SanDhir TS: Alterverse [Updated Pg.11]

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Confused about the title? Okay, so let me give you a little insight about it and the OS.
This OS is as far as can get from the show's script. It basically shows SanDhir in a alternate universe. Here, girls are told to do Mechanical Engineering and all the other exploring kinda subjects while guys have to stick to being a doctor or a businessman because then they are assured a stable job and can take care of the needs of the family. So when Randhir joins FITE, Sanyu's is somewhat a popular person there and their interaction on one random day is the OS.
Hope you guys find it worth a comment! :)


Alterverse

As soon as he entered, he heard shrill voices which reverberated around the classroom. He wasn't surprised though because he knew what he was getting into when he decided to go against his mother and join her field. His father tried to convince him to continue the family business but Randhir Singh Shekawat didn't follow. He made people follow him. It was always that way. In the family, all his cousins looked up to his intelligence, at school, people admired him for being the school's best all rounder but here in college, it wouldn't be easy. It was a challenge and he wasn't a person who backed down from one.

His love for machines was there ever since he went to his mother's office and saw her working on a car's design. Intrigued, he used to go there every weekend just to see how the ideas were developed. Soon, he began to sit in an isolated corner in his house and started working on his own designs with the help of the books in their library.

When he announced that he had gotten into FITE as a Rank 2 student, his mother was shell-shocked. She knew the hard work required getting in and since he used to laze around whenever she was at home, she refused to believe him. After talking with the authorities, Renuka Sainyal was finally convinced her son had gotten in. Even then, she was adamant that she wouldn't let him go. Randhir, understanding that he couldn't convince his mother, ran away from home and being Rank 2, the authorities were more than happy to give him a scholarship. And now, here he was.

Randhir looked around the classroom, trying to spot any boy he could sit with. But just then, one of the professors came in and he sat in the first seat he found empty.

After greeting the professor, Randhir took his seat and finally noticed who he was sitting next to.

The first thing that caught his eyes was the blue streak in her hair. He scanned her from her feet to her head. She was clicking her heels and humming a soft tune. Dressed in a green kurti and blue leggings, she looked very innocent. But that blue streak wasn't letting him believe that.

Due to the noise cause by her heels, Randhir was unable to concentrate on the lecture. At least, that's what he told himself. As the professor left the classroom, Randhir too got up to go to the library as it was free time.

Just as he stood up, someone pulled him back down and it didn't take him too long to realize that it was the blue-streaked girl.

"So girls," she began, "it's not very often that we get sexy meat is it? It's good to know this college hasn't run out of testosterone. But what is a boy doing here? Aren't you all supposed to be sitting in your office and taking care of the family business? Your hands should be filled with money, not grease."

"Stop being so sexist girl. My mother is none other than Renuka Sainyal. I have every right to do Mechanical Engineering. You don't have any right to tell me what to do and what not to do," Randhir told the girl and glared at her.

"Oh but I can new boy. I can because I'm the Rank 1 and I have the authority and support to tell you what to do. You can either choose to listen to it or ignore it. Since you're obviously listening and ignoring it, I would give you a year to last in this college and then you'll be off. Also, Renuka Sainyal is you MOM so she is a woman and she would always support another woman and since you are so NOT a girl and I sure hope not too, she will surely support me," the blue-haired girl told him.

"Listen you blue-haired girl, I..." Randhir began but she interrupted him, "Agarwal. Sanyukta Agarwal. Rank 1. And if you dare call me blue-haired girl, I will make your life a living hell and I'm not even kidding."

"Then you have to stop calling me new boy too Agarwal. I have a name. Randhir Singh Shekawat. Friends and enemies, both call me Randhir. Basically everyone who knows me calls me Randhir so don't you dare shorten it or give a nickname," Randhir told her.

"Whatever Randhir Singh Shekawat," she said, emphasizing at his name.

Happy that his interaction with that egoistic girl was over, Randhir went to canteen and finally found two guys there. They became quick friends and soon found out that they had almost the same classes.

As they went to their next class, there were only three seats which were empty seeing that they had come in late due to not being able to find the class.

The two guys rushed to take their seats in the back of the class, leaving the seat next to Sanyukta the only one free. Left with no choice, Randhir once again took a seat next to Sanyukta.

She leaned in and whispered in his ear, "Addicted to me aren't you?"

"Oh just shut up Agarwal," he said and tried to concentrate on the lecture.

After two more Sanyukta-free' lectures as he called them were done, he headed towards the hostel where he had left his bags. Collecting the keys to his room, he picked up his bag to find that he was with the same guys he met in the canteen.

Since Randhir had joined a day late, he did not know about anyone and received some new-found information.

He learned that though Sanyukta was a first year student, she had been regularly visiting the college earlier too and had formed a gang of her own. Though she was offered a scholarship to join the college early, she wanted to be with people her own age. Due to all the connections, she was considered to be a bully and hence, no one sat with her. In fact, people now admired Randhir for sitting with her and not being bullied. If only they knew.

Not able to sleep as it was a new place, Randhir went out for a walk to clear his head.

He heard the shuffling of footsteps in the corridor behind him and turned to see a girl running with some people following her. The light was very dim but the blue in her hair shimmered under it. Suddenly, the blue disappeared and the others were left searching for her.

He suddenly felt someone's hands creeping up his chest. The person turned him and covered his mouth with her palm.

She engulfed him in a tight hug and told him to follow. Confused, Randhir just hugged her back and they stayed that way in the passionate hug for around ten minutes.

Sanyukta suddenly removed her hands and stepped behind with a smile on her face.

"Why did you just hug me Agarwal?" Randhir asked her with a startled face, his expressions making Sanyukta laugh.

