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Hello TaaReyians

First of all,I am really sorry for delay in the updates and I know you guys are really upset with me and many of you even PMed me about your displeasure for my slow pace in updating.I just want to clear some things before updating.Guys I just finished my 12th boards which were hell tiring for me as well as my family.Especially My MOM,during my exams I totally ignored spending time with her and now its obvious that she expects me to give her my whole time.And then I have many entrance exams to go through which are hell important for my carrier.And no matter how I love writing but my carrier will be my first priority.I can't take any risk with it.

I totally understand and your anger is justified but tryin understand my point of view also.

So,I can't help it.I'll update as per the requirement of time and situation.

Sorry if I hurt anyone with my words.





Chapter 9(A) Loving you is the most natural thing in world

Taani and Rey were still lying on the bed.His one hand was wrapped around her waist and the other one was caressing her face and hair simultaneously.

And she was just resting on his chest and listening the soothing music of his heart beats.

They were enjoying the blissful time with each other forgetting the outer world and its problems.

But they were harshly pulled backed from their dream world by shrilling ring of his phone.

He talked for a while and then chucked the call and got up, followed by her.

Rey:"My friends are waiting for me on deck.We've an important meeting with event manager"

He said buttoning down her dress and adjusting it properly on her shoulders.She just smiled on his care and nodded in understanding.

Rey:"All the best"

He said pecking her lips.

Taani:"U too.Rey,there are already many risks in this mission and I don't want to risk anything more.So,please I want you..."

She said in low tone.He was adjusting her hair properly which were totally disheleved by him earlier.

Rey:"I know.I'll maintain a safe distance from you and your team.But only outside this room.Once we are In ,Nothing can stop me from being close with you"

He said cupping her cheeks and then winked with his mischevious remark.She just blushed and smacked his shoulder.

Before she could respond he placed his lips on hers.

He started kissing her softly and she was again surprised by the way he was kissing her.He always amazes her by kissing her like as its their first kiss.Whenever he kisses her she feels like a desperate love sick teenager.Her heart always flips with his touch and she feels thousands of butterflies in her stomach.

He held her waist in his hands and she just started roaming her hands in his as he started exploring her mouth.

She just let him do whatever he wants and enjoyed his touch to the fullest.

Today she was feeling so different when he was kissing her.She never felt like this before.

He broke the kiss and pecked her lips dozen times and gave her chance to breadth.

When she didn't protested or responded he again placed his lips on hers and made her lye down on bed and cupped her face and kissed her more deeply.

She was totally surprised by his way of kissing.

Today,It was like he doesn't want to let her go.He just wants to keep her with him always.

And Then she felt little wetness on her cheeks and she realized that its his tears,He is crying.

Till now many people cared about her but their care always suffocated her.Their care was like a hurdle in between her passion for her work.

But his care is doing everything but suffocating her.His love is unconditional for her.He doesn't demand or complaint anything.He just loves her.

His care is like a push for her to work more hard.He is not stopping her from doing her duty or giving her thousand lectures to protect herself.

He is just giving her strength and making her believe that there is someone who cares about her.Who is waiting for her to come back.Who depends on her and her love.Who needs her and will be there for her forever.

And at that moment she realized the depth of his love for her.She realized that he loves her much more than she would ever be able to love him.

~

They both got dressed properly and were standind just infront of her rooms door.

He turned her around and made her stand with her back touching the door.

Rey:"I Love you.And no matter what I am always there for you.Don't feel youself alone.All the best"

He kissed her shortly for one last time.

At that time Taani wanted to just complete her mission as soon as possible and then come back to him and kiss him deeply and tell him her feelings for him.To just scream on top her voice that...YES She is in love with Reyaansh Singhania.

He broke the kiss and kissed her forhead and then looked in her eyes.And what he saw there gave him shock .For the first time he saw Love in her eyes.Nothing else,Just Pure love.

She arched on her toes and pecked her lips and then opened the door of her room and left from there.

He was just standing inside her room and smiling like a fool.

At that moment he realized he doesn't need any words from her.He just knew that She also loves him like he loves her.

~

Taani and Shaleen were sitting on deck.They were discussing about the plan.KaJai went for a look over whole cruise.

They were just discussing further when KaJai joined them.

Karan:"Guys we just spotted Raana downstairs.He is staying on the third floor"

Karan shared the information with Taaleen which he and Jai got.

Jai:"Its not safe to be here. He knows our real identity.So,lets move in our room before he spot us here"

Everyone nodded and then moved inside Taani's room.

Karan:"He is attending some masquerede party tonight.He will finalise the deal there only"

Karan said as they all got settled in room.

