FF Destiny an unbeliavable but real...ch 5 pg 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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DESTINY
GUYS THIS STORY NOT AT BASED ON ANCIENT PERIOD BUT ON THE PRESENT TIME ...THIS IS A STORY OF TWO PEOPLE WHO WERE SIMPLY MADE FOR EACH OTHER ...

CHARACTER SKETCH:

JODHA : A calm and sweet girl of 9th standard who believe in being simple yet elegant. She believed that where ever you are you sould not be know as the daughter or sister of someone... you should be know as youself an individual pesonality. She always wanted everyones hapiness but her friends found her boring because she didn't like to use abusive world which according toh her friend made them cool. Her family was a very well known and reputed in the society. She can buy all she want but inspite of these she was all alone in her lyf she has no one whom she can speak her heart out .No one understood her in her family and she accepted it as a reality that no one in this whole world can understand her no one can be like her but she was wrong ...their was one

JALAL: A very handsome guy whose was in 11th standard. He showed himself a very bad boy but by heart he was so innocent that no one can imagine. Every girl in the college was flat on him but the funny thing was jodha never listened his name ever... He was very a spoild brat of a rich family . Inspite of all he was all alone. For his loneliness he started smoking and drinking ...he had more than 15 girlfriends in his life . He always enjoyed with them but never slept or kissed any girl . He left himself only for the one he would fall in love in his life ... He always thought all girls will always die to talk to him but never thought one day he will die for just one look of a girl...

CHAPTER 1 = PAGE 1 (SCROLL DOWN)
CHAPTER2 = PAGE 3
CHAPTER 3 TEASER = PAGE 5
CHAPTER 3 = PAGE 6
CHAPTER 4 = PAGE 8
CHAPTER 5= PAGE 10
GUYS SHOULD I CONTINUE THIS FF OR NOT PLEASE TELL ...YOUR OPINION MATTERS A LOT ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds interesting do continue soon and if possible do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: samy18

sounds interesting do continue soon and if possible do pm me


sure i will pm you and im working on it very soon will update the first part

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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

It was their recess time. All the student gathered in their ground area. She was also their ...with her so called group having her lunch but all lost in her own dreamland ...kab humara ye akelapan khatam hoga kanha ?Humein itna alag auron se kyun banaya ? kya Galati ki hai humne jo aap humei ye saza derahe hai ?Aisi zindagi se toh achi maut he hai...??😭

Suddenly salima , moti start teasing ruqaiyah...Hey rukaiya wo dekh tera shivam khada hai which brought jodha out of her thought . She asked rewa ye shivam hai kon maine ise aaj tak nhi dekha . Rewa replied wo dekh wo jo tree ke neeche khada hai na wahi h pointing towards shivam... Jodha looked in the direction of her finger her eyes caught a sight of a guy ... A very handsome , dashing , looking bold in his personality, he has a different spark in his eyes and charm on his face that can make any girl drool over him...Jodha to herself Ohh toh ye hai shivam... But she was unaware of the fact that it was the signal of her kanha about the solutions of he all problems about which she was complaining to him few minutes back... Yes the one she thought is shivam was none other than jalal...Yes she was looking at jalal ...

Few days passed away but jodha again had the same complain with her kanha, she had same tears in her eyes but had a fake smile on her face for 24 hrs in front of everyone . Every time her friends teased ruqu everytime jalal came in front of her eyes. Finally she was sure he is none other than shivam ...

It was the month of October. Annual sports practices were started... All her classmates walked towards greenfield she was also walking at some distance from her friends lost in her own world suddenly again she heard her friends teasing ruqaiya that dekho ruquaiya shivam apne friends ke sath wo ground mein baitha hai when she looked in the direction she felt something different... She thought to herself inmein se wo toh koi nhi h jise hum itne dino se dekhte arahe .Suddenly her eyes fall on the guy lying in the middle of that group...he was resting their all other friends surrounding him as if he is their boss or leader or some king ... Jodha to herself acha toh ye koi aur hai jise hum itne dino se dekhte arahe ...par ye hai kon???!!!!!!!... chal re pagli tujhe kya karna wo job hi ho ... and she walked away...
PRECAP: Jalal's friend suryabhan eyeing jodha...


Edited by pragatiraj - 11 years ago
samy18 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yess i m first to comment and that to first time since i joined
lovely update👏 bt too short anyways do continue soon and update a long one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: samy18

yess i m first to comment and that to first time since i joined
lovely update👏 bt too short anyways do continue soon and update a long one


k will surely follow your suggestion
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Plz plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Awesome update

Plz plz plz continue soon

will surely update tommorow...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE : all those who want pm for this ff plzzz add me to your buddy list
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE: all those who want pm for this update plzzz ad me to your buddy list

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