MayUr FF : Pyar toh hona hi tha c 32 pg 38

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Hello Guys... Me firse aayi ek nayi Story ke sath. Hopes so aap enjoy karenge...
Pyar Toh Hona hi Tha...

Index :
Concept & CS pg no : 1
Chapter1 pg no : 3
Chapter2 pg no : 6
chapter 3 pg no : 8
Chapter 4 pg no : 9
Chapter 5 pg no : 10
Chapter 6 pg no : 11
Chapter 7 pg no : 12
Chapter 8 pg no : 13
Chapter 9 pg no : 15
Chapter 10 pg no : 16
Chapter 11 pg no : 18
Chapter 12 pg no : 19
Chapter 13 pg no : 19
Chapter 14 pg no : 21
Chapter 15 pg no: 22
Chapter 16 pg no : 23
Chapter 17 pg no : 24
Chapter 18 pg no : 25
Chapter 19 pg no : 26
Chapter 20 pg no : 27
Chapter 21 pg no : 27
Chapter 22 pg no : 28
Chapter 23 pg no : 28
Chapter 24 pg no : 29
Chapter 25 pg no : 30
Chapter 26 pg no : 31
Chapter 27 pg no : 32
Chapter 28 pg no : 33
Chapter 29 pg no: 33
Chapter 30 pg no : 35
Chapter 31 pg no : 37
Chapter 32 pg no : 38
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Concept & Character Sketch :

Humare leaders :

Ms. Nupur Bhushan : 25 years ki ,Chulbuli si ladki hain. Uski ma Mrs. Shalini Bhushan ka Nupur ki bachpan mein dehant hota hain. Nupur Apne papa Mr. Sushant Bhushan ki sabse ladli aur Dulari beti hain.

Lekin wo Shadi jaisi cheezope trust nahi karti. Wo sochti hain ki Shadi karna matlab apne life ka sabse bada jugar khelne jaisa hain. Agar luck hua to achha nahi to bura.

Wo DTP (Desktop Publishing) ka course karke ek news agency me kam karti hain.

Mr. Mayank Sharma : 28 years ka Smart & handsome boy. Jo sirf sabko hasta hua dekhna chahta hain. Usne Architect ka course kiya hain. Wo apne pairo pe khud khada hona chahta hain.

Mayank bhi shadi jaisi cheezope vishwas nahi karta hain. Wo sochta hain ki Shadi yani life ki sabse badi Responsibility. Jisme khushi kam aur pareshani jada hoti hain.

Other Characters:

Sharma Family

Mr. Shekhar Sharma : Mayank's Father. The owner of the SM & Sharma Builders.

Mrs. Simmi Sharma : Mayank's Mother. Ye bahot pyari leady hain. Housewife hain.

Mr. Samrat Sharma : Mayank's brother. Sameer apne papa ko unke business mein madad karta hain.

Mrs. Gunjan Sharma : Samrat's wife.

Master Deepak : Samrat's child. Isko sab pyar se Dipu bulate hain.

Ms. Deepika :Samrat's second child. Isko sab pyarse munni bulate hain.

Bhushan Family

Mr. Shushant Bhushan : Nupur's Father. Ye ek bank me manager the. Lekin ab retired ho gaye hain.

Mr. Uday Bhushan : Nupur's brother & Mayank's friend.

aur kuch characters bad me add honge 😛 😆 😆

Concept :

In dono ko SF & BF kaise milati hain aur Shadi hone ke bad inki life kaise alag mod pe jati hain ispe ye story based hain.

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wow thanks for pm me cont soon
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Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

wow thanks for pm me cont soon

thanks n welcome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice concept. continue soon. plz uodate ur other ff kabhi saath naa choote
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congrats for your new ff
nice concept
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Originally posted by: mayuloveu

very nice concept. continue soon. plz uodate ur other ff kabhi saath naa choote

thanks
haa di uska bhi dungi lekin exams hain toh nahi likh pa rahi hu
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nyc start...cont soon...n plz pm me...
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Chapter 1

At SM (Sharma Mansion)

At Dining table

Sekhar :Subah ke 9 baj gaye hain. Abhi tak Mayank breakfast karne nahi aaya?

Simmi : Are vo kal rat ko late aaya tha. Isiliye abhi tak so raha hain.

Sekhar : Late kyun?

Simmi : Kal uska friend hain na Uday Bhushan usne US se Mayank ke liye kuch saman bhijwaya hain jo Mayank US se lana bhul gaya tha. Isiliye wo airport gaya tha rat ko.

Sekhar : Iss bachhe ka kya hone wala hain future mein kya malum?