Shaleen:"Great.Then we'll catch him there only"

Shaleen said in his business like tone.

Taani:"No,Bhai only invited people are allowed in that party"

Taani said KaJai looked at her in surprise.

Karan:"How do you know this?"

Taani:"Rey and his team are performing in this party.He was inviting me coz one of their team mate is absent and they have an extra pass"

She said but KaJai were smirking and were teasing her.She gave them a hard look to stop them.

Shaleen:"That's great.You ask for the extra pass and then one of us will enter inside"

Shaleen said after thinking for a while.

Taani:"Bhai we can't enter inside like this.There are chances for us being caught.They have dancer's passes and we are not their team members so security will check us properly.And we can't risk by telling our real identity to any security member"

Taani said thinking over the matter.Everyone nodded understanding her point.She always thinks of all the aspects of matter and that's why she is the head of team.

Jai:"Can anyone of us enter as a dancer?I mean it's a mask party so no one can identify anyone.So,one of us can enter with dance team"

He said and everyone smiled understanding his point.

Shaleen:"But Can we trust that guy over this matter?Do you trust him Taani?"

Shaleen asked Taani .She knew she can trust him totally.

Taani:"Yes Bhai,I trust him"

She said with confidence and the trio smiled.They knew that their friend has fallen in love finally.

Karan:"Okay,Then call your Romeo and his team here"

Karan said patting Taani's back.She glared him angrily and then went aside to call her Romeo ummm means Rey.

Karan,Jai and Shaleen never doubted Taani's decision.They knew she can never make any wrong choice.And that's the reason they never raised any question on person she trusts.She can never trust any person who is not worth it.

~

Rey and D3 team were having coffee on deck when Rey got a call from Taani.He smiled and excused himself.SwaRon shared a glance as they knew from smile on their friends face that with whom he is talking to.

He came back after talking to Taani.She explained him about her plan and asked him to have a talk with his friends.She told him about all the dangers in mission and asked him to give her any answer after talking to his friends only.She doesn't wanted to force them to help her and risk their lives.So,She asked him to first talk to his friends and If they are ready then only meet her in her room.

Rey:"Guys I want to discuss something serious with you.Lets move in my room"

He said gaining his friends attention who were doing their usual masti.

SwaRon gave him a questioning look and he assured them by his nod.They all went inside ReYam's room and after everyone got settled Rey stood up in front of them.

Rey:"As you all know that my girl friend Taani is in NCB..."

He said an everyone hooted and teased him but he asked them to listen to him carefully as its important and serious matter.

Rey:"She is here on this cruise and she informed me that today some smugglers and criminals are attending the party in which we are performing"

He said and everyone gasped in shock.

Rey:"Taani and her team is here to arrest those smugglers.They need our help to enter in that party.One of them wants to enter with us as a dancer.They doubt that most of people attending the party have criminal links.And we guys are also trapped coz now we can't deny the offer of party as its risky for our lives and attending the party is also dangerous.But she is assuring us full safety even if we deny to help them.So,The decision is in your hands whether you want to help our counties Police Force or not"

He said in one breadth.Everyone was shocked with this peiece of news.

Swayam:"Rey I think we should help them.Its our country also and being a good citizen its our responsibility to help our protectors"

He said getting up and keeping a assuring hand over Rey's shoulder.

Sharon:"Yes,Swayam is right.Peole like Taani and her team are putting their lives in danger to just protect us.So,Its our responsibility to help them in every way possible"

Vicky:"Yep, very few people gets chances like this to do something for country.So,I am in guys"

Simmi:"Its quite adventurous also"

Nil:"I second that.Its so adventurous to help police secretly and watch their live fight with criminals"

Everyone agreed and they all asked Rey to talk to Taani and tell her that they are ready to help in everyway possible.

~

D3 team and NCB team was sitting in Taani's room.Taani was explaining them the whole plan.Sharon told Taani about whole ball room.As she is the manager and she inspected the whole place earlier in morning to make sure that there is enough space for performing.She told her the view of whole floor where this party is organized.About the place of green room and other places beside Ball room.

Taani discussed the entering plan with them.

Jai:"The plan is superb Boss.Now We'll show that Vardhaan and Raana that its not easy to get away from hold of NCB"

He said getting up and giving a high five to Taani.

Karan:"Dude please teach me some dance moves Or else I'll ruin everything there inside"

Karan said to Vicky and Nil.He easily made a good bond with these two.As they are also like him and love to play pranks on others.

Taani:"Wahi don't bother.You are not going inside.You'll be near floor entering to assure everything.And Jai you'll be on deck of cruise.I already asked Commissioner Sir to send a ship to rescue the innocent passengers.So,You make sure that everything is in order.And Bhai you'll be near Ball room to give me covering if needed"

She said explaining them their places on chart hanging on wall.

