactly ashi 😆 ... loved d fic... how i wish i was ashi, pehle chocolates, phir bunjee jumping... lucky uv 😆 😉