NEW THRD APP KI NAZROON NE SAMZHA ..UPDATED part 30 @ 39/9th June - Page 13

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nyc and funny one dear
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APP KI NAZROON NE SAMZHA PYAAR KE KABIL MUJHE..

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Though i thought i would give small but two updates everyday...my dear readers were clearly left unsatisfied with it...so i am canceling that plan. Truly I didn't intend to give late updates...but my sinus got worse.Sorry for my late update.

Part 28

From morning,Geet felt agitated. No,actually her whole body tingled. Whenever she touched anything,the tingling would increase & she would remember the cause of it-yesterday night's events... & blush would spread allover her body...

It didn't help when Maan managed to sneak close to her for one moment while she was preparing breakfast in the kitchen & actually whisper in her ears in thick warm chocolaty voice... Geet,agar aise hamesha sharmati rahogi to main...control kaise karunga??

She had blushed more & before he could do anything more,dadi had unknowingly come to her rescue .

But she couldn't blame Maan. He was not in a better position either...she could just feel,he was feeling as restless as her.

So they avoided touching...even looking at each other,spoke to each other as less as they could. Yes,they couldn't even trust their voices...one sound & maybe they would lose their minds & do something overlooking time or place or even not caring for audience...

But for the outsiders,this romantic tension between husband & wife was translated as fight,a rather serious one.

Dadi & Anie were worried. Shalini & Nisha were ecstatic to see this ,whereas naintara was uninterested.

So my plan of telling Geet about Maan & my past worked. Nisha thought as she smirked.

Naintara,Dev kaha hai? Dadi asked to cut the silence at breakfast table.

Dadi,wo...kal unke dost Dhruv se milne gaye the na...wahi reh gaye. Thodi der mein aa jayenge.

Geet didn't like the somber expression of hers,nor the pauses in her sentence. There was definitely something wrong.

Dadi i am done. I am going to office. Bye Mom. Maan said as he hastily collected his things & left without looking even looking at Geet. Cause who knows...what he might do if he saw her now,specially when she was wearing that lovely bright red sari,adorned with nothing but equally red sindoor,chudiyan & black beaded mangasutra .


Nisha & shalini looked at one another & smirked. That's just how they wanted. The first step was a success. There was a crack in Maan-Geet's realation now,they thought.


Anie,what are you waiting for? Tumhe apna thesis nahi complete karna? Uske liye aj tumhe Library jana tha na? Geet asked in a stern tone.

Ooops!! Sorry sorry,ja rahi hoon baba. Anie though acted like she was annoyed,but actually she felt relieved. If Geet was acting like this,then everything was fine.

Aur dadi app?

Main shalini ke saath shopping ja rahi hoon.

oh!! Thik hai. Aur nisha tum?

I will stay at home.

Ok.

***

Geet where are you going?

Wo,nisha,mujhe thoda kaam tha,phir ...

Great! Then take me to ###Hall. Waise bhi koi aur car hai nahi. Tum chali jaogi to main waha jaungi kaise?

Ok,thik hai. Geet agreed because she was herself going there. Since her shoot was there today.

Nisha smirked... actually if she wanted she could have gone with dadi or anie. But she chose this time intentionally.

Kam to bahana hai geet,par asal mein main tumhe ye dikhana chahti thi ki tumhari aukat kya hai...Hmmp!! Tumhari aukat hai mere driver ki. She thought wickedly.

Waise kisse milne ja rahi ho? Geet asked as she started the car.

I am going to meet Kuhu,you know,that super famous actor??

Geet opened her mouth to answer but Nisha waved her hands.

Chodo bhi!! How will you know her! & If i can, i will meet that new girl also. Sab keh rahe hai ki she is amazing.

Geet's eyes widened in amusement. She tried to control her laugh.

Abhi tak uska chehra nahi dekh payi main. Somehow i always missd to see her face. But OH GOD!!! I got glimpses of her dresses ...what a killer style!!! Tumhe usse kuch sikhna chahiye!

