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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: DurgaS
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Episode 184 - 185

Khote Khote reh gaya

Ek gehra dar sach hote hote reh gaya

Ek hi jhatke mein bhavanaon mein beh gaya

Ma bankar jo mere saamne rehti thi

Aaj uss Di ko khote khote reh gaya

Na manaya koyi parv, manaya sirf ek hi tyohaar

Bhai behen ke din par diya raksha vachan ka uphaar

Kalaai mein bandha wo dhaga khulte khulte reh gaya

Diya hua mera vachan, aaj toot te toot te reh gaya

Na maani koyi baat, na suni koyi pukar,

Hamesha karta raha, badtameezi se vyavhaar,

Aaj mere badsalooki ka aayina mujhe dikh gaya,

Mere ziddi baaton ka sazaa milte milte reh gaya

Toota saara guroor, chooti saari himmat,

Zakhmi Di ko dekh, bachche jaisi huyi haalat,

Chote bhai ke dabey huye aansuon ka baandh toot gaya
Ek baar phir se, apni Ma ko khote khote reh gaya

Translation:

A deep fear almost became true

In one stroke got swept away by emotions

The one who would remain in forth as a mother

Today I almost lost that Di

Never celebrated any occasion, celebrated only one festival

On the brother-sister day, gave the promise to protect as a gift

The thread tied on the wrist almost got loosened

The promise that I had given, almost got broken

Didn't listen to any word, didn't heed to any call,

Always behaved very rudely,

Today I saw the reflection of my misbehaviour,

I almost got punished for my stubborn attitude

All arrogance broke, lost all courage,

Watching an injured Di, like a kid became my state ,

The little brother's dam of restrained tears broke

Once again, I almost lost my mother

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Beautifully wriitten D!⭐️ the emotions, the feelings, the angst, its all there. The pain of losing his Di, there can be no bigger loss than that. As you rightly said at the end, he would have lost his mother all over again. and he hadnt yet recovered from losing her at the age of 14, had he?

Edited by wiwy - 11 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#712

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Originally posted by: DurgaS
Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 184 - 185

Khote Khote reh gaya

Ek gehra dar sach hote hote reh gaya

Ek hi jhatke mein bhavanaon mein beh gaya

Ma bankar jo mere saamne rehti thi

Aaj uss Di ko khote khote reh gaya

Na manaya koyi parv, manaya sirf ek hi tyohaar

Bhai behen ke din par diya raksha vachan ka uphaar

Kalaai mein bandha wo dhaga khulte khulte reh gaya

Diya hua mera vachan, aaj toot te toot te reh gaya

Na maani koyi baat, na suni koyi pukar,

Hamesha karta raha, badtameezi se vyavhaar,

Aaj mere badsalooki ka aayina mujhe dikh gaya,

Mere ziddi baaton ka sazaa milte milte reh gaya

Toota saara guroor, chooti saari himmat,

Zakhmi Di ko dekh, bachche jaisi huyi haalat,

Chote bhai ke dabey huye aansuon ka baandh toot gaya
Ek baar phir se, apni Ma ko khote khote reh gaya

Translation:

A deep fear almost became true

In one stroke got swept away by emotions

The one who would remain in forth as a mother

Today I almost lost that Di

Never celebrated any occasion, celebrated only one festival

On the brother-sister day, gave the promise to protect as a gift

The thread tied on the wrist almost got loosened

The promise that I had given, almost got broken

Didn't listen to any word, didn't heed to any call,

Always behaved very rudely,

Today I saw the reflection of my misbehaviour,

I almost got punished for my stubborn attitude

All arrogance broke, lost all courage,

Watching an injured Di, like a kid became my state ,

The little brother's dam of restrained tears broke

Once again, I almost lost my mother

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Beautiful Durga👏👏👏

The moment of FEAR of losing his Di, his mother, his everything, his reason of survival, his reason of striving in his life, his reason of standing up on his feet his reason of fighting with the world and within was shaking and that was making him feel nothing and I mean nothing around him.He can't lose anyone of his loving circe.His pride , ego, his abhiman has no meaning just he wants the lap of his di and her hand on him.These are the most beautiful lines Durga ...⭐️

