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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Shukriya shukriya shukriya.. to everyone.. meri tuti futi shayri ki railgadi ko platform mil gaya hai bolo 😆

THank you shiv for this thread 😊

ab chunki ye poetry corner hai to aap sab ke liye mere fav poet ki char line likh rahi hun...🤗

Mitrata bada anmol ratan
kab use tol saka hai dhan
dharti ki to hai kya bisaat
aa jaye agar bykunth hath
usko bhi nyochawar kar dun...
(Dinkar, Rashmirathi)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: terenaam_ahm

seriously saying... she has the talent to write good poems...give it a try Debby, try writing for magazines or newspaper columns, then go on to become big...you will definitely be successful...👍🏼


god bless..!!!

Is duniya me kuch bhi yunhi nahi milta
sahilon me ruki kashtiyaan zanzeeron se ulajthi hai
mujhe rehne de beech samundar me yaara
ki mere nazrein lehron ko tarasti hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: dey.bh

Shukriya shukriya shukriya.. to everyone.. meri tuti futi shayri ki railgadi ko platform mil gaya hai bolo 😆

THank you shiv for this thread 😊

ab chunki ye poetry corner hai to aap sab ke liye mere fav poet ki char line likh rahi hun...🤗

Mitrata bada anmol ratan
kab use tol saka hai dhan
dharti ki to hai kya bisaat
aa jaye agar bykunth hath
usko bhi nyochawar kar dun...
(Dinkar, Rashmirathi)

Welcome debi!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: dey.bh

Is duniya me kuch bhi yunhi nahi milta
sahilon me ruki kashtiyaan zanzeeron se ulajthi hai
mujhe rehne de beech samundar me yaara
ki mere nazrein lehron ko tarasti hai


👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: dey.bh


Is duniya me kuch bhi yunhi nahi milta
sahilon me ruki kashtiyaan zanzeeron se ulajthi hai
mujhe rehne de beech samundar me yaara
ki mere nazrein lehron ko tarasti hai



Safar mein mushkilen aaye Too... himaat aur baadhti Jaati hai,
Koi agar raasta roke Too... jurraat aur badhti Jaati hai,

Himaat ka karein...start len...hamari dua aap ke saath hai..😊
Edited by terenaam_ahm - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Dedicated to all dukhi forunwasis. Jinka dil sodhi track se tut gaya hai ya jinka Asit ji ko dekhke tutne wala hai un sabko bhagwan sehenshakti de 😆


Itne din bite jisse milne ki aas me
usne dil tod diya muft ke bakwas me
Asit modi ji aap to rehne hi de
kya rakkha hai aise timepass me

jinhe bhi ande aur tamatar marne ho is shayari pe, kal tak dheeraj dhare Modi saab personally aayenge aur ande aur tamatar dono collect karenge.


Edited by dey.bh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: dey.bh

Dedicated to all dukhi forunwasis. Jinka dil sodhi track se tut gaya hai ya jinka Asit ji ko dekhke tutne wala hai un sabko bhagwan sehenshakti de 😆


Itne din bite jisse milne ki aas me
usne dil tod diya muft ke bakwas me
Asit modi ji aap to rehne hi de
kya rakkha hai aise timepass me

jinhe bhi ande aur tamatar marne ho is shayari pe, kal tak dheeraj dhare Modi saab personally aayenge aur ande aur tamatar dono collect karenge.


mast hai shaayari 👏
ande tamaatar kyun maarenge log
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
@debby
Seriously shayri is awesome...and @shiv,Right.. log kyun itni acchi shayri par ande tamatar marenge..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Debby even I am a fangirl.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
@ Debby

Aap...pakka hindi Hasya Kavi Sammelan mein participate kar sakti hoo...😆..Wah Wah Kya baat hai mein too pakka Seat mil jayegi aap ko...👍🏼..

seriously you can write best hindi one liners...😊..go for it
Edited by terenaam_ahm - 11 years ago

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