FF Destiny an unbeliavable but real...ch 5 pg 10 - Page 2

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CHAPTER 2

It was the day of annual sports rehearsal. Jodha didn't tried to know about jalal. He was out of her mind now. He was not more than a stranger to her. She was sitting in her division writing her dairy

Hum kaise dur karein is akelepan ko bhagwaan. Ab tohh hum hansna he bhool gaye hain. Bhool gaye hain ki hansa kaise jata h mukuraya kaise jata h humein apne pass kyun nhi bula lete bhagwaan hum jeena nhi chahte mar jana chahte hain nahi jeena is tarah ro-roke humein

Suddenly she heard some whispers from her back. " ye ladki bhi diary likh rhi " just after that someone patted jodha's shoulder .She turned back, it was bhagwaan das .Beside him sitting was suryabhan.He was continuously starring at jodha but jodha didn't gave him a damn look... Bhagwan das said aap dairy likh rahi ho jodha nodded in yes. He again said hum bhi likhte h dairy but raat mein jab mera din beet jata hai. She reply mujhe pta h dairy raat mein likhi jati hai but bhaiya har kisi ki life ek jaisi nhi hoti kisi ki puri lyf beet jati bt unke pass jyada expeiences nhi hote aur kuch log hote h jo bahut kam age mein he bahut kuch dekh lete h isiliye main ye dairy abhi likh rhi . Bhagwan das was speechless with her answer all he could say was...hmm hum smajh rhe . After jodha again started writing her dairy.

After few day of rehearsals in the recess she was standing with her friends near the railing . Beside them a little far was the jalal's group unnoticed by both of them. Jodha was talking with her friend suddenly looked towards jalal's group. Their she saw suryabhan starring at her keeping his hand on maan singh's shoulder and pointing towards jodha saying something to him. She gave him a angry look and again started talking to her friends.

After that day were ever she turns her eye she always catches suryabhan starring at her. She felt very much irritated but always ignored him thinking he is also one of her majnus who want her to be their girlfriend .

Like this days passed and it was the time of Christmas function , last day before their winter vacations.All the students were made to sit classwise. Jodha sat with her group and just behind her a stranger but a familiar guy got his seat . He no one other than jalal and beside him was suryabhan. It was first ever function of jalal's school life that he was attending. Both jalal and jodha didn't noticed each other but jodha was noticed by suryabhan . Function was going on in the mid of the function she heard some voice from back . Suryabhan was talking to jalal . He said ye ladki achi hai pointing towards jodha. Hearing this she just turned he head to her side but then decided to ignore them. She again started to enjoy the function. After some time jalal's friends started their mischiefs by throwing papers on jodha . But those papers couldn't reach to her. After 5 to 10 minutes it was enough for jalal. Arey mat karo yaar in an irritated voice. His friend respected him a lot. His one sentence was enough for them to stop.

As the function ended. Jodha felt someone patting her shoulder. She knew it was suryabhan. She gave him a deadly and irritated look and asked what?? He asked "tumhara naam kya hai" Jodha replied in cunning tone " naam janke kya karoge" and turned around. All the students were asked to leave . As she was moving suryabhan commented "naam btane mein itna kya attitude... facebook pe dhoond leinge" jodha replied dhoond lena . saying this she moved on...

Precap: first chat between jodha and jalal.

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Edited by pragatiraj - 11 years ago
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