SanDhir SS :: As Long As You Love Me # 2 *Day 5 updated*

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SanDhir SS :: As Long As You Love Me

By Safrena and Sonia


Prologue

She stood on a bridge counting last minutes of her life.
She is gonna commit suicide. Yes, you heard it right ... Suicide. Cause she was left alone, all alone.

Her parents passed away in an accident when she was 7. There is no one left in the world to help her, protect her. She live in an orphanage for past many years and she is too-old to be adopted.

She slowly came to the edge of the bridge, took a deep breath remembering everything that happened in her life; moments with her parents, moments in orphanage everything.

She reached the end. She was awestruck with the beauty of this place. She felt light weight standing there, cool breeze hitting her, amazed by the beauty of this place she forgot the actual reason she came.

She felt someone presence. She gulped when she looked down from there and suddenly she heard someone reaching her.

"Randhir Singh Shekawat???" She breathed out

"Yes Randhir Singh Shekawat ... what are you doing here Ms. Sanyukta Agarwal???" He asked

Sanyukta ignored him ... took a long breath and was about to jump
when Randhir said

" Give me ten days and i will give you ten reasons to live "

Will Sanyukta jump ???
Will Randhir be able to save her from committing suicide ???

What will be those Ten reasons ???
Will these ten days make Sanyukta and Randhir ... SanDhir ???




Sanyukta : Although loneliness has always been a friend of mine
I'm leavin' my life in your hands
People say I'm crazy and that I am blind
Risking it all in a glance
And how you got me blind is still a mystery
I can't get you out of my head
Don't care what is written in your history
As long as you're here with me


Randhir : I don't care who you are Where you're from
What you did. As long as you love me
Who you are Where you're from
Don't care what you did As long as you love me





INDEX

Thread #1

Prologue

Author's Note + PM List

Character Sketch

Day 1

Day 2

Day 3

Day 4

Thread #2

Day 5

Day 6

Day 7

Day 8

Day 9

Day 10

Epilogue



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Day 5




* ~ * Randhir's PoV *~*

The alarm's sound woke me up from my beautiful dream. Sighing dreamily I rubbed my eyes lazily yawning and stretching my body. I took my phone to check with time and messaged her

Good Morning Sanyukta :)

I knew she would have messaged as she wakes up ... i guess, she is still sleeping.

Sanyukta had exchanged her number with me yesterday. We spoke a bit via message yesterday night. God knows when i drifted to sleep. The second I put the phone back on table it rang indicating she is up. I quickly opened and a huge grin was spreading on my face as my eyes trailed at her text.

Good Morning Randhir :)
You woke up so early ... I just woke up *yawning*

Smiling at her reply ... i replied

Yup! I woke up early today ... I will wait for you outside your place. So we can walk to college together :) what say???

I crossed my fingers hoping for a positive reply. Soon message bell rang again and with trembling hands I hit the open button.

Ok! I will be ready in 15 :)

I smiled taking the breath of relief. Quickly I typed the text

Ok :D

*~*

Walk to college was silent. As we entered Kaustuki rushed to us and said Prof. Vardhaan is waiting for us in his cabin.

We reach Prof. Vardhaan's cabin.

Sanyukta : Sorry Sir ... we're late

Prof. Vardhaan : You guys are just in time ... Come in.

We walk in ... our elbows brush against each other. I guess, Sanyukta felt awkward, as she moves away, while i just smile at her.

Prof. Vardhaan : I want to see your Dream Team Report by tomorrow

Sanyukta : Sir, tomorrow???

Prof. Vardhaan : Yes Sanyukta ... is there any problem???

Sanyukta : But Sir, that's too soon ... how are we suppose to prepare the report?

Me : We will do it Sir ... No worries!!!

Prof. Vardhaan : That's good ... you guys can leave now.

Sanyukta just gives up and walks out of the office.

Sanyukta : Randhir! what the hell ??? How will we complete everything ???

Me : Whoa! calm down ... we'll finish it.

Sanyukta : What the hell ??? You ...

I placed my finger on her lips and hold her by her waist

"Ssshhh ... how much do you talk ???"

* ~ * Sanyukta PoV * ~ *

I was caught off guard. I was lost in his deep brown eyes, they were kinda mesmerizing; his touch sending all those alien feelings through me.

Randhir : Sanyukta, trust me ... we'll finish it.

I finally returns to my sense.

Me : Alright! Now can you leave me???

Randhir : Why ??? *smirks*

Me : Cos am feeling uncomfortable ... now let me go!!!

Randhir : Uncomfortable huh?? *smiles* Fine

Randhir lets goes of me ... and moves back to create a distance.

For some reason I felt as if i wanted him to continue holding me. I brushed away those thoughts as Randhir said

" So, where shall we meet to start working on the Reports???"

Me : Dunno

Randhir : I have an idea ... My place ??? I already have sum of the stuffs for the report ready at my house. So, it will be easier for us.

Sanyukta : Cool!!!

*~*

We walk up to Randhir's room. Randhir opens the door and lets me walk-in first. I look around the room in awe. It had a 42" inch LCD TV mounted to the wall and the best built in sound system all around the room; all of Randhir's branded shoes were arranged neatly at a corner and the room was pretty clean for a guy.

