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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Mihi read something from your side after quite a long time and it was a pleasure to do so..😊.
I liked the Swayam of your write up he behaves pretty much like himself, like he used to once upon a time, he does'nt behave like an immature dork like he is behaving in the show now, he is taking into consideration the happenings in his surrounding..
Ruhi's weird behaviour towards him, her excess unwanted care, Sharon's care and love towards him and he is acknowledging her gestures to regain his trust..😊.
So am pretty happy reading this write up though I wish you could have given it a more closed end but over all it was a pleasant read keep up the good work..😊 👍🏼.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well somehow i really feel that swayam as a character is like completely ruined..I couldnt able to follow D3 but after regular visiting forum,one can easily conclude that his character is suffering from major decline..I dont know whether i am right or not..But anyways i just loved ur theme behind this work..I literally felt that i am reading original swayam here..Like who only used to think in such mature way,and trully the basic essence of his character is like sochna,samajna and then do anything type theory..His Self relaization was amazingly written and hugly depicted..As a moral,U did a gud job to explain the real swayam shikhawat here..I really dont know what wrong with the character of ruhi..But it was beautifull to read swayam..and his self realization..Perfect done dear..I only say,keep writing..


Actually i didnt get any pm regarding this,i was just visiting forum and found this..



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Hey Mihi read something from your side after quite a long time and it was a pleasure to do so..😊.
I liked the Swayam of your write up he behaves pretty much like himself, like he used to once upon a time, he does'nt behave like an immature dork like he is behaving in the show now, he is taking into consideration the happenings in his surrounding..
Ruhi's weird behaviour towards him, her excess unwanted care, Sharon's care and love towards him and he is acknowledging her gestures to regain his trust..😊.
So am pretty happy reading this write up though I wish you could have given it a more closed end but over all it was a pleasant read keep up the good work..😊 👍🏼.


I am not good at endings and I didn't like the way I ended this one either!! hope I improve with it..:(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hush your OS was such a relief Mihi
hope to see such scene soon in d3 which is not possible though but writers should read this and feel inspired to write better
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this OS is just so amazing.
If only all this was shown in the show as well
perfect monologue and Swayam's self realization and him dreaming of
Sharon😳
You are an awesome writer.
One thing I cudn't understand will there be more after this

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