AkDha OS :Anklet Love ... ❤️ ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey friends ..here is an OS on AkDha..I wrote it for some other TV couple but yesterday's promo and today's episode made me convert it according to AkDha story and characters...Hope you will like the OS..If any part of this Oneshot hurts any readers sentiments,its not intentional .

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He entered her room...opened his jootiyan near the entrance..This has become a habit for him...He has learned to respect others' emotions after her arrival in his life.. It was a really tiring day for him .He really had a long day at the Deewan-e-Khas.Back to back meetings with his various ministers and discussions regarding many pending governance kept him occupied whole day.The old Jalal would have gone to his hojra after being so tired ,and have his favorite drink to lessen the tiredness.But this was the changed Jalal.He can't even think of a day ,without witnessing her beautiful face,without caressing her silky hair,without witnessing her heart-melting smile.When did his world start revolving around her,he couldn't keep a track.

His heart wouldn't let him stay in peace without getting a glimpse of his love...Old jalal called himself heartless and took pride in being called as the "heartless emperor" ...only when SHE entered his life and made him aware of the existence of his heart ...she introduced him to this divine feeling called LOVE...

Jodha ...he called her name...kahan he aap ...while entering the hall...

Kahan chali gayi Jodha ...wo bhi itne raat ko...he asked himself...

Surprisingly he couldn't find any of her dasi in the room.Her hojra was usually the most calm and peaceful place in the entire Agra fort.But tonight he was not able to witness even the slightest hint of life there.The only diya lightened in front of her Kanha was providing a divine effect to the place.

Apart from the diya in front of her Kanha ..the room was all dark...

Koi hai...ye Jodha begum ke hojre me itna andhera kyu he...he shouted...he signaled his servants to come in.But nobody answered.



Jodha ...kahan hain aap?

Chhhunnn...chunnn...chunn...chunnn

He heard a sweet sound...he recognized the sound...it's the sweet melody of her anklets...her anklets ...he smiled at his own thought.

He tried to know the direction..the sound is coming from...

Chhhunnn...chunnn...chunn...chunnn

The sound moved towards upstairs...he followed the sound...whole room was in dark...only the moonlight coming from the windows was helping him ...showing him the path and HER ANKLETS...leading him towards her...his destination...it led his to the terrace of his harem...The open space was supposed to be a place to get some fresh air for the harem women ...they didnt realize when this peaceful place became a regular spot for the Shehensha and his beloved begum to steal some moments of love in each others embrace..

Kahan hain aap Jodha ..tadpa kyu rahi hain...samne kyu nehi aati humari...he pleaded...

Dekhiye ..hum aapko dekhne ke liye betaab ho rahe hain...he said in velvety tone..

Chhhunnn...chunnn...

He smiled at her innocence ...

Ohh...toh humari pyari begum humare saath khel khelna chahti he...Khel...humare saath...he smirked at his thought ...aap chahti hain ke hum aap dhunde ...aap hume chunauti de rahi hain begum sahiba...

Chhuun..chuun...the melodious tone answered his question ..challenging him to find his love...

Thik hain..him khelenge aap ke saath..ye khel...lekin Shehensha-e-Hind kabhi khel me baimani nehi karte...aap ke payal aap se daga kar rahe he Jodha begum...unki meethi si gunj hume rasta dikha raha raha he...

(Ohk my Queen...you want to play the game...THE GAME... u want me to search for you...no problem...but Jalaluddin Mohammad always plays fair game...i can hear the sweet melody of your anklets...)

Ohh...she bite her lips...& tried to take out her anklets...


Ahh...Jodha begum...itne berehemi se apne gulab ke pankhudiyon jaise hothon ko danton tale mat dabaiye ...in hothon pe hume sirf humari mohabbat ki nishani pasand he...he teased her...

(Don't bite your lips Jodha begum...that's my job...leave it to me...he teased her ...)



She blushed ...to the deepest shed of red... hey Kanha ...ye hume kya ho jata he Shehensha ke upastiti me...wo samne aate he toh hume kuch nehi sujhta...humari bichar shakti kyu sunn pad jati hain...she whispered to herself..