Toota saara guroor, chooti saari himmat,

Zakhmi Di ko dekh, bachche jaisi huyi haalat,

Chote bhai ke dabey huye aansuon ka baandh toot gaya

Ek baar phir se, apni Ma ko khote khote reh gaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#713

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 184 - 185

Khote Khote reh gaya

Ek gehra dar sach hote hote reh gaya

Ek hi jhatke mein bhavanaon mein beh gaya

Ma bankar jo mere saamne rehti thi

Aaj uss Di ko khote khote reh gaya 👏

Na manaya koyi parv, manaya sirf ek hi tyohaar

Bhai behen ke din par diya raksha vachan ka uphaar

Kalaai mein bandha wo dhaga khulte khulte reh gaya

Diya hua mera vachan, aaj toot te toot te reh gaya ⭐️

Na maani koyi baat, na suni koyi pukar,

Hamesha karta raha, badtameezi se vyavhaar,

Aaj mere badsalooki ka aayina mujhe dikh gaya,

Mere ziddi baaton ka sazaa milte milte reh gaya😃

Toota saara guroor, chooti saari himmat,

Zakhmi Di ko dekh, bachche jaisi huyi haalat,

Chote bhai ke dabey huye aansuon ka baandh toot gaya
Ek baar phir se, apni Ma ko khote khote reh gaya

😭❤️

Translation:

A deep fear almost became true

In one stroke got swept away by emotions

The one who would remain in forth as a mother

Today I almost lost that Di

Never celebrated any occasion, celebrated only one festival

On the brother-sister day, gave the promise to protect as a gift

The thread tied on the wrist almost got loosened

The promise that I had given, almost got broken

Didn't listen to any word, didn't heed to any call,

Always behaved very rudely,

Today I saw the reflection of my misbehaviour,

I almost got punished for my stubborn attitude

All arrogance broke, lost all courage,

Watching an injured Di, like a kid became my state ,

The little brother's dam of restrained tears broke

Once again, I almost lost my mother

DurgaS's Index

beautiful and pious

awesome di

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#714

Originally posted by: MehreenB
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"agar hum haar gaye tou hum wohi karengey jo aap kahengey..."[I will do whatever you'll say...] so he has to figure out how he will explore his own passionate desires for her when either one of em lose or win ...as it's reducing to "Har cheese har jeet keh liye nahin hoti" [Not everything is for winning or losing]
That underlined dialogue, Do you think she has to say it because my point is , she is already doing whatever he is asking or saying or even wishing for.They both want to win at any cost , by heart or by mind doesn't matter and this is the time he knows her innocent can't handle the intensity of his love "tum seh nahin paoogi" but he also wants to convey his "dil ki baat "too .That's where are we heading.Teri Meri, your and mine story in which we both are burning but can't deny it either.That is the point where he will completely dominate her and she will be in his clutch, a clutch of strong barrier of HIS love.
Thank You😊

Thnx mehr, 😊

Underlined blue is cute , really good point.I loved the way you said it.Indeed , he was taking things slowly but didn't lose a second to drive her crazy about him .She was in too as much as he was.They both want to win each other and there is no question about it.dil ki baat...labon tak pohnche ...yehi to sara khail hai...

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#715

@sohara

Thnx for reading and enjoying 165-168

Those days are the most beautiful ever.When ever I am down, these are surviving drive.Sublime Arnav, spunky Khushi and cheerful family , everything is just taking us where we wanted to be and that is where are we...after marriage everything became different but look we are still here , it means there was something.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#716

@indi😊 Thnx for reading and enjoying , it is always good to go back at this time where IPK was at the peak.They were like teenagers, so true...Trunk was mystery but when I watched over and over , it was just a box of deceits and later Khushi takes it out too and I was , now what...it means all the hidden lies in between and with others had to come out for forever and their relation supposed to be pure wheich was though in my eyes if u ask but not acc to our society norms...blah blah.Joining hands of titans was something for me too and shocked me , thrilled me...

