An altenate storyline/ path/ scenes on BV jodis - Page 2

Originally posted by: SPuja

@bold - I agree, he always had some grey included in his character - selfish, impulsive, pampered ladesar, who was making bad choices but never wanted to undergo punishment. But still - the main culprit in the story should have been bal-vivah - making both balika vadhu and balak var as victim of this social evil.

If the creative's intention was to stretch the story by making J as negative considering his grey shades right from childhood - adultery after second marriage would have made more sense. Here they made adult choice as wrong - something that is hard to accept.

If Gauri was to remain Gudia - it is difficult to accept that she chose to remain in bigamy with Jagya knowing well about the past. An educated, confident girl would not have want to remain a second wife and this relationship will always remind her of her childhood trauma. Even if her intention was revenge - why would she destroying her own life in the process. This is one thing I would never understand - in serials - the vamp is like some joker - trying to harm others but their actions are such that it will harm themselves more. Never understood why Gauri remained in relationship with J or why Sanchi wanted to marry J.

If Gauri was actually a vamp - she should have recorded all those Jagya's love declarations and to send them to Bhairo/Sumitra/Anandi , without committing the adulterous relationship with J. She could have made J leave his wife and family and even then not married him citing her being wronged in childhood by J and his family. But in the serial - she was destroying her own life more than Anandi's or J's.

Originally posted by: Jan50

Loved all the ideas. Cvs are yet to catch up with mature audience. They are catering to

Regressive older generation making a DS very important and , masala seeking crowd by

Making villains of ordinary people.they made a heroin of a real regressive dictatorial character DS

And make many good things come out her in an unnatural fashion. Ignoring the natural

Growth , feelings and development of youngsters like Jagia, Anandi, Gauri and Ganga.

Originally posted by: SPuja

Nah, I think I got confused...my mistake..no suicide attempt...just the abandonment issue...

do agree with all ur points😊

Originally posted by: SPuja

I think the story went wrong when they made Jagya a cheater and two timing two ladies. My idea - J goes to Mumbai, is affected by the cultural shock. Meets a beautiful, confident Gauri. Likes her and compares her (in his mind) with the low educated wife. He thinks why did the elders got him married in his childhood - he envies other boys of his college - who are free to choose their life partners. Spends first few years of medical college torn between his village upbringing and city life. Ultimately confesses his feelings with Gauri and simultaneously informs his family (including Anandi) about his inability to continue the relationship which was forced on him - here they could show family repenting the child marriage and feeling guilty of destroying the life of a girl just to follow the tradition of child marriage (and forcing her to discontinue her education) and at the same time accepting the right of their son to choose his own life partner. Jagya feels guilty of leaving Anandi, but still thinks that he cannot live happily with Anandi - his heart is with Gauri. Anandi is shattered but still understand the feelings of Jagya and they remained good friends. Anandi restart her education and became a teacher and social reformer.

Originally posted by: aparnauma

Ideally it should have been this way.But with this the effects of the child marriage would not have come out strongly I feel.

It is not just his attraction for Gauri but it is also his immaturity with which he has handled the situation that has ruined the things for them both.

Jagya's immaturity was because of two reasons. One was a very young age and the other reason was the way he was babied at home by his grandmother who pampered him and the overt strictness from father to compensate the pampering.He was never allowed to grow up.This immaturity made It impossible for him to handle the issue with maturity..This was needed to drive home the message in a more powerful way.

Things became bad for both Jagya and Anandi because they were too young to handle the pressures of marriage.

Anandi did sense something was wrong with their marriage but was too young and inexperienced to handle it and that was also one of the reasons for the devastation that has happened.

If things went smoothly the message that getting children married at an age when they are too young to understand the complexities of marriage would not have come across.

Originally posted by: Hiral_Halwa

Heya😊

so the other day, I was just wondering on Ansh story and Jagan story and wondering 'what if...scenarios'

Like for Ansh, there was this very filmy idea I had for Ansh😆...after S walked out of marriage, I wished that S would be preparing to fly back to London and Ansh would have a reunion scene at the airport or something, where A would realize love for him and blast him and get him back😆 I know, its very ekta maataaish😆 no tamatars please😳

with Jagan..I wish J wouldnt have come back to Singhs and got to spend more time knowing Ganga while he was rediscovering to live his life...when he had left BH after Ansh marriage...like both of them all alone and some great intense emotional outbursts and conversations, like the ones they had on Gauri...or the one where J ended up shouting at G, when she insisted on him having milk...something on those lines...consolidating all the pain points of past and being the gaurdian of each other's secret and all - like what they couldnt share with anyone, they could share with each other

Any particular plot, way forward, alternative you'll had in mind for these two jodis or any other jodi of BV, please do share😊

Its not a thread to bash any jodi - the attempt is to enable all of us to share our expectations and thoughts/ imaginations we had for them😊 , so please do not take this post in a wrong manner...thank you😊