ss:this plan unfolds like dis.. ;)))) destination(part 3 page5 updatd)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys dont know ye plan kse unfold hoga bt my predictn is like dis::
raghav didn't receive kalpi call.. n sammy uske phn ko silent kr dega.. raghav krna ni chahta silent bt he agree n jsa sammy kh rha kr deta hai/... kalpi after making many calls feels restless
kalpi: sari galti meri hi hai.. ab office m ina sunaya uske bad b raghav sr ghr tk aaye or mne muh pr drwaza bnd kr dia... phn se bat ni bnegi vo bht gussa hai.. mje unke ghr jana chaiye... jau ya na jau... pr uska dil use jane k liy khta h ki jb vo tere ghr tk aa skte hai to tu ni ja skti kya..
she locks the door n give keys to kanta n said..mai kam se bahr ja rhi hu aai aaye to de dena unko keys

kalpi at raghav home: 2 security guard : raghav sr ko bolo kalpana aayi hai
guard: madam sir ghr par nhi hai.. bahar gye hai sammy sir k sath.. pta nhi kb tk aayenge...
kalpi: koi nhi dada mai yhi wait kr leti hu unka


raghav at club restless : kalpi ka phn aa rha hoga ..kya kru...ye sammy bi na .. kalpi preshan ho rhi hogi
sammy: dont wry raghav .. chl ab ghr chalte h.. 3 gante ho gye.. ghr jakr kalpi ka phn utha lena mai nhi rokuga n smiles

kalpi: 3 gante ho gye muje ni lgta vo aayenge... ghr jana chaiye mje .. tears in her eyes ..
she leaves n thn raghav sammy enter

guard: saab 1 ladki aayi ti.. apna nam kalpana bta rhi ti
raghav: kalpi aayi ti yha
guard: ha saab or bechari ne 3 gante tk aapka wait kia yha
sammy checks phn and said: raghav kalpi ki 50 missed call hai..
raghav: sammy kya kru .. ye to over ho gya..kalpi ko kitna bura lga hoga... mne kha ta uthane de mje phn

guard: saab vo abi nikli hai..paidal hi ti jyada dur nhi gyi hogi sayad
sammy: raghav ja
raghav goes in car

kalpi: on road side at garden children r playing aankh micholi ... she goes to them n say baccho kya mai tumhare sath thda khelu.. mera mud bht off hai.. mje acha lgega
children agree ...kalpi ki aanko pe vo dupatta band dete hai n starts playing..
raghav suddenly see this .. n came out of his car .. or vha jata hai.. asks a child about kalpi... he says ki didi ka mud bht off ta isliy vo hmare sath khel rhi hai
raghav kalpi k pas jata hai.. kalpi touches him n opens her eyes... suddenly 1 smile came on her face...😳
kalpi: sir ap
raghav: tum ghr aayi ti
they r very close
kalpi: haa vo mai sorry bolne aayi ti ,.. vo sharmati hai n phiche hat jati hai.. raghav aage bdh rha h..kalpi phiche phiche ja rhi,,, kalpi k phiche ped aa jata h.. n raghav apna hath rkhta hai ped side n asks why?
kalpi: vo sir actually kal mai... she stammered bcoz raghav uske bht close ta...sir vo mai mai kal night suit me ti to aapke aage kse aati isliy chnge krna ta mje isliy darwaza bnd dia... aap ko bura lg gya..pr meri ye intensn nhi ti

raghav: to ye sorry to mje kal office m bi bol skti ti... itni bechani ku ho rhi ti ki mai gussa hu...
kalpi: vo mai mai... she doesnt knw what 2 say now...jst smileee
raghav: is smile ka kya mtlb smjhu mai
a intense eye lock...n beautiful music

kalpi vha se hath htakr bhagti hai
kalpi: ku btau n smiles n ran
raghav goes behind her
n in this they fall on each other...n rolls .kbi raghav kalpi k upr ,,kbi kalpi raghav... n after rollin n rollind😆😆😆.. kalpi is on raghav at last
again eye lock... thn kalpi uthne lgti hai bt uske bal atak jate hai,, or phr uske upr gir jati hai... raghav smiled... n thn both smiled
n they get
up ...
raghav: tumne muje jwab nhi dia
kalpi: aapko aapka jwab mila nhi ..n smiles
raghav: muje tumhare muh se sunna hai.. btao mje
kalpi: smiles thn stammer .. sir vo vo.. kal btati hu... dinner pe 😉
raghav : dinner kha?
kalpi: jha aap le chalo..
raghav : okkk thn i will pick up u.. bt kal tumhe jwab dena hoga
kalpi: smile..
raghav: chalo tumhe ghr chhod deta hu
they leaves
ps: people meant 4 each other find their way back

will i continue further ??? share ur valueble comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You should continue, it's awesome!!!👏
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Awesome plz continue 👏
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Originally posted by: Pookhi

You should continue, it's awesome!!!👏

thnxxx pooki...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lol...loved that rolling and rolling...lash we get lyk this in show too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved that tree passion thing...lol rags..ka sawal jawab for chalo.. Haha...other than that rolling scene..very good...
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

I loved that tree passion thing...lol rags..ka sawal jawab for chalo.. Haha...other than that rolling scene..very good...

thnxxx ana di
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it..interesting..!!
do read my new ragna ff what to believe..n please do like n comment..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnxxx khushi... already liked n commented on ur ff ..i love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
Plz plz continue soon

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