I still have to read your 189, waiting for April break to do some real serious reading all across.

thnx😊

very nice, faiqa...

it was so good to visit sangeet again and see them in that stage of relationship. they wwere a bit like kids really.

loved your interpretation of the trunk... why it was so heavy for buaji and khushii but not for hp... lovely. the intervention of nk in carrying it... and why, also mami ji's interest and snooping connecting it all to events later was inspired.

your memory of bandagement, time, and now the dawning of new day and joining of hands, again fabulous.

there was always so much hinting, teasing, layering and crafting in ipk... despite the bad sets and costumes 😆.

the 4/7/14/2 connections you made... niiice.

there was a darkness to this episode with the scorpion trail speaking of horrors to come,though this time the sting was diverted, it was clear, a night of the scorpion will come... i am right now in that night, episode 189. 😕

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Posted: 11 years ago

#717

can i get link of it please

pm me 😳😳

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Katelyn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#718

@Durga

Gorgeous poem!!! 👏 His deepest fear almost became a reality. How beautifully you've depicted this raw feelings. Awesome job! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

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..Anita..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#719

Originally posted by: DurgaS
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<font color="#000066" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Episode 184 - 185 </font>

<div align="center"><font color="#cc0000" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Khote Khote reh gaya </font></div>

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<font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Ek gehra dar sach hote hote reh gaya </font>

<font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Ek hi jhatke mein bhavanaon mein beh gaya </font>

<font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Ma bankar jo mere saamne rehti thi </font>

<font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Aaj uss Di ko khote khote reh gaya </font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font>

<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Na manaya koyi parv, manaya sirf ek hi tyohaar </font>

<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Bhai behen ke din par diya raksha vachan ka uphaar </font>

<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Kalaai mein bandha wo dhaga khulte khulte reh gaya </font>

<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Diya hua mera vachan, aaj toot te toot te reh gaya </font>

<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font>

<font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Na maani koyi baat, na suni koyi pukar, </font>

<font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hamesha karta raha, badtameezi se vyavhaar, </font>

<font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Aaj mere badsalooki ka aayina mujhe dikh gaya, </font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#ff3366">Mere ziddi baaton ka sazaa milte milte reh gaya</font> </font></font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font>

<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Toota saara guroor, chooti saari himmat, </font>

<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Zakhmi Di ko dekh, bachche jaisi huyi haalat, </font>

<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Chote bhai ke dabey huye aansuon ka baandh toot gaya </font>
<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Ek baar phir se, apni Ma ko khote khote reh gaya </font>

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<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">A deep fear almost became true </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">In one stroke got swept away by emotions </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">The one who would remain in forth as a mother </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Today I almost lost that Di </font></div>
<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Never celebrated any occasion, celebrated only one festival </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">On the brother-sister day, gave the promise to protect as a gift </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">The thread tied on the wrist almost got loosened </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">The promise that I had given, almost got broken </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Didn't listen to any word, didn't heed to any call, </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Always behaved very rudely, </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Today I saw the reflection of my misbehaviour, </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I almost got punished for my stubborn attitude </font></div>
<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">All arrogance broke, lost all courage, </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Watching an injuredDi, like a kid became my state , </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">The little brother's dam of restrained tears broke </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Once again, I almost lost my mother</font></div>
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<div align="right"><font color="#000066" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font><font color="#000066" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">DurgaS's Index</font><font color="#000066" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font></div>
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That was beautiful!!!

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#720

Originally posted by: aarwen

Ek gehra dar sach hote hote reh gaya

Kalaai mein bandha wo dhaga khulte khulte reh gaya

Toota saara guroor, chooti saari himmat,

Ek baar phir se, apni Ma ko khote khote reh gaya

Durga this is absolutely phenomenal. You are truly gifted! Each line is perfect in the emotion it conveys.. I loved it. Thank you for writing and sharing.. some lines to show my appreciation 😊..

chote di ka ye pyaar

Aapke shabdon ne dil pe aisa kiya vaar

Apki kavita ke zariye jo aasu wo de gaya

Accha hua ye mauka hath se khote khote reh gaya