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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Anukalu

Really. Great news.


Yes... 😉

Will start writing now...
Will post as soon as I finish 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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DON'T YOU KNOW ME? - PART TWO...

Aastha looked at Shlok as he was driving.
"Main bhi na... kuchh bhi bolti rehti hoon...!! True that Shlok hates me, but he will never try to kill me... Infact, he is always there to save me whenever I am in danger...!! He is not as bad as I always thought him to be...!!" thought Aastha.

(As shown in the episode, Shlok, Aastha and Aditi reach the hotel. They have got to stay in one room as shown. And then the manager mentions about the party. Aditi doesn't want to miss the chance to kill Aastha. So she urges Aastha to go with her to the party even if Shlok was not interested. And then Aditi leaves to check why the Manager had not still come with their baggage.)

"Aise kya dekh rahi ho?" Shlok asked Aastha. What are you looking at? "Itni Pativrata banne ka drama karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai!! Tumhein jaana hai toh tum jaa sakti ho, samjhi!!" No need to stay here for me, you can go if you want!!
Saying so Shlok went inside the room. Aastha just stared at his back.

Aditi came along with the Manager. All their baggage was kept in the room. Aditi thanked the Manager and came to Aastha.
"Arey Aastha, what happened? Why are you sad? Kya hua?" she asked Aastha.
Aastha just nodded with an incomplete smile to say "nothing".
"Oh, Shlok is not ready to come... isn't that the reason?!! Wait I will go convince him!" and Aditi went in to speak to Shlok.

Aastha wanted to stop Aditi but she couldn't. She went to the room to see what Aditi does.

Shlok was lying on the bed with eyes closed. He needed rest after driving all the way and most importantly after those efforts he had put in to save Aastha.


Aditi went to him...
"Shlok?!! Utho na! Please come with us to the party..."
Neither did Shlok open his eyes, nor did he reply.
Aastha was getting irritated to see Aditi with Shlok.
"Let him rest Aditi. Chhodo na, aisa kya hoga uss party mein... It better to take rest today...!" said Aastha.
"I really want to go and join the party Aastha..." said Aditi. "Wait! I know how to convince Shlok... After all he wont deny me!! Tumhaari baat woh shayad na maane, lekin meri baat zaroor maanega...Hain na..?" she said with her usual sweet smile.
Aastha was hurt by this. And she was more hurt when Aditi held Shlok's hand in hers and pulled him to wake him up. Shlok had no choice but to sit up.
"Please Shlok, please please please... Chalo na humaare saath?!!" Aditi pleaded.
Shlok was very angry, but he tried to control his anger. "Look, I want to take rest, I am very tired, okay. Aur main tum dono ko kahan rok raha hoon? I am not stopping you both... Go, enjoy the party!!" he said.
"Thank you Shlok!!" said Aditi, excited.


Aastha didn't want to go. And now she was green with envy seeing Aditi still holding Shlok's hand. She couldn't bear that any more. She purposely filled a glass with water and held it to Shlok...
"Shlok, thoda paani peejiye... aap ko pyaas lagi hogi na...!" she said. Drink some water, you must be thirsty!
Shlok was confused initially but then he noticed Aastha looking at his hand held by Aditi. He understood why Aastha was serving him water. He smiled to himself.
"Nahi, mujhe pyaas nahi lagi hai..." Shlok said on purpose. No, I am not thirsty. He was really enjoying the situation.
"Pee leejiye na... aap ko achha lagega!!" said Aastha. Please drink some, you will feel better!! Shlok smiled again.
He freed his hand from Aditi's and sipped on some water. Aditi was watching everything, smiling as usual.

"Okay Shlok!! You take rest..." said Aditi, "Come Aastha!"
Aastha was reluctant to go with her.
"Chalo Aastha!! Even Shlok doesn't have any problem! Come!" said Aditi as she pulled Aastha by her hand out of the room. Aastha just kept looking back at Shlok till he was out of sight.

Aditi had the torch in her hand, and her purse too. Both went through the small path to the top where the party was going on. There were many people already. Everyone were dancing to the tunes of the loud music. Many were drunk. Aditi was enjoying herself dancing. Aastha just stood there looking around. She was not at all comfortable in that environment.
"Shlok bhi humaare saath aatey toh achha hota." she thought. It would have been better if Shlok too had come with us.
"Even better! We should not have come here at all!! We should have stayed back with Shlok...!! Lekin Aditi ko kaun samjhaayega!!!" thought Aastha as she looked at Aditi enjoying.