(Shehensha why do you have this effect on me...i can't think straight when you are around...u work like my personal drug...she whispered to herself..)

He finally spotted his angel trying hide herself from him...he stood in a distance admiring her antics..her innocence...



His deep dark brown orbs were fixed on her angelic face ...her beauty was beyond words to explain ...her glowing complexion was enhanced with the moonlight falling on her ...creator must be so proud of this creation of his...he thought while admiring the angelic beauty in front of him..



Her divine beauty ...her angelic face...the beautiful smile playing on those perfectly carved lips...the pair of heavenly hazel orbs...her failed attempts to irritate him...he wanted to crash his lips on her and erase all those signs of annoyance from her face...




Her petite frame adorned in a beautiful white lehenga bejeweled with adornments...her deep cut choli was hugging her curves perfectly ..her almost bare back with only the threads to hold the piece of cloth in place teased his senses...She had let her hair open with soft curls settled on her shoulders which was making her look even more beautiful...only if it was possible.. She had accessorized herself with a diamond necklace with matching ear rings...her mangal sutra like always remained a part of her existence ..her maang tika adorned her forehead along with a thick line of sindoor ..the sign of her suhaag... bangles dancing on her delicate wrists were creating a heavenly melody in the deep silence of the night ...his eyes roamed all over her...her bare midriff titillated his imaginations...his eyes drank her image shamelessly ...all he wanted to do that moment was to take her in his embrace and place the signs of his love all over her...



He decided to take his sweet revenge for the hide and seek game ...and snaked his arms around her...



She felt a strong pair of arms around her petite waist ..



Ahhh...jaan... hum aap ke dil ki dhadkane hazaron mil ki duri se bhi mehsoos kar sakte he aur aap yahan apne aap se guftagu karne me masruf hain...aap ko lagta he hum aapki sanso ko sun nehi sakte ...aap ke dhadkano ko mehsoos nehi kar sakte...he whispered softly...in her ears and hugged her from back...



(Ahhh...meri jaan...i can hear your heart beats from thousand miles and you are whispering here...and you think I can't search you...he whispered softly...in her ears...he hugged her from back...)



He moved his fingers on her creamy and soft skin of her waist...her heart started beating harder...as if it would jump out of her chest any time...he moved her hair from her back ...his fingers caressed her bare back playing with the delicate thread that held her blouse on place...he untied the thread and kept it half-opened...a slight touch can undo the cloth covering her torso...shivers ran through her frame sensing his touch on her bare skin...he moved his hand towards her neck...making patterns on her back...her breaths became heavy with the movement of his fingers...she was loosing her senses...he planted a trail of wet kisses on her creamy back... ...moved toward her nape...teasing it with his lips...he played with her ear lobes...with his tongue...continued moving the other hand fingers on her navel...



Jalaaal...she moaned his name..she was helpless... that very moment...she just wanted to be HIS...HIS JODHA..



He always loved the way his name sounded in her voice...his name used to sound so pure in her honey sweet voice..she continued to address him as Shehensha even after they became inseparable ..her religious belief and values didn't allow her to take her husbands name.He never forced her to go against her values.She knew he loved to hear his name in her voice.So during their precious moments of love ,he got this bonus of listening to his own name in her melodious voice..



Hum aap se bahut prem karte hain Jalal...she somehow managed say this line...



Hum bhi aapse bepanah mohabbat karte he Jodha..humare saath ki pehli saalgirah mubrak ho Jaan ...he whispered huskily near her ears...



aap ko ...aap ko yeh din smaran tha Jalal?...she asked...innocently ...



Beshak Jaan...jis mubarak din pe ...aap humare zindagi me aayi thi...humare dil ko humse rubaru karane...humare dil-o-jaan par huqumat karne apne mohabbat se...Allah ne humari zindagi ka sabse sunhara panna likhna shuru kiya tha aaj hi ke din...hum aaj ka din kaise bhul sakte he Jodha...jis din ishq aap ka surat le kar humare zindagi me aaya tha...he said...still rubbing his lips on her neck...