Geet almost laughed out loud. Oh God!!! Anymore than this & she will burst ! But she tried to clear the misunderstanding.

Nisha suno,actually...

No actually,tum agar usse tips le bhi lo,these things have class...jaise middle class ghar se tum ayi ho...Ooops!! Sorry,i didn't mean bad ,ha geet. Nisha said actually intentionally taunting her.

Now geet was angry. She believed that no matter poor or rich,the only thing important was that person's character,not background!!! Geet hated classifications & on top of that she dared to insult her family.

So she decided to give this high & mighty thinking girl a lesson ... & all she has to do was to keep quite.

Geet smirked thinking what would be Nisha's reaction.


***

So Geet did you understand? When this line comes "JHAALAR MAIN SITARO KA" ,there will be two bits almost at the end this part & you will snap ur fingers with two times with the two bits,lights will be on with the two beats after blinking one or two times ...at that time,you will stand with a haughty expression geet. Remember,like as if you are the Goddess. You have to stand in that moment proudly,like ...challenging everyone ..Arjun said


(PLEASE DO READ CAREFULLY ARJUN'S DIRECTION,CAUSE IT WILL BE A VERY IMPORTANT & SPICY😛MOMENT IN THIS FF).

Do you understand?

Ok.

Geet had left Nisha at the entrance saying she had some work. & used the back entrance . Almost one hour passed but she was nowhere to be seen.

Well,maybe she was meeting with other artists. She was not worried about her. But there was another thing which currently occupied her mind.

When she had come to arjun he informed that today she has to do a solo song sequence, apparently Geet's character Pihu was missing her lover Rudra (maan) who had gone out of town for work after a fight between them ,thus the entrance of this song sequence..which Geet was very happy to oblige after listening to the song. The song was perfect to let out her pent up passion which was mercilessly teasing her from the morning. She could now dance off her passion...without worrying about anything or anyone.

She also had offered to do this song in one shot.

Geet can you really do it in one shot?Arjun asked a little nervous,since the choreography had a lot of jumps & turns

Don't worry,she will ...kuhu said shrugging off her shoulders.

Geet smiled & took her position.


The lights were off,except one light that outlined Geet's figure & her dress-she was dressed in a black-white harem jumpsuit with black sportshoes rimmed with white outline. But keeping her face out of sight.


The song started with Arjun's signal & so did Geet...


Main ruthiya yaar manawangi
Har chilman phoonk jalawangi
Jad patthar Ranjha pighlega
Tad main Kamli kehlawangi
Tad main Kamli kehlawangi

She moved gracefully as directed...Nisha entered the room.

Nisha couldn't see the face of the girl dancing,but her moves with the music,her swaying totally captivated her...

Mere maahiya sanam jaanam
Ki main kariya nami danam
Shab guzri te jag soya
Ni main jagiya nami danam

She swirled & grooved ,filled the place with energy with every bit freezing everyone in their spot...

Ni main Kamli Kamli
Ni main Kamli Kamli
Ni main Kamli Kamli mere yaar di

Jheel dil ko kar gaya tu
Dariya dariya mere yaara
Akhiyan de mohalle mein har shaam tera aalam
Shab guzri te jag soya
Ni main jagiya nami danam

Mere mahiya sanam jaanam
Ki main kariya nami danam
Shab guzri te jag soya
Ni main jagiya nami danam

She moved with grace,yet conveying the passion she had ...

Main toh pehan ke saafa kesariya
Jugni jogan ban jaaun
Surme de kale jadu se keh de to jog bhulaun
Ni main kamli kamli
Ni main kamli kamli..

Nisha tried to see the face of this amazing dancer.