Karan:"What the hell.You must be kidding.There is no way I would let you take this risk.And your shoulder is already injured after the stunt you played yesterday.So,you better stay at some safe distance from Ball Room"

Karan said getting up and standing in front of Taani.

Shaleen:"He is right Taani.You are already injured and We are not even sure about Raana's plan and his force here.We doesn't even know which kind of weapon he is carrying.So,We can't risk here"

He said taking side of Karan.D3 team was confused and was sitting there watching them fight.They were surprised with the news that Taani injured herself yesterday and today is here on mission.

Taani:"What the hell is your problem guys?Why are you making a big issue of this small injury.I am perfectly fine and capable of fighting even hundreds if needed"

She said angrily.Everyone except Taani's team was shocked and scared by her anger.

Jai:"Its not a small injury Taanu.You hit yourself with Iron rod and your wound is still fresh"

He said after gaining courage to deal with her anger.KaLeen nodded on his point.

Taani:"You just stop showing me your forensic knowledge,Jai.It was my decision to continue this mission.So,You all are my responsibility"

She said angrily and Jai backed off accepting his defeat.

Karan:"But..."

Taani:"Who is the Head here"

Karan tried to speak but she cut him in between.

Karan:"You"

He said like a child who just got defeated in a big fight for his favorate chocolate.

Taani:"So,Its my order that you all will be on the places I decided for you and I'll go inside."

She said with finality in her tone and everyone knew that it's the end of conversation.

~

It was past 6 pm and everyone gathered on the floor where Masquerade party is to be held.They all were standing outside the security check.D3 members were hell nervous and were sweating badly.But Taani's eyes were trying to figure out everything inside.She saw many workers working up for party and doing final touch ups with the floor decorations.

Shaleen who was standing on the lower part of floor near staircase gave her a thumbs up and wished her good luck and she returned his gesture with a big smile.

Sharon being the manager took the lead and showed their entry passes on security check.

Everyone prayed to got to help them let in.

Taani was looking straight going through the plan in her mind when she felt some cold fingers engulfing her palm and squeezing it asuringly.She looked up at his face and felt herself relaxing more.She felt sudden strength building inside her as she looked into his eyes.He blinked and passed her a beaming smile and that fluttered her heart once again.She felt his holding her palm with his fingers and massing the back of her hand with his thumb.And then without anyone's notice he placed a loving kiss on her head.

Rey:"I love you"

She just relaxed herself on his shoulder .She wrapped her hand on his arm and kept her head on his arm and felt like all the tensions of world vanished for her.

She never felt so relaxed and better before.

After checking smoothly on security she moved inside along with him with a new found strength in her.

~

She got inside the right side on green room with all the girls.Boys were alloted with the left one.

She suddenly felt a void in her heart as she parted her ways from him.She knew they are just little far and that too not for long but she didn't liked this feelings.She didn't liked to be away from him even for a moment.

She dragged herself forward and stood up beside girls who were now getting dressed in the beautiful dresses for their performance.Though now the performance was last thing on their minds.They just wanted to pass through this as soon as possible.

Part B(Next page first post)

Edited by butterfly-ravee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hola TaaReyians :)





Chapter 9(B) Loving you is the most natural thing in world


D3 team finished their performance and came inside green room where Taani was waiting for them.

The girls entered inside and saw Taani dressed in a beautiful red and black dress.She was looking hell sexy and beautiful in that dress which Sharon gave her for the ball party.She has done her hair in a loose bun going good with her dress.Dangling earrings hanging in her ears and a beautiful bracelet on her wrist studded with shining diamonds.She was wearing beautiful black high heels.



Sharon:"Taani,you are looking so gorgeous"

She said coming forward where Taani was standing.Taani passed her a beautiful smile.

Simmi:"And damn Sexy also.Rey is totally gone today"

She said winking at the last part.Taani blushed on her comment and tried to look anywhere but girls.

Then Sharon and other girls also pulled out their dresses from their bags and started getting ready for the ball party.

Taani strolled out from green room as there was nothing left for her to do.She dialed Karan's number on her phone and started instructing him about the further plan.She entered inside a vacant space.


She continued talking to her team mates as she moved towards the boy's green room.She suddenly felt a hand on her shoulder.But it was not needed to turn as she could easily recognize HIS touch.

Rey:"Missed me?"

He asked keeping a hand on her waist and kissing her shoulder.

Taani:"You have no idea"

She turned around and placed her lips on his in an urgent kiss.

They both kept devouring each other's lips like hungry people.

