Abhiya os Name It heart ( Dedicated to DFL)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Red...the smell...the color...deep wounded Red..
Intoxicating..addicting..burning..The smell of Red was all he could think about..
His hunger...Death..his power...Red was the color of His existance...
He drained the endless bodies within no time..More Red...more blood...more cries...He killed endlessly..to end his inner wrath...
Something inside him was not right...maybe this was not Red enough to satisfy his hunger he thought...He felt caged...
He killed more...he destroyed every mortal shadow...one by one...cry...screams...blood...Red...Nothing seems to work upon him..
That enraged him to no end...he was intoxicated...his search for the Red was futile...He growled in fury ...The sound was enough to scare the remaining lifes inside the darkness...
His scream grew stronger...his inner darkness deepened..he was tired...tired of himself...
"What are you?" he screamed with his visions closed in his strong palms...
"You forgot me Abhay?" the voice rang inside him like thousand bells..again and again..
A red lips with the same line started to burn him inside out..The immortal killer was dying from inside...something was killing him...
And he broke his last resistance and started to run...no limit ...no end...he was running from himself...to search the Red...but with his growing speed the voice became more louder...it was stalking him like a shadow...
"Don't leave me..you forgot me Abhay?!!" ..come back..:-Pthe voice was like a cry...cry of a pray...
"Stop It...!!" ...stop it...who are you...Stop it please..." he stopped and screamed..
"Abhay...you forgot me?"..don't go!!" the cry was painfull and dying...
The king of supernaturals..who never hesitated before killing...who never knew what pain was...was now grounded with defeat and tired of himself...he felt powerless and broken...
His inside was still burning for the Red ...he was dying for something...the cry was killing him...
"What are you!!"...where are you..."he screamed again to no one..
"I am here Abhay...inside you...beside you...you forgot me?".come back pls...
No...no...no...I don't know you...I am a killer...I only know to kill...I only know tge blood...Red...stop playing games...who are you?"
"You are Abhay...my Abhay...you forgot me? ...come back..."
Something was not right inside him...he felt it..his felt a raging pain in his head...he tried...tried to stop that pain...he held his head within his hands...he saw a face...dark orbs...dark curles...and...and those Red lips..calling his name...he saw himself ...his face closure to her..as if there lips were about to met ..he felt as if he was living a dream..
"Abhay...you forgot me...?""and the cry...the voice became more familiar to him...
his eyes widened...he uttered without knowing.."Piya"...
He felt a sudden relief...he felt new...new in this life..."Piya" ..he called again...he knew...he knew her...somehow...she was somewhere...he knew she was calling him from somewhere...
"Piya" ...where are you...I know you...I don't remember...but I know you somehow...where are you...answer me...where are you...who are you...?
"I am inside you abhay...I am Red...your search...I am Red...the color of love...your soul...name it Heart..."
"please tell me where are you? I feel like I know you...as if I belong to you..how do I know you?."Abhay searched for her desperately...
"I will come back Abhay...for you..I am here...in you...search for me...we will meet again...You have a heart...keep it safe for me...I will color it Red in love again...we will meet again..." and the voice faded away slowly living a helpless vampire behind...
"Piya..." his scream melted inside the darkness of the night...he was there...
waiting for the Red...for her...to color his inside..to Name it heart again...
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HAPPY HOLI to all of you...this was my come bsck one shot...dedicated to DFL...I always wanted in DFL abhay to be haunted by Piya's memories without knowing her fully...to search for her..to be madly in wait for her...but this was my thought ..i shared it here...its a gift in holi for you all...sorry for changing abhay's character a little...but its just my imagination...Abhiya forever...:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sonu First of all a Very Happy Holi to you My big Sister.😃 🥳 🤗

And I want to let you know,Main khud yeh tujhe request karne waali thi to start writing again!!😆I was missing to read from you😳But You seems a Mind-reader to me😲Meri request ke pehle hi tune likh liya.😳 😆

And Yes This was a Wonderful Abhiya OS.😃I never readed DFL though😆But I enjoyed this mysterious Dark OS!!😳 ❤️ 😳But Bichara Mera Abhay was left all alone to darkness💔Not Fair.💔
But I couldn't understand ki Piya kaha gayi?!😕As Maine toh DFL nahi padha hai. 😔 😭So That's why My review is so poor as I hardly knew what was happening!!Just understood Abhay's Ghajinipana aka Memoryloss...😳



P.S.:-I take this OS as My Surprise Holi Gift from you.😛 😃 🥳 😆
Edited by --Janvie-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was very nicely written...and yet... wasn't Abhay supposed to have all his memories removed? He wasn't supposed to have any emotions.

A good try all the same. Would like to read more oneshots :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

It was very nicely written...and yet... wasn't Abhay supposed to have all his memories removed? He wasn't supposed to have any emotions.

A good try all the same. Would like to read more oneshots :)



yes...It was supposed to be like that...but I always wanted Abhay tobe haunted by Piya's memories without knowing her fully...so thats d way i imagined for abhay...but it was totally my crap imagination...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Janvie--

Sonu First of all a Very Happy Holi to you My big Sister.😃 🥳 🤗

And I want to let you know,Main khud yeh tujhe request karne waali thi to start writing again!!😆I was missing to read from you😳But You seems a Mind-reader to me😲Meri request ke pehle hi tune likh liya.😳 😆

And Yes This was a Wonderful Abhiya OS.😃I never readed DFL though😆But I enjoyed this mysterious Dark OS!!😳 ❤️ 😳But Bichara Mera Abhay was left all alone to darkness💔Not Fair.💔
But I couldn't understand ki Piya kaha gayi?!😕As Maine toh DFL nahi padha hai. 😔 😭So That's why My review is so poor as I hardly knew what was happening!!Just understood Abhay's Ghajinipana aka Memoryloss...😳



P.S.:-I take this OS as My Surprise Holi Gift from you.😛 😃 🥳 😆




thnks a lot mishu...happy holi to u too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u dear. really nice imagination and a good alternative perspective 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

Thank u dear. really nice imagination and a good alternative perspective😊



thnks dishu di
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Posted: 12 years ago
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happy holi its beautiful
love to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely OS dear ..n wonderfully written! liked reading it a lot.😳
n thanks for d pm. :) keep writing more... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wahooo Lovely OS...y u r not pm me?😭Love it...I always feel Abhay pain for Love...u describe soo lovely😊

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