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Shiv

@balashiv15

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Posted: 11 years ago

"Creativity is the power to connect the seemingly unconnected"

These poems are written by Debarati

and were posted by her in some of the posts

i have re-posted these in a new thread so that she gets the appreciation she deserves and her work doesn't go unnoticed

"It is better to fail in originality than to succeed in imitation"

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Popat ab tak kyun hai kunwara?

sheru ki hone wali thi shadi

popat ki fir bhi na aayi bari
doggy doggy har jagah
ulti ho gayi duniya sari

kerry, koyal bulbul
sab ne isko banaya fool
puchta hai jahan sara
popat ab tak kyu hai kunwara?

ab kya kare janab, papi pet, khali dimag aur comedy ka sawal hai 😆

yun to hume bhi koi gum nahi,
na dil tuta hai na yaar rutha hai, dard ka koi alam nahi
aur poetry isliye likha karte hai janab
ki batlaye hum bhi kisi se kam nahi 😆😆

BUJHO TO JANE

Yaha bacche bade nahi hote,na bade buddhe hote aur buddhe hai naujawano se jyada jawan 😆Yaha hota hai "dayi ki maa" ke nuskon se har samasya ka samadhan.
Yaha mahila sarvagunsampan hai, bacche sarvashresth hai aur purush bhi hai mahan
bujho to jane, kaunsi hai ye nagri aur kaunsa ye hai dham ?

ye jagah hai badi nirali
sabki hai ye dekhi bhali
yaha manate hai holi, dussehra, Id, diwali
jo yaad aaye to bolo naam
kaunsi hai ye nagri aur kaunsa hai ye dham

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Edited by balashiv15 - 11 years ago

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Ahmed

@terenaam_ahm

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Posted: 11 years ago

@ Thanks- balashiv15

Debby starting writing more...👏

Edited by terenaam_ahm - 11 years ago

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Shiv

@balashiv15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Debi famous ho gayi 🤣

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Ahmed

@terenaam_ahm

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Posted: 11 years ago

chalo phir koiee asit modi sahab ko phone lagawo jaldi..

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Ahmed

@terenaam_ahm

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Posted: 11 years ago

TMKOC mein na sahi...Debby ko for sure Wah Wah Kya Baat Hai..!!! too chance Mil hi jayega...👏

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Shiv

@balashiv15

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Posted: 11 years ago

TMKOC hi theek hai 🤣

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rishabgosavi

@rishabgosavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome poems debarati u have written nicely n very creative

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Ahmed

@terenaam_ahm

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

seriously saying... she has the talent to write good poems...give it a try Debby, try writing for magazines or newspaper columns, then go on to become big...you will definitely be successful...👍🏼

god bless..!!!

Edited by terenaam_ahm - 11 years ago

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rishabgosavi

@rishabgosavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: terenaam_ahm
seriously saying... she has the talent to write good poems...give it a try Debby, try writing for magazines or newspaper columns, then go on to become big...you will definitely be successful...👍🏼

god bless..!!!

Absolutely right ahmed she should try as her writting skills r too good

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kimi

@..Kimi..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#10

@ Balashiv15, good you gathered all these poems and posted them together..otherwise nobody would have noticed them..Her hidden talent needs to be praised..and @debby, seriously you write so well, even I am ur fan..😊

Edited by ..kimaya.. - 11 years ago