Rey:"I love you"

He pecked her lips after breaking the kiss.

~

They both started moving out following the D3 team.But suddenly he pulled her inside the green room.

Taani:"What happened,Rey?"

She asked as he closed the door behind them.

Rey:"Shhh"

He shushed her by keeping a finger on her lips.

LLHH

He pulled out a beautiful ring from his pocket and slipped it into her finger.


Rey:"Wanted to give you in room but was not sure about your reaction"

He said explaning her.

Taani:"Hmmm and now? Are you sure about by reaction now?"

She asked with tongue in cheek.He smiled and pecked her lips.

Rey::Yes I am"

<Knock-Knock>

Sharon:"Love birds,romance baad mein kar lena.Come fast"

Sharon shouted from outside.

Rey:"Just five minutes"

He held her from her waist and pulled her more towards himself.

Rey:"Did I told you that you are looking damn sexy in this dress?"

He asked roaming his hands on her back.

Taani:"No.you didn't"

She replied keeping her hands on his chest.

Rey:"Hmmm.Koi nahi ab bata dete hai.You are looking damn sexy and hot in this dress. I just want to rip this dress of you and push you to wall and..."

She placed her hand on his mouth to stop him.

Taani:"Poor you.I have a mission to handle now.So,will you excuse me please"

He pecked the inside of her hand which was covering his mouth.

She gasped loudly and pulled her hand back and he grinned like a fool.

Rey:"Love you"






He pulled out a small jacket to cover her shoulder injury and then took her lips in a final long kiss.

Dil tu hi bataa

Kahaan tha chhupa
Kyun aaj suni
Teri dhadkan pehli baar (x2)

She was smiling and blushing like a love-sick fool as he inter-wined his hand with her and both started moving out.

She was really confused with the her heart was thumping loudly in her chest and her stomach was turning into knots.This feeling was really new for her and she was feeling this for the first time in her life.

She started talking to other girls of group.She recognized them with their dresses only or else their faces were covered with mask.

Haan dil ne mere
Sun li tere dil ki pukaar
Dil ki pukaar...


She was talking to girls but her eyes were fixed on him only.She was confused that why he was not looking at her and then as he heard her heart's voice he turned towards her and their eyes met.

Baahon mein falak hota hai..
Baahon mein falak hota hai
Jannat ye zameen lagti hai

Kya pyaar mein ye hota hai
Har cheez haseen lagti hai


He held her waist tightly as they both were swaying on the music.She smiled on the way his one hand was moving on her back.She was really surprised with her ownself as she never before smiled like a fool.She was always the dominating one but today suddenly she wants to be the dominated one.She wants him to take all the lead and she just wants to explore this new feeling called love.

Dil ne mere
Sun li tere dil ki pukaar

Dil tu hi bataa
Kahaan tha chhupa
Kyun aaj suni
Teri dhadkan pehli baar


They finally parted their ways as she again got busy with girls but their eyes were just on each other.

~
Dress,jacket,mask pics credits to Ridzy

Hola again :)
How was the update?
This part was full of TR but next(9C) will be dishum-dishum.
Then chapter 10-Taani's confession and TR's consumation part
Epilogue.

I lost my file in which I wrote arnd 2000 words update of ILWLD :(

Part C is almost ready.But for quick update you guys need to comment.Hahhahahahhah I am evil and I know that. Muahahahahhahaha ;)


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Edited by butterfly-ravee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..
Continue soon..
Glad gang agreed to help them!
Waiting for adventure!
& dhishum dhishum! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow :)
Awesome update :)
Loved it :)
Update part B soon :)
Wanna read about the plan in action :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
taarey part was too good

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Posted: 11 years ago
Super duper awsmeee update.taarey's luv for each other is superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant update..
I feel lik m watchn A MOVIE..
very well written..!!
nw let d mission bgin..
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES
UNRES
LOVED THE WAY REY CARE FOR TAANI LOVE HER ADORE HER AND GIVE HER INNER STRENGH
LOVED TAANI'S BONDING WITH HER TEAM
WAITING FOR PART B

Edited by taani.priya1997 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww!!!
looks like rey and taani have become new romeo and juliet. soo sugary😃 kahi mujhe diabetes na ho jae *most purana doalouge*🤢
taarey scenes were so mesmerising😳
and wahi is as usual taking my beathe😃
I love it all.
update soon

p.s. smalie comment not feeling well now😕 btw!!! i can completey understand your situation cause even I am preparing for entrance tests
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome update
taarey part amezing
rey understand her soo well
gang part awesome
wow they agree to help taani nice
i love this taani
tani and her gang part awesome
update soon

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