Samrat : Kyun aap aisa kyu bol rahe hain Dad. Jo hoga achha hi hoga Mayank ka. Wo itna achhese padhkar architect ban gaya hain. To usse kya problem hain humare office me kam karne ki?

Sekhar : Kya malum beta? Lekin wo chahta hain ki use US mehi job mile. Wo India to sirf humare kehne se aaya hain na. Ye bat to tum achhi tarah jante ho.

Gunjan : Papaji aap fikar mat karo Mayank ki. Ek bar wo yaha settle hua na to fir wo US ko jane ki bat bhi nahi karega,

Sekhar , Simmi , Samrat : Kaise?

Gunjan: Aap kaise bhi karke ek bar Mayank ko office join karne ke liye boliye.

Aur wo uski idea sabko batati hain.

Simmi : Mujhe Gunjan ki bato me dam lag raha hain. Aap Mayank ko office joint karne ke liye mana lo.

Shekhar : Thik hain. I will try my level best.

Tabhi waha pe bachhe aa jate hain.

Deepika :Ye Mumma papa & Dada dadi kya decide kar rahe hain?

Deepak : Kya malum? Chalo puchte hain.

Deepika : Are chhodo na. Badon ki bato mein hum kya bolenge aur agar mumma ko gussa aaya toh!!!!

Deepak : Ha tum sahi keh rahi ho. Chalo hum Mayank chachu ke pass chalte hain.

At Mayank's bedroom

Mayank uthkar apne bed pe aisehi aramse leta rehta hain.

Bachhe : Chachu kya hum ander aaye?

Mayank : Turant uthkar: Are meri badmash company ke badmasho aa jao na. Maine aapse kitni bar kaha hain ki aap dono ko mere kamre mein aane ke liye permission lene ki koi jarurat nahi hain. Chalo aa ja o jaldi jaldi.

Mayank un dono ko apne god me bithata hain.

Deepak : Chachu aap to humse mile bhi nahi achhi tarah. Aap pichle Diwali vacation ke bad abhi aaye ho US se.

Mayank : Are me to tumse milne ke liye taras raha tha. Jab me yaha wapas Delhi aaya to mujhe Sam ne bataya ki aap dono aur bhabhi sab log babhi ke mayke gaye ho 3 din se. Aur jab aap sab aaye rat ko tab me airport gaya tha kuch saman lane ke liye.

Deepika : Ok Chachu.. Lekin aap ab humme promise karo ki aap humme chodkar kabhi nahi jaoge.

Mayank sochne lagta hain.

Deepak : Kya hua Chachu? Promise karo na..

Tabhi Gunjan unko breakfast ke liye neeche bulati hain.

Mayank : Chalo baccho. Jaldi jaldi chalo. Bahot bhuk lagi hain mujhe.

Aur wo sab neeche break fast ke liya jate hain.

At Bhushan Niwas

Sushant : Are bubli abhi tak nahi uthi? Aisa kaise possible ho sakta hain? Wo to sab kam time pe hi karti hain.

Sushant Nupur ko awaj dene keliye upar jata hain tabhi Nupur apne job pe jane ke liye taiyar hokar neeche aati hain.

Nupur : Papa pranam.

Sushant : Khush raho beta. Chalo jaldi jaldi chalo. Maine tumhare liye garma garam pakode banaye hain breakfast mein.

Nupur : Kya papa aap bhi na. Aap ne kyun banaya aaj humari maid nahi aayi kya?

Sushant : Are aayi thi. Usne tumhara tiffin bhi pack kar diya. Lekin mujhe hi aaj mood aaya pakode banane ka. Isiliye maine usse bhej diya wapas.

Nupur : Kya papa? Aap bhi na?

Sushant : To kya karu bubbli? Ab kitne din tu mere sath rehne wali hain?

Nupur : Matlab?

Sushant : Are matlab ab teri shadi bhi to karni hain na. Pehle se hi kitne sare rishtey aa rahe hain tere liye. Ab kissi na kisiko to tu pasand kare gi hi na. Aur mujhe apne damad se jaldi milna hain aur uske bat mere pote poti ko bhi to dekhna hain na.

Nupur : Papa aap bhi na phirse shuru hogaye? Aap jante ho na ki mujhko koi ladka pata nahi sakta.

Sushant : Dekh Nupur tu ye apni Hitlergiri jyada mat jharna. Warna tere rishte ke liye bahot problem ho jayegi.

Nupur : Papa chalo ab mujhe office jane ke liye der ho rahi hain.

Aur wo Sushant se bye bolkar nikal bhi jati hain.

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nice start
cont soon
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