Aastha stood at a corner. "Pata nahi mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki kuchh bura hone waala hai...!" she thought. She felt something bad was going to happen.
She noticed two men across her who were staring at her since long. She wished Shlok was there!


Just then Aditi came there, tired after dancing. Aastha was glad to see her.
"Aditi, chalo... yahan se chalte hain!" said Aastha, scared. Let's go from here.
"What Aastha! Abhi toh aaye hain!! Some more time, please..." said Aditi.
"Aditi, it is quite late now! Aur Shlok bhi humaara intezaar kar rahe honge... Let's go now!" said Aastha, trying to convince Aditi to leave that place at once.
"Achha okay baba! But I am tired. Let's drink something... and then we will leave..."
Aastha was not willing to wait there for another moment...
"I don't want anything Aditi, you have it! But please make it fast... I am not feeling good here..."
"Okay, I will come in a moment!"
Aditi went to buy a drink.

Here, Shlok couldn't sleep. He remembered that Niranjan had told him to take care of Aastha and Aditi. He felt guilty to have let the girls go to the party by themselves. He quickly got up to leave for the Party. He locked the room, put the keys in his pocket and went to the reception to ask for a torch, as the only torch they had was with Aditi and Aastha. But the Manager was not at the reception. Shlok didn't want to waste time waiting for the Manager to return. He started climbing up the path towards the party.

Aditi ordered for two glasses of orange juice. In one glass she secretly added a couple of white pills from her purse, shook the glass well and then came to Aastha with both the glasses. She offered Aastha the glass.


"Thanks Aditi, but I don't drink!" said Aastha.
"Arey baba, this is no hard drink!! It's just orange juice...!!" replied Aditi.
"Still, I don't want it Aditi..." said Aastha.
"C'mon Aastha, please give me company... And I am sure you would not want my money to go waste..." said Aditi, knowing very well that Aastha would not deny now.
Aastha took the glass reluctantly. Both enjoyed their drink.

Shlok, with great difficulty, was trying to go as fast as he could through the darkness, careful with his every step. He could hear the music in the party at some distance.

After they finished drinking,
"Chalo Aastha, let's leave...!" said Aditi, waiting for something to happen.
"Yes! Let's leave now!" said Aastha as they both began to walk back.
Suddenly Aastha stumbled with her steps. She was holding her head. Aditi knew exactly what was happening. She had been waiting for this. She smirked as Aastha fell down. With a fake concern, she ran towards Aastha...
"Aastha!! What happened? Tum theek toh ho?"
Everything was revolving around Aastha. Aastha didn't understand what was happening. "Mujhe chakkar aa raha hai..." said Aastha. I am feeling giddy. "My head is aching... Aah!"
"Aastha get up!" said Aditi holding Aastha by her arm. "Let's go there..." she said pointing to a cliff end, "wahan hawa aayegi toh tumhein achha lagega..." You will feel better in the wind.
Aastha was not in a condition to understand what Aditi was saying.

Aditi took Aastha there. There was deep valley below.
"Ab dekhti hoon tumhein kaun bachaata hai...!!" thought Aditi with an evil smile. Let me see who save you now!!

Hope you all enjoyed reading it 😉
Edited by ..optimist.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Omg! This woman! Please if you can make her loose balance and fall off the cliff. Never to be found again. But not to worry savour is on the way. Loved astha again getting jealous. And shlok drinking the water. Thanks for the lovely update.
Edited by Anukalu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
You put in a cliffhanger. Literally!
Nice that you continued with this story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: infernofyre

You put in a cliffhanger. Literally!
Nice that you continued with this story!


You put in a cliffhanger
Good one...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG Aditi how could she think that, Shlok better get there on time to save Astha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Anukalu



You put in a cliffhanger
Good one...


I aim to please! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Anukalu

Omg! This woman! Please if you can make her loose balance and fall off the cliff. Never to be found again. But not to worry savour is on the way. Loved astha again getting jealous. And shlok drinking the water. Thanks for the lovely update.


Yes, this Aditi is too much 😡😆
Yeah... Shlok on his way...
But will he reach in time????😲
Wait to see... 😉


I am very happy you liked the water scene 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: infernofyre

You put in a cliffhanger. Literally!
Nice that you continued with this story!


Hahaha 😆

Yeah... I felt like after your support 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: rbb1

OMG Aditi how could she think that, Shlok better get there on time to save Astha


Why can't she???
Her brain is full of such thoughts!!!! 😈

To know that, you will have to wait... 😉

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