Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat
Hello! Let me begin by complimenting you for something though this is not the right place. I have seen the painting you made for Avi's Laal Ishq and it is a wonderful piece!
This is really awkward and weird because I feel so embarrassed to write this now! But I couldn't keep myself away and increase the weight of my guilt even more!
To begin with, there is absolutely no need for you to feel guilt over something so trivial. Besides, whenever a reader decides to leave their feedback for the writer, it is hardly a thing to be embarrassed about, so put those emotions aside. đLet me first begin at mid-point (weird I told you!) I have actually stopped reading at chapter 10 of 'Wired Hearts' because it was a point that so deeply affected me that I felt the lurch of Geet's agony, grief and the need of closure all in reality and knowing that my needs for closure coincides with her made me halt and take a break Ji ...đ
If I tell you that I was unable to concentrate on anything for a few days after I wrote that chapter, will you believe me? That is actually what happened. I had to distract myself greatly beforevI could return to normal so I could write further, so yes, I completely relate to you having stopped reading with that chapter.
I am only telling you this so that you may know of how brilliantly you have written this piece.đ. esp this chapter... there is no frivolous hype or sense of drama in portraying Geet's tragedy to us as your readers... you have just laid it all so bare in your own style that its really intriguing to read.
I'm humbled. Thank you so much! Now let me begin at the Beginning: 24 Chapters Prior to the above 23..
They really have not only laid a foundation to this story but strengthened my love in your writing! ... you are an amazingly gifted Writer with the talent of "Wiring" your Words to our "Hearts" ... "If Only You Saw Me" ...for me was a treat I felt I would want after passing every exam.. I call it a treat because of your generous doze of length in your chapters, the innocent portrayal of life in that phase where with friends one moulds their identity and future ..and in this case ..their Life... (Its awkward nowđ) a rare combination to get in every chapter but you delivered it all so effortlessly in your words...
Thanks, again! I don't have words to express what I am feeling at this moment!
I actually have no excuse as to why I couldn't write a comment of appreciation earlier to you!! I really don't know esp when you deserved one like every other writer does from a reader!! deep heart felt sorry Ji ..I really don't want to give reasons.. coz 24 chapters of bliss shouldn't be tainted with my lame of excuse of silence!! đ
And there is no need for an excuse at all. A writer is the happiest when their readers enjoy their writing. Feedback helps but it does not mean that a reader is bound to comment. đ
But I imagine you are more generous hearted than myself and find it in your heart to forgive me â¤ď¸... I solemnly promise to stay right with you in this journey of wired hearts though I am 23 chapters lateđđł for this too! but this is because I have not read most of them for now!
As I do.. I will get back to you.. đ
There no wrong done for me to forgive you. Please do not feel burdened at all. đAnd all I want is that you enjoy Wired Hearts as much as you enjoyed If Only You Saw Me. đNow coming to the end! .. uff.. my longness! ... I must say that to say I was heart broken is an understatement...when Maan turned back at the airport with a broken heart and just left to just say in mere whispers "If only you saw me" Coz I was wailing !! đđ
I know it was all justified esp that it was inclined in the title itself but the tragedy of it all left me so much in tears... I guess there are many of your readers who were in the same state.. but when I did I was lucky to have read it late since by then you had left a note of a sequel which promised to bring them beyond that phase and ventures them into new lives and situation but with the same simmering love and golden hearts đłâ¤ď¸ Haayyee..
so here is what I am doing ...enjoying this beginning to an end of their closure in Love.. their reunion which I swear I wished to wish on a shooting star if it was possible coz I just didn't want such a beautiful couple of your story to be ever left apart!!! *I know talk about heights of melodramatic-nesss**
I'm sorry to have made you cry and I am glad you understand why there had to be that end for IOYSM. @Bold: That has to be one of the biggest compliments I have received, that a reader could connect so much to the characters of a story. I can't remember what else I wanted to say since I have had this msg stored in my brain for so long!! but yee I will resume reading from chapter 10 onwards since I have quite recovered from that chapter.. (I just had lots of chocolates..ice creams and movie times all by myself!! to recover.. coz my friends were laughing at my plight for having such an attachment to a fictional story in their eyes!! but how do they know that any Maaneet story which would have an essence of reality and dream like yours can never remain just fictional in our minds and hearts now can it!đđđ)
Lol. I know that feeling because I go through it a lot myself. Nobody understand how I could be so affected by a story. đThank you for sharing these lovely love stories with us.. I am looking forward to catching up đ
Thank you, for leaving your feedback and letting me know my writing is enjoyed and appreciated. đ
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