Me and Randhir were busy working on the report when we heard

Renuka Saniyal : Randhir Beta you had your lunch

She stops in mid ... as her eyes met mine

Randhir : Mom, meet Sanyukta. We are here to do our Dream Team project. We had lunch from canteen.

She walks near me and cups my face. Smiling she said

"Ok! You both continue with your project. I will arrange for drinks and snacks"

I return a smile back as she left the room.

Randhir : Ok Mom!

We continue working on Reports till 7 and manages to finish the reports.

Randhir : Finally we are done.

Me : Ya finally!

*~* *~*

Randhir walks out of the room; as he got a call from Yo Yo. I look around the room and saw a small Music station attached to him room.

A bit hesitant i walked in. There was so many Musical instruments. I brushed my fingers on guitar when Randhir enter back the room.

Me : You love singing ???

Randhir : Ya! and you ???

Me : Ya! It was my hobby. Now i don't have any such

I stopped as i looked at Randhir.

He looked at me for 5 seconds ... taking my hand in his, he pulled me near the station.

Adjusting the mic and taking Guitar in his hands; he signaled me to start singing.

As i knew, there is no meaning in opposing; i gave in.

Randhir starts playing the guitar

Me : Hmmm ... Aaa aaa aaahhh

Me : I can't Randhir ... its too long i haven't sang

Randhir : Ok! Listen ... i will start

Randhir : Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa


I couldn't help but to get drowned into his melodious voice.

Me : You sing so beautifully Randhir!!!

Randhir : Oh hello! its you who have to sing, not me.

Sanyukta : Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa


Randhir : Itna bata doon tujhko
Chaahat pe apni mujhko
Yun tto nahi ikhtiyaar
Phir bhi yeh socha dil ne
Ab jo laga hoon milne
Poochhu tujhe ek baar


SanDhir : Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa


Randhir : Aisi kabhi pehle hui naa thi khwaahishein
O.. kisi se bhi milne ki
Naa ki thi koshishein
Uljhan meri suljha de
Chaahun main ya naa
Aankhon aankhon mein jataa de
Chaahun main ya naa


We both went downstairs as Randhir's Mom call us to have tea and snacks. Randhir's Mom is so friendly. She spoke to me a lot and i could somewhere see my Mom in her.

Once we were done with tea, Randhir and me started walking towards my place.

We were walking along a park ... when i twirl around and started singing.

Sanyukta : Mere chhote chhote khwaab hain
Khwabon mein geet hain
Geeton mein zindagi hai
Chaahat hai, preet hai
Abhi main na dekhoon khwaab woo
Jin mein na tu mile
Le khole honth maine
Ab tak the jo sile

Mujhko na jitna mujh pe
Utna iss dil ko tujh pe
Hone laga aitbaar
Tanha lamhon mein apne
Bunti hoon tere sapne
Tujhse hua mujhko pyaar o o..
Poochungi tujhko kabhi naa
Chaahun main ya naa
Tere khaabon mein ab jeena
Chaahun main kyun naa!


Randhir : Tu hi yeh mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa



After a small dance and lots of laughter, we reached my place. We were standing near the Orphanage gate; and i was about to enter when Randhir held my hand.

I turn around to look at him. Our eyes met; after an eye lock of 15-20 seconds, which felt like ages for me; Randhir slowly walk near me.

He slowly cup my face and kissed on my forehead; and i automatically closed my eyes. Our eyes again met.

"I guess, you got today's your reason to live without me telling itself "

Saying that he walked away. I stood there staring his back until he disappeared.



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Edited by Anysia - 12 years ago
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Edited by Anysia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sonia di!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sandhirlicious Update!!!!!!!!!
Loved the day5...I think the reason That Randhir gave today is enough for her to live in her life!!!!!!!!!
Now I got wat made u update chahaun main ya na!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update👏
Loved randhir's fifth reason😊
Update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
--Unres--
First of all I'm really very sorry for unres. So late...uh see I had my JEE exam yday...so I had res. My comments on 6-7 ffs hahha!!!
Now m reading those ffs en editing all those cmmnts. :) hope uh understand!

En this the first time I'm commenting on your ff...uh remember I once scrapped uh telling uh how much I love your work but cudnt comment due to tech errors...but dose errors r sorted out now...en I can cmmnt now...yayyy!!!!

Ohk I noe I've given a long explanation :p
Now coming to update:)

It was ethereal piece of work. I loved it to the core.
En the most amazing thing was dat Randhir didn't state the reason this time, en even Sanyu knew what reason he was talking about:) I loved the way uh penned it...beautiful is the word!!
sometimes action speak louder dan words!
I'm so in love with this FF.
It is indeed one of the best on IF.
So update asap.
Again sorry for unres. So late!!
En yea..thanx for scrap.:)
Loads of love
Samaira :)
Edited by iraa_parsh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
Edited by unishaz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Sonia di...
you rocked..!!
I loved this update.. it was full of Sandhir moments...
plz update nxt part soonish..
nd thanks for da scrap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is the most beautiful & mesmerizing FF I'm reading... So far 4th part posted & I loved each & every part... 😳
But, I feel connected to this part cause music is like my best-friend... I can't live without it... It gives sanity to my stressed soul... 😛
The way you described it was so simple but it was so beautifully penned that it would connect to heart automatically... 👏

It was PERFECT... 👍🏼



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Posted: 12 years ago
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AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING!!!!!!!
Loved the day 5
the song part was so mesmerizing 😳
loved it...😳

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