AkDha OS :Anklet Love ... ❤️ ❤️

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

This was so sensuous and romantic. Loved it. Would have added more comments but my class started. Keep writing more os.

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Deep Di this Os felt just as awesome as it had when I had read it first on a different couple you write brilliantly is what I'd say..😊.
You metamorphised this write up of yours by adding Jalaal's Naughtiness and love and Jodha' innocence which brought a different touch to this write up and made this a very very very pleasant read for your readers..
The shy demure and innocent Jodha, the smirking and naughty Jalal was something I loved reading.. Awesome job deeps di..
Love,
Kashmi..😃.

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Loved it to core... So hawwttt😳

Just Loveddd it...

Beautiful... I loved how you described their feelings..emotions...pure love n passion...

Amazing...

Thnks for pm :)

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

that was superb... Plz PM me next time

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Radz

@...Radhika...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesome buddy
do pm me next time

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Oh my god ... whatta an update deepika ... i was so much lost in reading the update never knew when it got over & when it got over i was irritated that the update is finished 😡 ... just one word BEAUTIFUL👏 ...

N i loved jalal when he said "Jaan" to jodha ... n those golden words by jalal "HUM AAPKE MAUJUDGI KO MEHSOOS KAR SAKTE HAIN JAAN... HAMARI DHADKANE BATA DETI HAIN ... KI AAP HAMARE KAREEB HAIN ... HAMARE AAS PAAS HAI ..." uff i was torn into pieces ... !! absolutely blissful & mesmerizing

kudos deepika !!!!👏

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Beautifully written!👏. I loved the way you used the anklets! And the part which followed later was hot!

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sara

@SARA4444

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

⭐️a lovely lovely lovely update ⭐️

SR...☺️

really amazing writing

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Tahniat Ahmad

@Sexylicious.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Wowww! I'm in AkDha dreamland ☺️
Everything about this OS was perfect. I was blushing all along and had a smile plastered around my face ☺️ it was so romantic. Loved the way he was saying Jaan to her.. Beautiful