"Don't look so alarmed. I haven't developed feelings for you out of the blue. I needed to hide and I found your body a pretty useful place to hide so I hugged you. Of course, no one would suspect that The Sanyukta Agarwal' will hug anyone so I knew I was safe." Sanyukta told him.

Randhir quickly pulled her into a tight hug and held her there for a few minutes.

When Sanyukta gave him a questioning look, he shrugged and said, "What? I thought someone was coming. You did say no one would suspect us so I just went ahead and hugged. Sorry if I was invading your privacy." Sarcasm was dripping from his voice and the smirk did nothing to hide it.

Sanyukta glared at him and strode off while Randhir sat down on a bench nearby.



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Love,
Ananya




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res??!!!!!..
---unres----
Oh my!!!
Wot an extra-ordinary OS.
I was literally laughing like lunatics while imagining Randhir like this.
Bechara Abhila Nari types...hahahaha!!!!xP
How did you get an idea like this?? I'm still wondering!!
Hahaha!!!!
THE HILLARIOUS OS ON IF.
Damsel in distress en knight in shining armour ka
Knight in distress en Damsel in shining armour kar diya. ROFL.
BUT THE ENDING WAS SUPERB. TOTALLY RANDHIR STYLE.
Keep writing.
Love ya
Samaira.
Edited by iraa_parsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Res. Shit ---Unres----
See?
I told you Mirror...People will love this idea!
By God ki kasam...
Tune kya likha hai re! Kya shabd...kya bhaasha..kya kahaani!
vaah bhai Vaah!
Tune kuch toh sikha apni Kutti se xP
On a serious note, Ananya, I really loved the way you wrote this update.
And for once...it was a long one!
Okay wait. I just realized...this is an OS?!!! After reading the update I thought it was FF xP
Kameeni kahiki. Ultimately chota hi bnaa diya...FF ko OS banaati hai, OS ko drabble! xP
But well I wont force u..cause I really love this write up and its beautiful as it is.
Some parts were pretty hilarious...my mirror can never keep ''Fun n Funny Genre'' out of her updates xP
But thats what make me love it.
Again I want to say ki ur really creative...aise utt pataang idea tu hi soch sakti hai re baba xD
Now i shall stop rambling and just end with a...
YOU"RE A FANTASTIC WRITER!
~Teri SSK <3
PS. Loved the OS name...Creative :) And i cnt believe u made sanyu hav a blue streak!! God...jungli billi..tu aur mai..totally crazy peeps xP And oh, here's my favorite line xP
"So girls," she began, "it's not very often that we get sexy meat is it? It's good to know this college hasn't run out of testosterone. But what is a boy doing here? Aren't you all supposed to be sitting in your office and taking care of the family business? Your hands should be filled with money, not grease."

Randhir IS sexy meat xP Would love to feast on him...dont mind sharing him with u tho..tu toh maari mirror che naa xP


Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I was actually ROFL, lookin at randhir's character!!!
Imagining sanyu as the arrogant chick is easy, bt imagining Randhir as the not-so arrogant genius,is like next to impossible!! 😆
Firstly, I just loved the concept ananya!
So well thought of. It is an awesome OS, jst as i said earlier, difficult to imagine a seedha-saadha Randhir! 😆

Love,
Ifra!
Edited by winchesters - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh Dear. It reminds me of an anime named '****** academy' and the girls hair was blue too. Am i right ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res!

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and since you are so NOT a girl and I sure hope not too

🤣🤣🤣
Ofc not 😆 Don't want the meat to be ahh .. less meaty? God 🤣😲🤣

Damn you. What is the matter with you?! Don't you think we'd obv...iously want to know why she was running?!

Sanyukta is the bully 😳 Wow. No, as much as it is hard to imagine this you make it wayy easier 😳

Randhirr! <3 Just like him to laze around but get into a top rank :D
2?!
😲
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😲
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So unique like I said! Le aur ek aam ko goli 👍🏼 Your day just keeps getting better hain na? 😳⭐️
Edited by themockingblue. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i am going to call it a role reversal!
And I really like this!!!! Imaging Randhir as the the not-so arrogant! while Sanyukta is the oh-so egotistical girl!!!!

The hug at the end... And then the hug again! ROFL! Loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omfg,.
res

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FREAKKK!! When the hell did you become so perfect? 😲
It is PERFECT FROM TIP TO TOE! from where you started author's note to where you ended up the os! althought your os is brilliant so i can speak a lot :$ BUT YOU KNOWW I'm too aalsi !don't blame me if i type rubbishh things . IDK what to say?

Are you sure this idea was of yours? Cuz I freaking cant believe it that Soda can write it! 😆
And then you say I give you diabetes ! YOU BETTER SHUTTT UP CUZ this deserves that ❤️

Randhir like this was not even that I had dreamt in my wildest dreams!

Sodaaa you know I've been waiting for you to update since you updated last, so this was like a omggg day=made kinda thing! ahh
Edited by FlawlessAshvik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So sorry for unresing it so late...
You can definitely kill me if you wish...😕

Alterverse, eh? When I first read it, I had to crack my mind to get through it...
Such a catchy title dear. Apna thoda dimaag mujhe bhi de do na...

Majority of the students are girls!! Did I just read that??🤣
Nothing can be as funny as this.. Infact this is the most unique OS that I've read...
Aapke charan kahaan hai?
Bwahahaha... Sanyukta... blue haired girl...🤣🤣
Can't stop my laughter buddy...My stomach's aching a lot...
Randhir I'm proud of you boy... You handled Sanyukta so well...
Ananya you are too good girl... Infact you are best..👏👏
You are an archetype of beauty with brains. You personify a professional writer.
Everything, every line, every quote was flawlessly penned down.
Do write more stuffs like this. It makes my heart swoon with joy

--With love
Kajal

Edited by --ScarletRed-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cool story.. Plz pm wen u update...

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