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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awsum am in ragnaland luvd it plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Its super cool
Well put by you..waitin for the next part :):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2

raghav and kalpi in car... both r smiling...luk at each other...n both r blushng...n giving ragna fans 220 v ka current jhatka... thn car stops at chawl.. kalpi says bye n
smiles... raghav says bye .take care..miss u... n kalpi blushes :)))))))))))))))
raghav leaves... n kamla tayi n vitthal enters... dnt knw how neetu plans backfire n they reached home safely (dont knw how left neetu plan part on cvs v concentrate on ragna)
kalpi moving upstairs with a cute smile...
kamla asks kalpi.
kamla: vo raghav baba te na?
kalpi: ha aai
kamla: vo yha kse ku?
kalpi: kch nhi aai bs mje raste me mil gye te mai apni frn k ghr se aa rhi ti(make bahana).. to mne unse sory bol dia or unhne mje drop kr dia
kamla: chalo acha hai.. tune sory bol dia
kamla vitthal go upstairs
kalpi n tayi also cming upstair..
kalpi: kash mai tujse frank hoti aayi or mai tuje bta pati ki mai itni khush ku hu.. baba ko kse bta skti raghav k bare me... aai yujse mai bol ni pati... koi nhi hai mere
sath meri happiness share krne k liy...
suddenly tayi came there and ask kalpi
tayi: why r u so happy?? luking sweet when you smile.. keep smiling
kalpi: thnku tayi..actually mai bht khush hu ..or mai kisi k sath share krna chahti hu pr mera koi frn nhi hai
tayi: i can be your frn if u want... frnz?
kalpi:thnku.. yes we can frn.. n both smiles
tayi: now tell why r u so happy..
kalpi: actually tayi..mere boss h na jo mne btaya ta bht ache hai.. vo mujse pyar krte hai.. aur vo mere sath apni lyf bitana chahte hai... mai bi unhe pasand krti hu.. jbse
vo aaye hai muje lyf bht achi lgne lg gyi hai...sb acha lgta hai..
tayi: ye to achi bat hai.. tum jiski lyf m jaogi acha hoga vo bi..hpy 4 u n ur boss too..
kalpi: actually vo unke sath kalp dinner pe jana hai
tayi: pr kal hm to picture ja rhe te sayad..
kalpi: haaa..pr n get cnfused
tayi: koi ni jao hm bad me chalenge.. thk h n go inside home
kalpi is hpyyy like he grt sm frn to tell her inner feelings
next morning : office
raghav kalpi reached office at same time.. both smiled..
both at their seats n thnkn about dinner..
after office
raghav 2 kalpi: be ready.. i will pick u at 8
kalpi: yess sir
raghav: n aj tumhe jwab dena hai.. remember
kalpi: smiled n leaves
kalpi at home: kya phnu
tayi: tum khi ja rhi ho..
kalpi: lgta h tayi bhul gyi
tayi: wear dis.. ye acha lgega..tum dinner pe ja rhi ho(ghazni ko yad aa gya 1dm)
raghav came 2 chawl bt park his car nt in front of chawl
kalpi called raghav: sr ap kha hai
raghav: mai aa gya
kalpi: dikh to nhi rhe
raghav:tumhari chawl k thda aage.. taki tumhare ristedaro se tumhe darr na lge
kalpi came... both raghav n kalpi in same dress which was shown in valentine promo
raghav: lukng beautifull
kalpi: thnxxx
raghav kalpi ko 1 bht pyari jgh le jata hai fully decorated n his hands on kalpi eyes
here valentine promo ..ditto copy(i hope evry1 see valentine promo)
kalpi raghav sits
kalpi: sr ye bht pyara hai.. thnxx
raghav: ye sb tumhare liy hi hai: thnxxx u like it...
eye lock... thda bht khana kha rhe vse kha km rhe hai dono smile jyada kr rhe hai...
music plays: tum hi ho...
raghav asks kalpi 4 dance...
kalpi gives hand...beautiful dance sequence start... o my god im in ragnaland...luv this dance sequence
raghavs pulls kalpi towards him
raghav: tum muje jwab dene wali ti
kalpi: sirrr
raghav: mera nam raghav hai..
kalpi : srrr
raghav: put his hand on her lips.. n say raghav
kalpi: raaaghav sirrr
raghav: tum nhi manogi n smiles
both smiles...
raghav: tum mje nam se kb bulaogi
kalpi: i i iii
raghav: got excited .. goes close 2 her n say iii .. aage
kalpi: smiles n stammered n music starts... raghav sir iii..mmm kh rhi ti... raghav goes more close... n kalpi close her eyes
raghav: jst stare on her eyes... n scene ..music playyy
kalpi: opens her eyes n eye lock/... sr aap mujse bht pyar krte hai...aap muje kbi chhod to nhi doge.. aap itne bde aadmi ho.. aapki lyf me bht ladkiya aayi hogi.. kya ap
muje kbii... raghav stops kalpi by puttng hand on her lips
raghav: kalpi..meri lyf me aisi koi ladki nhi aai jo mere dil ko chooo jaye,.. jisse mai bat krna chau ki mai kitna akela hu.. muje chaiye koi jo meri care kre,.. i can wait 4 u
till my last breath..bcoz i dont want any1 else... meri lyf me tumhare alawa koi ni aayega.. i promise.. plzz meri lyf me aakr mje ye khushi dedo jiske liy mai puri lyf
tadpa hu... meri lyf me mai tumhe welcum krta hu..jha mne kbi kisi ko allow nhi kia..tumhe kr rha hu...
kalpi tears in her hand n nodes: yess sir..
both smiles
raghav: thnkuuu kalpi...
kalpi: raghav sir
raghav: raghav kalpi...
kalpi: sr raghav sr se raghav pe aane tk thda tym lgega n smile n tear cme out of her eyes
raghav: wipes her tear.. i will wait 4 it.. u soon say me raghav ..:)
both smiles..
kalpi phn rings
aai: beta kb tk aayegi.. bht tym ho gya.. meeting hui nhi puri.. baba chinta kr rhe..pta hai raghav baba hai pr beta
kalpi: smiles ha aai tere raghav baba .. aa rhe h muje chhodne.. she cuts the call.. n look at raghav
raghav: aj mai bht khush hu.. or us din or bi houga jb tum raghav sr se raghav khogi...
chalo tumhe ghr chhod deta hu... thnku meri lyf me aane k liy
kalpi smiless...
raghav drops her...n say this tym.. take care... love u n smile
kalpi blushes n say.. m b sr..:)))))))))))
raghav smiles n leaves

now do comment n wait how kalpi says raghav instead of raghav sir n i love you instead of mb,,, shoot ur comment ... waitnggg:)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: myera

Its super cool
Well put by you..waitin for the next part :):)

i updated part 2 .. do check n comment plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Itz amazing...👏
continue soon...
IfritAmbrose thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
lovely..kash show mein bhi kuch aisa hi ho..continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Wow the date was so romantic...hayy loved every bit of story & also gajani madamji 😆
Beautiful story 👏👏
Loved it dear...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnkewww every1... means alot😛👍🏼
foram. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved both the updates. hope CVS show us something like this.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: foram.

loved both the updates. hope CVS show us something like this.

yeah forum.. hm post ko cvs ko send kr dete haii😆😆 taki hme unke thullu na mile..lol😆😆
thnxxx 4 appreciatng... wrkng on part3.. to make it more intense n beautifull... raghav sir to raghav... update part 3 in coming days .. hope u like them also...so if u like dis thn i can assume.. i m a gud writer😆😆😆

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