Main tan seher di thandi shabnam ha
Gulshan ka itar churaaun
Rukh badlun toh sailaab hu main
Parbat bhi cheer dikhaaun

For now,she was sure that she was the NEW GIRL everyone was talking about. Because not only she was dressed very stylishly,her body language,her grace ,her dance spoke for her talent...

Ni main Kamli Kamli
Ni main Kamli Kamli
Ni main Kamli Kamli mere yaar di

If only now she could see her face...

Bekhudi me tu khudi ka zariya zariya mere yara

Her wish got fulfilled...The figure stopped in middle of the room & snapped her fingers twice...

Jhaalar main sitaro ka...

There the girl stood,in that illuminated light,with the most haughty expression,as if challenging everyone who dared. Nisha's eyes widened.

chand warga tu yaaram
Shab guzri te jag soya
Ni main jagiya nami danam

No...!!! This can not happen!!!! Is this GEET!!! Is that girl, in the middle of the room with the most proud expression really Geet!!!!

Mere maahiya sanam jaanam
Ki main kariya nami danam
Shab guzri te jag soya
Ni main jagiya nami danam

Ni main Kamli Kamli
Ni main Kamli Kamli
Ni main Kamli Kamli mere yaar di


Precap-Nisha's reaction😆 KUHU IN KHURANA MANSION.😈 (sorry guys,this update became more big than i thought. But I needed to show,that though she has people beside her to help her,she is now strong enough to take care of herself & her family. Don't worry,will update at 27th MARCH)

NO SIMILARITIES ARE INTENDED. PLEASE tell me how you liked (or did not like ) my use of THIS SONG

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
sangeeta33 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update waiting for poor nisha's reaction
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Posted: 11 years ago
Asum,updt soon.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor maneet i feel so bad for them
damn its not easy is it
to stop this tension sorry sexual tension between them to reduce
but they cant do much either
and those idiots thought that maneet fought
seriously thick much these guys
haiyye bechare dont even wanna talk its that bad
how they are controlling it is beyond me
but they have to try for sure
and those witches read something else in it
oh who cares about them right
hmmm whats up with naina
where is her husband dev
mujhe toh dal mein kuch kaala lag raha hai
that nisha how dare she insinuate such things about geet
well geet will show her what she can do
and yes now she doesnt need others to protect her
she can do so herself
so all that passion out in the dance
but what about maan how will he get rid of his passion i wonder
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely...loved da use of da song...its 1 of my favorites..
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan n geet trying to keep distance to hold their passion
but mu by enemies..
nisha thinking geet so cheap..
what a shock for her to see geet dancing gracefully..
superb part
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update yaar
this update is now my most fav update till now
haayee maaneet ek dusre se bat nahi kar rahe bcoz they can loose their contro but baaki sab usse jhagada samjh rahe hai
nd nisha u were praising geet only nd u don't know her
nd u tried to insult her but kya muh ki khai hai when she get to know that pihu is none other than our own Mrs GMSK
nd when she saw her dance she was thinking to be some professional but uski toh sitti bitti gul hogayi jab usne geet ko dekha
i just love the way u describe the song nd steps
Nisha aur udd hawa me apni baaki puchho ( NT Shalini nd Dev ) ke saath girne toh wale ho tum log
aur jab giroge tab itne zor se lagegi ki uth bhi nahi paoge
waiting for more
plz plz plz update soon
i can't want more to see Nisha's fadu reaction nd Kuhu entry in KM to team with dadi nd annie in mission chameleon bagao ( own made name )😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsemmm update maneet controling there desire bi... nisha isko pitne wali hoon mein
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...⭐️...Maaneet controlling their desires for each other...😛...Nisha thought to insult Geet by saying Kuhu's name but little does she know that Kuhu is Geet's friend...🤪...Geet controlled her laugh and thought to teach Kuhu a good leason...😉...Nisha was spellbound seeing the girl's dance but she was shocked to see that the graceful dancer is none other than Geet...😲...loved it...❤️❤️...eagerly waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...

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