|MegHan OS- I Exist In Your Smile|UPDATED - Page 3

Finally... Finally... Finally... Finally
Yes, am commenting finally :P
You really need to thank your stars above :P

I liked the OS, loved the concept. It was simple and beautiful and provided insight of Megha which we never saw in show. It was good to see Megha regreting, she never regretted her deeds in show or her unfair attitude towards Mohan. And all her guilt was amazingly shown by you and her disbelief in Mohan's death. She shut herself coz they were not beliving what Megha was feeling and Nanhi trying to bring her in reality though I found Nanhi bit straight and out of her character, I could not see a broken Nanhi maybe coz its MM centric OS and Nanhi was hardly therb but Nanhi part didn't convince me. And Megha's illusion was amazing, I could visualise the scene :P Loved your language here. Was satisfied enough after long with your writing :)

Originally posted by: SunShine_A

Finally... Finally... Finally... Finally
Yes, am commenting finally :P
You really need to thank your stars above :P

I liked the OS, loved the concept. It was simple and beautiful and provided insight of Megha which we never saw in show. It was good to see Megha regreting, she never regretted her deeds in show or her unfair attitude towards Mohan. And all her guilt was amazingly shown by you and her disbelief in Mohan's death. She shut herself coz they were not beliving what Megha was feeling and Nanhi trying to bring her in reality though I found Nanhi bit straight and out of her character, I could not see a broken Nanhi maybe coz its MM centric OS and Nanhi was hardly therb but Nanhi part didn't convince me. And Megha's illusion was amazing, I could visualise the scene :P Loved your language here. Was satisfied enough after long with your writing :)

I will take care of the Nanhi thing from henceforth. Should have written a little insight on her feelings as well but this was MM OS na. And anyways except you, everyone has read my other OS of Nanhi's reaction that I wrote in the initial days of Vasu track, read it whenever you feel like:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3685484
And thanks a lot for liking the OS and my writing. 😳

omg another brilliant writeup👏
how i wish we could have got to see d these reactions at dat very moment but our creativeshurried with this track
loved how u portrayed megha's state i could imagine d whole scene👏
btw apart from this just out of curosity wat abt ur ff's i m missing d updates badly update soon
and pm me pls wenever u update just love ur writings dear😳

OMG..
Its superb...👏👍🏼..

Such a realistic approach of Megha's situation after the death of Mohan..
Made me really.😭😭😭..while reading it..

Mohan's falling scene makes me cry even now though I have watched it several times..& in my view I think this should have been a part of the show..at least isse ye pta chalta that Megha felt guilty for the past happenings..!!