(Of course baby.. today was the day you made your way to my house..my life..my heart...forever...how can I forget this day...he said...still rubbing his lips on her neck... )



Ohh...Jalal..she turned around...now she was standing in front him..facing him...her hands rested on his chest...which was beating loudly..chanting her name...she used call him heartless after their wedding...she never imagined she will discover his heart of gold and will feel blessed to make his heart ...her home...she didn't even realize when this heartless emperor started ruling over her heart...and became her destiny ..the sole reason behind her existence ...

He saw her angelic face...the silver melting moonlight made her glowing skin shine like silver...her eyes...her lips...her cheeks...her hair...perfect creation of the creator...HIS JODHA...he was lost in her angelic beauty ...



Jalal...



Ummm...he replied ..still lost in her beautiful face...



Hume aapna bana lijiye ...she said in a seductive tone...blushing and feeling shy at the same time...



He smiled at his angel...



Par aap toh humari hi he Jodha...humari wajood ka hissa he aap..he chuckled ...



Umm...she was trying hard to find words...she was playing with his outfit buttons...simultaneously ...she had opened almost all the buttons...by now...her fingers were moving on his bare chest...



Jalaal...she said in fake anger...trying to hide her crimson red face..



Next moment she felt his soft lips on hers...he kissed her gently with all his love and affection...she responded to the kiss in no time...she parted her lips and gave him a better access...his tongue entered her mouth and their tongues danced in unison..to the beautiful melody of love...their pure love...he picked her in his arms... and walked towards her hojra without breaking the kiss...she had arranged their bed in her room and decorated it with rose petals...to celebrate their togetherness...



They were lost in their world of love and passion...moon was peeping through the window...he was the witness of this beautiful scene...two angels...deeply in love...lost in each other...making love to each other ...two soul mates...



They were moaning each others name...their voices full of passion and love were creating a beautiful melody in the deep silence of the night...



Jalal...she said while adjusting her head on his bare chest ...in to a comfortable position...



hmmm...he replied...still lost in her addictive fragrance ...her hair was covering his face...he was enjoying her weight on him ...



Aap ko kaise pata chala ki hum..hum yahan the...humne toh apni payal bhi utar diye the...she asked innocently...

(How did u know?...I was here...even after I removed my anklets...she asked innocently...)

He smiled ...and pressed his lips on hers ...



Hum aapki maujdgi ko mehsoos kar sakte hain Jaan...humari dhadkane bata deti hain ki..aap humare kareeb hain...humare aas paas..he said against her lips...

(I can feel your presence sweetheart...my heartbeats give the sign that you are around...he said against her lips...)

His eyes absorbed her silver melting beauty under the moon light...his perfect moon was giving tough competition to the imperfect one shining in the sky...his grip tightened around her delicate frame... she was feeling blessed to be in the arms of her love...the love of her life..

Moon was blushing hard witnessing two souls madly in love ..soon it hid behind the cloud..giving them some privacy...



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hey guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment ... i will wait for your comments and feedback ...









Edited by _Deepika_ - 11 years ago


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...Deepika... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PLEASE ADD THIS ID FOR FURTHER PM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deepika... It was awesome... Loved it... It wasss soo hott... And pls do write more stories... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bhut acha and wonderful work
Why os yaar can't u continue

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear...mood achha ho gaya mera...
next tym plz PM me...when u write something
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its sooo beautiful and romantic 😳
I just love it.
pls write some more on Akdha.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the lovely comments guys😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome loved it
Beautifully written
Please pm me next time when u rite an OS ff or ss 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Di it was fabulous... 😃 though i have read it before with different characters...but enjoyed reading it all over again... 😳

just loved every bit of it..it was quite romantic.. 😳
love d way u have portrayed d story...

song selection ws simply perfect... 👍🏼

love Divya 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful write up... sensual update... Please Please start FF from beginning... I am dying to read from beginning story...
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