Blast from the Past Thread #17, pg 72, epi 188 - Page 73

Originally posted by: indi52

beautiful, durga.

that moment when there was no news of di to her standing at the gate... what must those moments have been like for him... and for her to see him in that state, shaken up as she was anyway. tough life these two siblings have faced, tied thery are to each other by a womb... a sense of umbilical cord in each other... maa is in her for him and perhaps in him for her, for when they share they know, only they knew her as maa... a tie that they so need in this life to live. the understanding of this relationship always amazed and touched. perhaps that's why the rakhee was always important and the brother honoured it from within, without fuss.

your poem goes to the heart of it. if he lost her today, he'd lose faith all over again... and himself.

Originally posted by: sohara

Wonderful Durga.

You depicted Arnav's deep love for his di so beautifully!

He has become so distraught, so helpless like a little child on that day.

And you captured his feelings perfectly with your poetic lines.

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Stupendous poem. 👏 👏 👏

Love all the lines which clearly depicts Arnav's pain and agony on almost losing his only family, his sister again.

The last lines are so emotional that it brought tears in my eyes, love them

All arrogance broke, lost all courage,

Watching an injured Di, like a kid became my state ,

The little brother's dam of restrained tears broke

Once again, I almost lost my mother😭

Originally posted by: wiwy

Beautifully wriitten D!⭐️ the emotions, the feelings, the angst, its all there. The pain of losing his Di, there can be no bigger loss than that. As you rightly said at the end, he would have lost his mother all over again. and he hadnt yet recovered from losing her at the age of 14, had he?

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

👏]Beautiful Durga👏👏👏

The moment of FEAR of losing his Di, his mother, his everything, his reason of survival, his reason of striving in his life, his reason of standing up on his feet his reason of fighting with the world and within was shaking and that was making him feel nothing and I mean nothing around him.He can't lose anyone of his loving circe.His pride , ego, his abhiman has no meaning just he wants the lap of his di and her hand on him.These are the most beautiful lines Durga ...⭐️

Toota saara guroor, chooti saari himmat,

Zakhmi Di ko dekh, bachche jaisi huyi haalat,

Chote bhai ke dabey huye aansuon ka baandh toot gaya

Ek baar phir se, apni Ma ko khote khote reh gaya

Originally posted by: salooni

beautiful and pious

awesome di

Originally posted by: Katelyn

@Durga

Gorgeous poem!!! 👏 His deepest fear almost became a reality. How beautifully you've depicted this raw feelings. Awesome job! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: ..Anita

That was beautiful!!!